dear Chan whatever your name is, all I am going to say is you can kiss my ass. You don't have to read my story if you didn't like it. but it is something i wrote and well frankly if your flaming it you don't have much of a life do you. and as for my grammar I know it sucks shit but and a least i have the guts to say so! but i am damn Proud to say that I try. If the world was perfect and we all had PERFECT everything. Then we would become lazy. And there is something call HARDWORK and IMPOVEMENTS.
And know I leave you saying this , GET A FUCKING LIFE!!
blundering love of a writer.
and as for said review i had it deleted so as not to upset my cousin, in which this fanfic is for.