OHHH! More reviews! I love reviews! A little Something Different thank you! Betsybugaboo I again thank you for being the first to review my first work *again all bow down! NOW!* I think having a Mary Sue at some point would be great. I am still writing the story but have it mapped out pretty well. I'll try my best! I'll give all that read this and any of my future (possibly non-existent) works a heads up; I HAVE A HARD TIME COMMITING. To ANYTHING. But I love writing this story so I will try my best. (Again: I have my invisibility cloak if you try to find me!) Feel free to review but I will cry if they're mean. I really will I'm that emotional. Anyways I've been rambling again. I do that. Okay I'm done! Promise! "Shut up? Why certainly! You don't think I'm the kind to keep blabbin'. Some people never know when to stop! When I'm told to shut up I shut up!" Haha! I love Bugs Bunny. Okay NOW you can read. :)
All original characters belong to James Patterson, as much as I wish I could have Iggy to myself.
Chapter 3 - Iggy
My eyes flitted around constantly, taking in everything around me.
I couldn't believe it! After almost 10 years, my sight was back! Well, not exactly; it was still fuzzy, like a mist covering my eyes. It had come all at once, 3 weeks ago, and I still had trouble with the thought that this was only a wonderful, horrible dream. Max's mom, Dr. Martinez, had bought me a pair of glasses, and now I COULD SEE! The glasses were held onto the back of my head with a kind of stretchy band to keep them from falling off (super geeky but oh well). I could finally see what the world looked like!
My wings, stretched out in the sun, were white at the top, then black, then black with white spots at the bottom. As we flew, I watched the others, seeing how they looked now, as compared to those precious memories I'd saved of them, back when I could see, before those stupid white coats tried to "improve my night vision". Like "Oops! We made a mistake! Oh well!", jerks.
Soon after leaving Fang's flock behind, Max had (finally!) given his previous position of her right-wing man to me. Dylan, Max's "perfect other half", flew on her left, in the third's position. Then behind us came Nudge, Gazzy (my best pal/partner in crime), Angel, and Total the talking dog (long story).
"Hey," Dylan said suddenly, breaking into my train of thought, which derailed as I turned to face him and saw his puzzled, almost worried look.
"What's that? Over there?" he pointed off into the distance. He can see things 100s of miles away! Some eyesight right?
Max hastily spun around to face towards where he was pointing.
"If it caught your eye from this distance, let's see if it's anything evil or important. It's not as if we were going anywhere in particular anyway."
So we sped off, following Max onto the new route, one that positively screamed trouble. I resumed my former staring, except now it was toward the sparkles of the ocean on the horizon, the first time I've ever seen it.
It was beautiful.
Quick note: Betsybugaboo what kind of char would Marie sue be? a romance for Dylan? Fang? Older woman? I think a young girl that Willow knew would be cool? I might take your advise but who knows?