Hope last chapter was ok. Sorry for any mistakes, i'm not a good proof reader
Me no own Naruto. But if i did *evil music plays in the background*
"Yo" demon talking
"Moron" human talking
'worthless' writting
scene change/flashback
'moron' thoughts
"Grand fireball" jutsu
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"I need to see Hokage-sama!" the jonin yelled, bursting through the door to Hokage tower. The receptionist looked at him, about to protest before his Byakugan activated "NOW!" he shouted, keeping the sleeping child as still as possible.
"What seems to be the problem Ko-san?" Sarutobi asked, looking up from the bane of all kages: paperwork.
"Her!" Ko Hyuuga almost yelled, shoving the girl onto his desk "She has more chakra than all 5 kages combined and her chakra network basically renders the Hyuuga fighting style obsolite. It looks like the doodle of a demented 2 year old and as for her gates... Attempting to close them would be useless, there are simply too many. And that hawk ain't normal either."
As Sarutobi looked over the child, he frowned. This child appeared to have been treated even worse than Naruto. He glanced t the hawk and could have sworn it was smirking as he turned back to Ko.
"Well Ko-san, there's no..." he was cut of by the sudden burst of demonic chakra that filled the room. Both men froze and turned to where the hawk had been standing. Now in its place was a tall man with slight muscles. He had jet black hair like the girls and jet black eyes but that wasn't the troubling thing: that was the pair of large black feathery wings that were on his back.
"Greetings Sartobi-san," the man spoke in a voice which oozed power but the middle-aged Hyuuga chose to ignore that.
"How dare you talk to Hokage-sama like that!" hes shouted before cowering under the killing intent the man was giving out.
"I call no one sama except for those more powerful than me. The only one curently stronger than me is my brother and he has been separated into 9 meaning he doesn't currently exist." then, he smiled at the duo "Although me to indroduce myself and my little sister. My name is Desu, also known as the no-tailed hawk, also known as the black blood demon. And that girl over there is Kira Hikaru, my ex jinchuuriki."
Sarutobi raised an eyebrow "Ex?"
Desu's grin dropped "let's cut the chase. Let's just say she was abused and raped to the point where her last drop human blood was spilled. Luckily for her, i'd already set up a fail-safe for if that happened: i turned her into a hanyo. A half demon."
Ko raised a hand "I want to ask a question," when Desu didn't object, he continued "What's with that scar? You seem to have healed all her other scars but not this one. And why's it black?" he poitned to the kanji on her collarbone.
Desu chuckled "Oh that. Well, it's black because it's made of her blood, and her blood is black. It hasn't healed because it's no ordinary scar. You know the attack the ichibi made on Suna last night?" Both men nodded "Well, his host was Kira's best friend. It seems that he's marked her as his mate. She won't remember though, the trauma has created a strong memory seal. Now," his eyes began to glow "To business. I wish you to make me and Kira jonin in your village. But when Kira turns 12, she will become a genin."
"What makes you think she's strong enough?" asked Sarutobi.
"Well," Desu grinned and brushed some hair from Kira's face "She has affinitys for all five major elements, a doujustu and kekkai genkai. Both the kekkai genkai and the doujustu make the ultimate defense and the ultimate offense. I won't say anymore, only that you should never spill her blood. I need to train her."
Ko and Sarutobi scouped their jaws off the ground. With a sigh, Sarutobi stamped the document "Agreed. Any other conditions?"
"Yes," Desu said "Until she is 10 she won't be able to handle the strain of the seal being removed. Just keep anyone with red hair and the kanji for 'love' on their forehead away from her until she is at least 10."
With a smile, the Hokage handed over 2 hiates...
6 years later, the day of the graduation test at the academy...
A figure in a black cloak walked towards the academy, a hawk following after them, cawing.
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DL: It sucked right? Oh, well, anyway if people want the next chapter i want 2 new reviews cos if people don't like the story, what's the point of continuing
