Alright then. Here is my third chappy. I had nothing else to do since no one was online when I tried to come on here tonight so figured to work on this.

I'm sorry for the long waits. This is a little bit shorter but still the same goodness factor.

Ummmm, Unfortunantly for me...I don't own Maximum Ride or its main characters. (Maximum ride herself, Fang, Nudge, Gazzy(Gassy, Gasman, Gas), Iggy, Angel, and Total. Oh yeah, and that wolf dude Ari with his Eraser companions and/or Fly Boys are along with them). James Patterson does. the lucky guy

But in other words, I do own the plot and extra characters(Snip, Avie, Susan, and little Drake).

Fang's POV

I woke up in a very unpleasant way. Getting kicked, hard, by Max. You never want to get kicked by Max. That hurts like a sun-nofa-gun.

I grabbed the side of my leg and looked at her with my brows furrowed. She was all tense and was staring at the sky and all around us as she woke everyone else in easier ways. I began to tense more than I already was and looked around too, uneasy of what was going on with Max. I then saw and heard at the same time as my drowsiness dispersed, the buzzing of Fly Boys.

I shot up from my sitting spot on the oak tree. Just my luck. We find a place to stay for the night and are already tracked by mechanical machines with no brains. I mean how hard is it to stay away from a non-heated microwave? Well, its actually really hard. Especially when they are tin cans with controlling chips and are really dang strong. Well, lets just say there dangerous. Okay?

I ran to Angel who was half awake and lifting her wing up to pull it in. She then noticed the danger we were in and snapped them in faster than she probably should of. She cringed but didn't care. She got up and looked up with a battle stance. Total heard the clunk on her skin and stood in an instant.

"Wha, wha, what's going on?" He asked before he looked up. He then started to growl furiously and jumping up and down. "Let me at 'em. Let me at 'em." He started to yell at the Fly Boys above.

In case you didn't notice, this is happening in a matter of seconds. Surprising at how time can go so fast but seem so slow when your about to be attacked. I looked at Max who was looking around the clearing after giving everybody their rude awakening to an even worst moment after the awakening has ended. Gazzy was already on 2 legs with his fists clenched with his wings hanging out of his back still.Nudge was standing right this instant and discovering what everyone else had already discovered.

We all watched them as the Fly Boys continued their annoying chant, "Kill them, kill them, kill them." I just stood and watched as they began to come right when Ari gave a signal. Then Ari just winked at Max and flew off for another job. I saw him speaking into an ear piece as he dissapeared.

I clenched my fists after he had winked at Max. He was going to get it for that. I then put my attention back on the fight as Angel screamed and Max ran past me. Great, don't tell me something has already gone wrong.

Max's POV

I ran as fast as I could to where Angel was being held by the throat by an Eraser. He threw her at me right when I got close and we both fell to the ground. I let Angel fall away from me and then went in to attack the bastard.

I weaved in far enough, dodging every move, and chopped right where his neck was. I had hit a pressure point and the dumb wolf fell to the ground like a wet noodle, going limp. I turned and ran in to help the rest as Erasers and Fly Boys attacked. I dodged and hit.

I round house kicked a Fly Boy who was coming in closer for a good hit. He became a little dented but came forward more. I then dodged his punch and, coming up behind him, shot my hand straight into a small crack in his back and pulled wires out. The flesh that had been covering the outside of his metallic body left blood on my hand. I dropped the wires and the Fly Boy fell face forward.

I looked over at Fang who was surrounded but soon won against the whole bunch. Then Nudge was fighting with one Eraser that was giving her a little bit of difficulty but she soon killed him. I then saw Iggy and Gazzy with a michevious look on their faces. There was a retreating Fly Boy and on the back of him was a ticking time bomb. Oh great, not this again. I turned away from the sight. "EVERYONE DOWN!" I yelled to the flock as the timer began to beep right when the Fly Boy reached the others. He exploded immediantly, probably disintigrated, and made almost all of the Fly Boys explode with some Flying Erasers. I felt hot metal, flesh and sometimes feathers land on me.

I then got up and saw that even though that had wiped a whole lot of them out, there was still many of them left and more was still coming to where our way was blocked again.

We all fought and got more tired as we did. If we killed one, 4 more came in its place. I saw Angel starting to get tired a lot too with Total only lightly tugging at the Fly Boys leg. I then saw an Eraser come up behind Angel, "Watch out!" I yelled to her but was too late. The Eraser slammed his fist down onto her head hard and she was knocked out. Total was flung at her and was tied up at once.

I then looked to Gazzy and Iggy who were also struggling. Then 6 others came and surrounded them. They were back to back but couldn't hold this out much longer. One Eraser got Iggys pressure point and another got Gazzy right in the gut. He winced and fell holding his gut and only barely awake, or even alive for that matter.

Fang had a huge group surrounding him up in the air. He was taken up high and had tried to fight them off but they just kept coming. I couldn't possibly help him since I had been busy ever since the fight started. I looked back at my apponent. He punched me right in the nose when I looked back. I winced but just snapped it back into place. I did little tiny exercise with my lip and nose to loosen it up.

The Eraser was grinning ear to ear and went in for another punch. I grabbed his hand in mid-air and smiled back at him. I grabbed his other hand and held it as he tried to punch me again. I grinned bigger. His grin left his face slowly and his eyes came out of happy slits. They went wide. "You know, you shouldn't hit a lady." I said and then kicked him hard in the groined. He fell growling in rage and pain and then I snapped my knee down on top his head on the way down after the kick and killed the big brute. There was a sickening crunch as his skull snapped. He fell with a stunned look on his face.

I heard a thud on the ground and turned, seeing that they had dropped Fang in an angle to where he couldn't turn. He was laying limp on the ground. I tried to get to him fast but was stabbed in the left arm on the way. I was already too weak to hold conciousness. I fell to my knees and then fell on to my face. My sight blurred and I saw no more but a very small flicker of our camp fire before utter black out.

Alright, thanks for reading. I hope it wasn't too short and that you liked it. I have been trying to take some advice about there puns that they make all of the time so, i'm trying to make it better.

Please review and tell me how i'm doing. If i should continue, if I should change anything. Please let me know.

I hoped you enjoyed!!

MaximumWarriorsParadise guys!!