Response to Reviews

Super Guest (Guest): Thanks for the suggestions! I'm doing one of them in this chapter.

Jackpot 2: Thanks for the suggestions of looping Izzy and Mike. I'm going to put them underneath some of the other contestants thought, but they'll be add next chapter at the latest. Also, thanks for the suggestion, I might use that for when Sierra is looping.

Mugheessaeed2002: To be fair, the MLP Loops is a much larger story, and the story has been around for more than a year. Previous loop stories have had character use previous abilities from other forms. For example, Pikachu from the Pokemon loops can learn fire moves because he was a charmander.

wafflestheninja (Guest): Maybe try the misc loops story. That is where series without their own series.

3.1

"No way man. I am out of here!" Duncan shouted angrily. "If you need me, I'll be waiting on the ride home!"

The Unawake competitors were shocked and gasped. Gwen rolled her eyes. The one time Duncan was Awake and for some reason, he still quits. Honestly, at least he wouldn't keep trying to get her to take him back.

The group was on the plane to Egypt. "Alright contestants, I currently have been have to deal with some issues, so Chef will be taking over for this challenge" Chris said over the PA.

Chef walked into the common area. "Alright maggots, I want all of you to listen up. The first part of the three part challenge is sky diving! You will not be given any sort of parachutes, but if you do not jump out, you will be eliminated and you will be out like Duncan and Ezekiel"

The teams walked into the first class section of the plane to see Chris curled up in a ball. "What is your problem?" Gwen asked.

"Duncan has the right to everything, my cottage, my hair gel, this plane and even my job!" Chris said crying out in fear.

"Wait, what?" Tyler asked.

"That no good punk stole my wallet and now I'm broke and everything I had is his!" Chris said crying.

"OMG! I must upgrade my blog!" Sierra ran out of the room to find any computer.

3.2

Gwen walked through the plane. "CODY! Where are you!?" Sierra asked running around the plane.

"Sierra? Is something wrong?" The goth girl asked.

"Stay out of my way New Heather, I'm not going to let you steal Cody from me" Sierra said bitterly, pushing Gwen aside.

"Can I tell you something?" Gwen asked.

"Yeah, but only if you help me look for Cody" Sierra stated.

"Okay" Gwen agreed. "Sorry about this Cody" She thought to herself.

Days later in Paris, Chris was looking over at the crying Sierra and Cody. "What is her problem?" The host asked.

"Sierra keeps mumbling and crying about something looping" Cody said.

"Did you guys know that you are on my show, and you are supposed to be doing a challenge?!" Chris said.

"Chris, have a heart" Cody stated.

"But Chris doesn't have a heart. The only person that ever loved him was Chef, but they broke up when Chris was too needy and Chef ended having a short relationship with DJ's Mama." Sierra said.

The contestants, along with Chris and Chef paused for a second after hearing this.

Confessionals

"Haha! Izzy always knew those two were so into each other" Izzy said laughing hanging from the ceiling.

"Stupid show" Chef said grumbling.

"Does that mean Chef is my father?" DJ asked confused.

"I have no words right now" Noah said shocked.

3.3 (Crossover with Percy Jackson and the Olympians)

Bridgette looked around confused. She Awoke in a classroom. She didn't know where she was or where any of her friends were. There were strange memories in her head. Apparently her name was Bridgette Jackson, even though her last name was actually Fairlie. She also had a twin brother, even though she was an only child with a single mother.

She was a dorm in upstate New York. Apparently she was in her dorm room and was a troubled kid.

She heard a knocking on the door. "Come on, it's unlocked" Bridgette called out.

The person opened the door and it was a teenager with dark jet black hair and se green eyes. "Hey sis" Percy Jackson said as he closed the door behind her.

"Um, hey I guess" Bridgette said confused and worried.

"It is great to see you Awake" Percy said.

"Yeah, I guess that it's cool I'm up. Just wondering about some things" Bridgette said.

"Kay, what is it?" Percy asked.

Bridgette did not want to tell him, for in fear that he might think she was crazy. "I don't think that I belong here" Bridgette said. "I know that I don't have any siblings, I have never ever heard of this school's name and I am pretty sure that my father is not a sea god!" Bridgette said.

"Good to see I don't have an UnAwake sibling" Percy said.

"What are you talking about!? I think that I might have been kidnapped and have my brain messed with and you are glad that I am not sleeping?" Bridgette asked somewhat in a panic.

"I guess that I have to explain the loops to you. Also, I can guess that you are not the Anchor" Percy said.

3.4

Gwen sighed. Apparently, she and Trent replaced the Zoey and Mike in this loop. "So Trent. How are things?" Gwen asked.

Cameron seemed to be Awake as he stared at the passing boat, which had Zoey making out with Duncan and Mike being hugged by Katie and Sadie.

"So, anyway, has anybody else looped since last time?" Trent asked.

"Well, nine other people..." Gwen said before Trent gasped for air.

"Did somebody say nine!?" Trent creepily asked with his pupils shaped like nines.

Confessional- NINE! NO! WE SAID LIMES!

"With Trent replacing Mike, he seems to have multiple personalities." Gwen stated. "Perfect. Let's hope they ten times saner than Mike's"

"Did somebody say ten? Do I need to get my nine knife?" Trent asked stabbing a whole through the Confessional. He pulled out a knife shaped like a knife.

"No, no no! We are all good!" Gwen said.

3.5

Gwen stepped off the boat, and the first thing that she, er he noticed was that Chris was a chick. "Yo Greg"

Gwen looked down at himself to notice that she was now a he. She looked like the fanart of Rule 63. "This is just perfect" He mumbled to himself.

3.6

Gwen looked around the camp. She thought back to when Chris introduced the competitors at the beginning of the loop. Bridgette seemed to be acting a little bit more distant.

She noticed that Bridgette was down by the beach. "So, how is it going?" Gwen asked sitting down next to the surfer girl.

"Gwen, do you ever feel like you are reliving some parts of your past?" Bridgette asked.

"Yeah, can I ask a question, though? Are you looping?" Gwen asked.

"Wait, who did you know?" Bridgette asked. "I'm the Anchor" Gwen said.

"So, has anybody else been Awake?" Bridgette asked.

"Yeah. A bunch of people so far" Gwen said.

"Can we try something later?" Bridgette asked.

Alejandro and Bridgette were about to kiss, only for the surfer girl to push the latino into a pole. "I have a boyfriend!" Bridgette said angrily. Noah, Tyler, Owen and Izzy looked at the surfer girl in fear. The are around Alejandro froze causing him to get even more stuck to the pole.

"Sorry guys. I was getting fed up with his flirting. See you guys at the finish line!" Bridgette said running.

"Quick, we'll need to try to break the ice around the pole" Noah said and Izzy jumped out to grab it.

3.7

Gwen looked around the camp. She left the campfire to look for the water. Sure, she knew that the killer going around.

"Alright, I need to be careful. The real killer is out there somewhere" Gwen said suddenly, she felt a tapping on her shoulder.

She turned around screaming. "Chill out Gwen! It's only me" Izzy said laughing. "So, do you wanna team up on the killer"

"Sure I guess." Gwen said.

"This will be like when I took down everybody in the haunted treasure hunt and fought Chef in that alien costume." Izzy said laughing happily.

"Okay, you to seem to be looping as well." Gwen said. "Looks like I need to explain it to you as well."

"Not really. I heard you in the Confessional talking about it" Izzy said laughing.

3.8

Gwen looked around the boat she was in. The Island seemed to be much further this time, and she turned around to notice Courtney looking confused, wearing pink shorts and a striped sleeveless top.

"Gwen! Did Chris do this?!" Courtney asked disgusted by the clothes she was in.

Gwen looked down to notice that she was also dressed in the same outfit. "I think that this loop is just trying to troll us" Gwen said.

"What do you mean Loop?" Courtney asked.

"I'll tell you, but I am still mad at you for the whole chart thing" Gwen said before starting to explain.

3.9

Izzy smirked as she walked down the alien set. She did not tell Gwen that she was looping, because if she did, that would be boring.

She heard Chef complaining. "Stupid Chris. Too lazy to hire some actual actors" Chef said. She heard Heather scream in terror. The crazy girl jumped into the vent and then climbed around.

"Wait! I quit!" Heather said before Chef was kicking down onto the floor. Izzy smirked as she jumped back into the vent.

Gwen and Trent ran up to the trailers, only to see Izzy already there. "All right, since Izzy got here first, Trent shall be the other team captain"

3.10

Bridgette and Geoff began to make out, they both could tell they were Awake. "Wow, do you two know each other?" Chris asked confused.

"I'm guessing that they were dating but then separated" Gwen said coming up with a quick lie that was actually true.

3:11

Cody walked up to Gwen. "Thanks Chris" Cody called out. "So Gwen. Maybe we can go for a slushie?"

"Look, the first hook up of the season" An Unawake Heather said.

"Dude, I want personal space" Gwen said grabbing Cody's arm and throwing it off of her.

"But don't you remember all the great time we had Gwen?" Cody asked.

"We can talk later, but I'm not in the mood now" Gwen said. Cody's eyes light up with joy.

"Wait, so you didn't want to confess your love for me?" Cody asked disappointed after Gwen explained to him about the loops.

"Really, that is your reaction to learning being stuck in a repeat forever, with not even death being a way out?" Gwen asked.

3.12

Gwen looked around as she woke up in the small box. She noticed that Sam was there as well.

"Of course he is unconscious" Gwen said before noticing that Sam's GameGuy flashed for a second. "What is a wallet creature? I might as well try this"

"We have two people you might want to find" Chris said revealing that Gwen and Sam were both in there. Sam being unconscious and Gwen playing the GameGuy with her hair messed up and her eyes bloodshot.

"Get out of here Chris! This is my game!" Gwen said angrily, grabbing the game like a child.

3.13

"Nine nine nine nine nine nine nine nine nine" Trent said as he slowly walked around with Staci cowering in fear. He pulled out the nine shaped knife and stabbed the fat chick in the back.

"Wait, so this loop features Trent killing everybody?" Zoey whispered Gwen, who were hiding in the Mess Hall with Cameron, Mike, Sam, Dakota, Lightning, Brick, Jo and Scott.

Gwen was currently talking to the Awake versions of Cameron and Zoey. "Yeah. Trent has killed everybody at the Playa, even Eva surprisingly." She said loudly enough for everybody to hear.

"Trent! Get away from me! I'll let you have a million dollars" Chris said screaming from outside.

"I don't want that horrible number, give me one less penny!" Trent said angrily.

"Lightning will save you money!" Lightning screamed running out of the Mess Hall to tackle Trent, only to be sliced up nine times.

"I don't know about you guys, but I am getting out of here" Jo started, noticing that Mike, Zoey, Cameron, Gwen, Sam and Dakota were not listening to her. The first four were busy talking, and the latter two were distracted by their electronics.

Jo grabbed the phone and game device and threw them out with anger. "Who had the high score of 10000000000!?" Trent screamed jumping into the hole that Jo created.

He jumped at Sam and Dakota, who both grabbed each other in fear. Jo, Brick and Scott ran away, only to trip over the bodies of B, Dawn and Anne Maria.

"Look, those people aren't worshipping nine!" Gwen said, as she Zoey, Cameron and Mike ran off in the other direction. Trent turned around and attacked the fallen Jo, Brick and Scott.

"Can somebody please explain the loop to me?" Mike asked both annoyed and confused.

3.14

Owen walked around confused at the Playa. He walked over to Gwen. "Hey Gwen, can i ask a question? Why is there no food here?" He asked. "And why are Courtney and Duncan still alive? I'm not complaining, but I am just curious." The goth girl was relaxing on the lawn chair.

"First, congrats, you are looping and stuck on repeating the entire course of the show over and over again. Also, this loop is where you go crazy and eat everybody." Gwen stated.

"Okay, quick question though. Who should I eat first?" Owen asked.

"I don't know. Maybe you should eat Staci. She might fill you up" Gwen said not caring. "And if that doesn't work, eat Katie and Sadie. And if that doesn't work, I'll start ordering delivery, you can eat the food and the guy while the rest of us stock up on more food."

"Okay then!" Owen said happily to find Staci.

3.15

Gwen screamed as she realized that she was now in the Playa. She decided that she didn't care for the money, so she quit the game. She looked around the Playa to see that Katie, Sadie, Staci, Lindsay, and Beth all were wearing the Wonder Twin's normal attire, but they had glowing dark pink eyes.

"You must totally join the cluster!" The five brainwashed girls said simultaneously.

They heard screaming and turned around to notice that Anne Maria was holding a struggling Bridgette.

"You shall become clustered! Resistance is totally pointless!" The five girls said grabbing Bridgette and dragging her inside.

"Gwen, get over here!" Courtenay whispered. She along with Eva, Sierra, Jo, Heather and Dawn were hiding.

"Where are the others!?" Gwen asked.

"They are being clustered right now" Dawn said.

They heard a roar and noticed that Dakota, Leshawna, Izzy, and Blaineley walking up to them. "Where are the guys?" Gwen asked.

"I don't know! Run!" Jo said diving into the pipe and climbing up the flow of the water.

3.16

Gwen ran as she grabbed a stick and shoved it in a deer's mouth. "Gwen! You saved me after everything I did?" Courtney asked Awake.

"Yeah, but I wish that there was some way to do something different" Gwen said angrily. Suddenly, the deer was picked up with a glowing aura.

"What is going on?" Courtney asked.

"I think that I'm doing this" Gwen said. The deer was flung onto Chris, and the host began to scream in pain.

"Yeah, either that is karma, or animals just hate Chris" Courtney said. A doe and a buck began to attack Chris, and so did a bunch of bunnies and squirrels.

"Maybe a little bit of both!"

3.1: The suggestion from Super Guest.
3.2: The suggestion from Jackpot 2. Also, duh duh duh duh! Sierra has joined the loops!
3.3: I wonder what happens when somebody Awakes in a crossover loop? Either way, duh duh duh duh! Bridgette has joined the loops!
3.4: Crazy Tent is now looping, so hide your tens. Also is a bonus for Duncan and Zoey shippers.
3.5: Rule 63 Loop. NO EXCEPTIONS!
3.6: Gwen finds out that Bridgette is looping. Also, Alejandro should have known better.
3.7: Duh duh duh duh! Izzy has joined the Loops!
3.8: Duh duh duh duh! Courtney has joined the Loops! And yes, the fact that Katie and Sadie have switched places with the two of them is a little joke on how All Stars changed their characters.
3.9: Izzy does love injuring Chef.
3.10: The two of them make out when they first were Awake in the same loop. Admit it.
3:11: Duh duh duh duh! Cody has joined the loops!
3:12: Wallet creatures are extremely addictive. Do not play if you value your life, or you like saving your money
3.13: Crazy Trent is back again, so hide your tens. Also, duh duh duh, Mike has joined the loops! Nine word sentences for the loops of Crazy Trent.
3.14: Duh duh duh duh! Owen has joined the loops! Also, this loops was inspired by the fanfic Ocrais by RedEyedWarrior.
3.15: Resistance is totally like, pointless!
3.16: Gwen used Psychic! It's super effective! Fawn used Bite! It's super effective! Chris fainted and Gwen earned 50 EXP!

Anchor

Gwen (Telekinesis, but she cannot control it, due to being a unicorn in a fused loop with Friendship is Magic)

Other Loopers (with powers, abilities or items gained from the loops)

Bridgette (Water powers from the fused loop with Percy Jackson)
Trent (Crazy Trent is an alternate personality due to replacing with Mike for one loop, Crazy Trent also is looping)

Other Loopers
Cameron, Cody, Courtney, DJ, Duncan, Geoff, Harold, Heather, Izzy, Leshawna, Lindsay, Owen, Mike, Sierra, Zoey

If you want to see a certain character loop, a certain specific loop happen, or for me to use a certain fanfiction, please let me know by reviewing what you thought of the loops in this chapter along with your requests/suggestions.