The totally amazing me is proud to give you the third chapter of this awesome, incredible fanfiction that everyone loves! (Tell me If I say too much ^^) Here we'll have the finals and the invasion, as well as the beginning of Luis attack towards Minato, let's hope our hero is lucky enough to succeed!
LET'S ROCK!
" You bastard" - demon talking / jutsu
"Let's finish this" - dialogue
" Can it get any worse? " - during flashback
" Not so easy after all " - thoughts
Disclaimer: (just because They force me to say it over and over) I don't own Naruto or Bayonetta or whatever I will use and I already used.
-Remember: Luis Umbra (Naruto)
Chapter 3: Whips, Leather and Wooden ponies...Wait! That sounded sooo wrong
Konoha may be home of hypocritical bastards with an ass-hole as a Leader, but they certainly have the Most bad-ass arena you will ever find in the whole elemental nations.
They even convert that for a Ice-skating during winter, young couples loved that particularly.
But now the place was crowded thanks to the finals of the chunnin exam with Daimyos, rich-men and all those people usually drenched in money present to see the next generations of shinobi and kunoichi, useful to choose with which village have affairs.
"Welcome to you all! I'm Genma and I'll be your proctor for the Finals!" the new proctor said to the audience, earning an enthusiastic chorus of screams.
"Will Luis Umbra and Minako Namikaze come here?" Genma asked
"Yo pretty lady! Ready to fight?" asked Luis
"I am, and you..are you ready to lose?" asked Minako
"Don't say that, we didn't even started, you can't be sure you'll win" answered the boy
"Hajime!" yelled Genma
"I'll make you scream!" said Minako attacking
"Tenten already did that, nothing new" said Luis while casually dodging the girl's attacks
"ALL THE VILLAGE KNOWS THAT YOU PERVERT! NO-ONE MANAGED TO SLEEP THAT NIGHT!" yelled Minako
"You are just jealous because it wasn't you in Tenten's place" simply said Luis
"T-T-That's n-not true!" stammered Minako, her face redder than her hair
"I bet you even touched yourself while hearing her" whispered Luis at her ear
"S-STOP IT!" the even redder girl yelled unsheathing her sword with shacking hands.
"I know you did...I can read it in your eyes" said Luis
"SHUT UP!" Minako yelled attacking him, but with her rage and embarrassment clouding her actions the result was pretty sloppy.
From the seats
"Your daughter seems confused Minato-san" said A the Raikage.
Yugito had finally forced him to take her to Konoha and he was up until now glaring at the girl ogling the boy down in the arena
"That's strange, she usually keeps her emotions in check, something must be worrying her" said Minato
"Well...if I was fighting someone able to make a woman scream like that...I would have been distracted too" said Mei Terumi, from Mist the screams were clear enough to understand the boy's name.
She was a woman other than a Kage...she has her Needs too, and she wasn't ashamed to admit that she had few Dreams about the boy that night.
"That girl is pretty flustered" said Bayonetta
"Luis-kun is verbally harassing her about last night and the event of a week ago" said Joy using her power to hear what the boy was saying
"Typical of the boys to boast about their achievement" said Jeanne glaring at Luka
"What?" asked Luka seeing as the others as well were now glaring at him, he was silently counting bills after bills of Ryous in his hands
"Where do you take all that money?" asked Rodin
"Someone, I won't say who, may have sold few photos and memorabilia of a shirt-less Luis during his training, apparently chicks love the toned muscles glistening in sweat of a bishounen looking boy" said Luka while keeping counting
"Greedy bastard" said Rodin
In the arena
"It's time for me to take out my Long, Thick and Powerful..."started Luis
Several women were on the edge of their seats, drooling with a camera in their hands
"...Weapon" finished the boy
"..." silence fell in the stands
"...I thought he was talking of his penis" said a non-identified female voice
"Behold! Orochi!" said Luis showing a white whip with a golden handle, the tip of the whip was shaped like the head of a snake with purple markings around its eyes
In the Kage section
"That snake seems familiar" said one of the masked guard around the Kazekage
"The Cursed Seal is reacting to him, what's the meaning of this?" were the thoughts of the Sound Four under their disguise
Arena
The most shocking sight however was what Luis clothes morphed into, gone was the jumpsuit in favour of a pair of black, skin-tight leather pants, a mesh shirt short enough to leave out his belly, black leather gloves with black shoes, a black leather mask over his eyes completed the outfit
"Umbra Elegance: Dominator" he said sultrily
"W-WHAT ARE YOU WEARING?!" yelled the ever redder Minako
"Just the right dress for the right occasion..." Luis said turning and giving his back to her,
"Your ass is mine" he said looking at her from his shoulder and cracking the whip
"KYYYYYAAAAH! LUIS! LUIS! LUIS! LUIS! LUIS! LUIS! LUIS!" from the audience women started screaming in ecstasy, hugging tightly their Luis plush-doll ( one of them even had the Collectors edition: Doll in scale 1:1 with over 1000 recorded phrases and "Anatomically Correct", 1250 Ryou only for pre-order, ask Luka) and taking pictures.
"Will you please fight seriously?" asked Genma as Luis was basking in a veritable rain of panties as the female part of the audience was going crazy and having orgasms at his sheer presence.
Every man was instead silently cursing his existence, since the first time with Tenten the women of the village started making comparisons between their husbands/boyfriends and Luis, pretending from them the same performances of the boy. No-one managed that of course, making their Hate even stronger.
"Sorry, I just love my fans" answered Luis laughing and winking at the audience earning louder screams and even more panties and telephone numbers from the women.
"DIIEEEE!" yelled Minako attacking him
"OOOLE!" said the boy touching the girl's head and directing her on the ground
"Enough! I won't stand this! I won't be defeated by a low class warrior such as you! Kunai kage bushin no jutsu!" yelled Minako launching a kunai and making it multiply into hundreds of copies.
The only difference was they all were tri-pronged kunais
"Will she use?..." asked A
"She is still training in the Hiraishin...but for this, her current level will be more than enough" said Minato proudly
"Hiraishin no jutsu!" said Minako disappearing in a red flash of light, jumping from one Kunai to another
"Run! Run! I love when my prey run!" said Luis smirking
"This is the end! RASENGAN!" appearing behind the boy Minako trusted the spiralling sphere of chakra forward...hitting the floor as the boy seemingly disappeared
"What? How did I miss?" asked the disbelieving girl, the action took only an instant, no human could have dodged that!
"A cute technique I have to say...but still, you are too slow for one of us Umbra members" said Luis smirking
"What? WHY?" asked Minako
"Because we are the possessors of the ancient technique known as Witch Time...in other words, time is our bitch" said Luis now near Minako, the boy's arm around the girl's neck, kissing her cheek before disappearing again.
"No way! Hiraishin no jutsu!" Minako said as the girl and Luis disappeared again
The scene helped making clear one thing: Minako was outclassed, every time she appeared from a kunai, Luis was already there, his back against hers while smirking with his arms crossed, the whole thing repeated few times before the girl stopped to jump away from the boy.
"I-Impossible" muttered Minato, shocked by the speed of the boy
"Witch Time...does this means he can stop the time? It's the only way for him to counter that technique" said A making the other Kages looking at the boy in awe
"I'll have his clan join my village, no matter what" was the general thought of the other Kages
(If you all remember, it was a scene Dragonball sometime used to show two warrior's speed)
"Did you wish to forfeit little one? No-one will be mad at you, at least you tried" taunted Luis
"RRAAAAAH!" summoning a Rasengan in each hand she sprinted in a mad dash, hitting the boy squarely in the chest and launching him away.
"STAY DOWN YOU INSOLENT BRAT! I'M MINAKO NAMIKAZE AND YOU WILL RESPECT ME!" yelled the girl forming a Rasengan bigger than her whole body and running towards him
"Oodama Rasengan!" yelled the girl running towards him
"You are a bad girl...and bad girls needs to be punished!" said Luis cracking his whip
The whip seemed to became longer, hitting the floor under the girl's feet and making it explode, launching her back
"WHHAAA!" she yelled hitting the ground, her attack fading away
"Bad girl...you shouldn't make your Master angry" Luis said hitting her with the whip
"I-AAH! I have no-AHH! Master!" the girl said trying to use her sword to defend herself from the onslaught
"No Master? Then I shall train you" Luis said in a sensual manner, again with women fainting from blood-lost
"YULCI! ( bring Forth!)" Chanted Luis with his hands in the hair, from a portal on the arena's floor a dark construct rose.
It was a somehow Infernal version of the erotic device known as "Wooden Pony" with the difference that this one was made of metal, black in colour and had a jagged back with a devilish grin on his face. (Joy torture attack)
"COME MY LITTLE PET! LET'S PLAY!" said Luis from the Pony's head while twirling a rose whip, an ominous smoke coming out from the horse nostrils
"NO! S-Stay away from me!" yelled the girl trying to run away before the boy caught her and slamming her on the horse.
The whip was around her breasts and body in a bondage fashion, tying her arms behind her back so to impede the use of jutsus, her legs open and tied firmly.
"NOW SING FOR MEEEE!" Luis said tugging the whip while pushing the girl on the spikes
Everyone was expecting the girl to scream in pain, but what they earned were her moans of pleasure.
"Nooooo! I can't do this! They...they are watching!...I can't moan...I CAN'T MOAN!...it doesn't feel good...it doesn't feel good!" the girl was chanting in her head while squirming and biting her lips.
"Come on! You can scream if you like it! It's natural to show your pleasure" said Luis tugging the whip with more strength making her scream louder in bliss.
"He...he's humiliating me!...all the village is watching while I moan like a cheap whore!...I'm the strongest...I'm the beeEEEEEEST!" the poor girls mind kept being assaulted by pleasure
"I think we can stop now, you can't fight anymore" said Luis smirking
"NOOO! Please! I'm so close!" yelled Minako, position be damned, she wanted to come!
"THEN SCREAM FOR YOUR MASTER!" yelled Luis slamming the girl on the spikes with a strong kick to her back
"AAAAAAAAAAAHHN!" screamed Minako with her body shacking wildly under the mind shattering climax before collapsing from the structure as it disappeared.
"Winner of the match: Luis Umbra!" said the masked ANBU.
During the last minutes of the fight Genma has excused himself saying he wasn't feeling good.
The truth? He was in the bathroom desperately trying to make his erection to calm down by furiously jerking off.
"WHY!...IT!...WON'T!...GO!...DOWN!...DAMMIT!" he yelled between thrusts.
"Will Sabaku no Kankurou and Tenten come down?" asked the ANBU
"Proctor I forfeit!" said Kankurou
"Winner by forfeit: Tenten!" yelled the ANBU
"Will please..."
Kage seats
"Well Minato...It seems that your daughter got...DOMINATED...hahahaha!" joked A
"I..I can't understand...how? How's that possible?" said Minato watching as his daughter in the stands was looking down ashamed.
"You shouldn't feeling guilty Minato, it only showed us that our Shinobi need to be trained to resist that kind of assault too" said Onoki ( Onoki and Minato came over their truce after the war, but still they hardly acknowledged the other talent in anything)
"I like that boy, he uses techniques never seen and very peculiar weapons" said Mei
"During the preliminaries he used a pair gloves that summon explosives cards, he is even able to use his hair to create powerful attacks...we are still repairing the tower from the damages of his fight" said the Yondaime
"Indeed he is interesting, as always Konoha is the home of powerful ninjas" said the Kazekage, after the invasion that boy will be HIS ninja, he was sure of it.
Competitors Seats
A flustered Minako was trying to understand what happened to her during that fight.
And at the pleasure she felt during her demise mostly.
"I...I liked it! I liked being dominated...Why? Why that lowly...why I want more?..." she was mentally asking herself while watching Shikamaru trying to dodge Shino's insects.
"Do you mind sharing?" Luis asked Tenten
"Why do you ask?" said Tenten, still sour that the painted boy had forfeit
"Because I think she liked it, and knowing how she act normally, she may try something to separate us...and I don't want to be forced to hurt her, no matter how much I hated her back there" answered Luis
"If I have to say...I don't like the idea of you with another woman...and isn't she your sister?"
"No more, once I accepted this powers The Shinigami transformed me in Jeanne's son"
"...I don't like this..really, I'll more gladly prefer to make her disappear and faking it as a case of KIA...but she may be a thorn in the ass if we don't do this...okay, I'll share you with her, but tonight we are gonna Dominate her together, I'll be her mistress so she will know her place" finally said Tenten.
"Okay, I'll go talk to her" said Luis
With Minako
Hugging Minako from behind Luis started whispering in her ear
"Hello, How's my little pet doing?" he asked
"Let me go" Minako said freeing herself
"You didn't liked it?"
"You-You humiliated me in front of everyone...you made me c-c-c..." she stuttered getting red
"I made you cum? Is that what you are trying to say?" she nodded
"You are so cute now, I know that giving you that scroll was the right thing to do" Luis said playfully
"T-thank you by the way" answered Minako
"If you want...Tenten has not problems sharing me...Think about it, my little pet" he said going back to the bun-haired girl
"S-sharing?...I won't fall so down to share a man...but...that feeling of dominance...the whip..."she kept thinking about it so much to not notice the white feathers that started falling on the arena.
"MINAKO-CHAN! Snap out of it!" came the voice of Kushina as she killed a Sound shinobi ready to kill her daughter
"S-Sorry mom!" answered Minako starting fighting enemy forces.
The arena
The fight between Sasuke and Gaara was interrupted as the invasion begun with the Suna siblings taking away an half transformed Gaara
"You won't get away!" said Sasuke starting pursuing the Suna Jinchuriki
"LUIS! Take this and follow that idiot! If that guy has a demon inside as Kurama said then he most be stopped" said Rodin launching a pair of roller-blade to the boy.
They were blood-red in colour with golder halo-like wheels, a nine-tailed fox adorning them with each tail of the fox being on fire, the wheels were emitting a feeble light as well as feeling hot to the touch.
"You made them like the Flame Regalia?" asked Luis
"Why not? That show is awesome...and who better than you to use a Nine-tailed fox-themed weapon?" smirked Rodin while repeatedly slapping a Suna shinobi into oblivion
"NOW GO! We'll took care of this!" yelled Jeanne using her Angel Slayer to cut enemies to ribbons and blowing them up with Col. Slade bazookas on her legs.
"Up for a bet? I bet I'll kill more people than you!" said Bayonetta morphing her Rodin bracelets into a devilish chainsaw to shred few Sound Ninjas in front of her.
"I'll win!" said Joy using her guns transformed into whips destroying her enemies
"You motha'Fuckers! I'll show you all!" yelled Jeanne charging the invading army.
The bet was on apparently.
Konoha – Main Street -
"Haku! Kimimaro! Come with me! We have a Huge-ass Tanuki and an Emo with an over-sized ego to catch!" Luis called out his friends
"I'm coming Master!" yelled Kimimaro while turning on himself, several spikes of bones out of his back, shredding Suna and Sound ninjas on his way.
"Right away! Hyoton: Reitō jigoku!" (Ice release: Frozen Hell!) said Haku stomping down with her ice-skate, summoning a ring of ice spikes impaling whoever was near her.
"Good! Now that you two had your fun we have a work to do!" said Luis guiding the trio in the near forest.
Konoha - Forest
"So that Gaara is the vessel of a demon just like you?" asked Haku
"Kurama said is the holder of the one-tailed Tanuki apparently" said Luis
"His homicidal behaviour may be caused by insomnia, did you saw his eyes" said Kimimaro
"Maybe we can ask Mom and Bayonetta to help him" said Luis
"You three, stop right there!" ordered a four-armed boy
"Who are you?" asked Kimimaro positioning himself in front of Luis
"We are the Sound Four, we used to be the personal guards of Orochimaru-sama, but now our cursed seals are reacting to that boy, why?" asked a boy with two heads pointing at Luis
"Yeah...Fatso here keeps asking that too, it's fucking annoying" said the only woman of the four
"Tayuya! you shouldn't use such a foul language...and I'M NOT FAT!" yelled the big boned guy
"So, what do you want from Master Luis?" asked Haku
"We want to know why our seals are reacting to him!" said Kidomaru
"It may be because of this" said Luis showing them the whip Orochi
"So now we have to obey you? Really?" asked Tayuya
"Since in theory I can control Orochimaru's soul maybe I can..." said Luis cracking the whip and sending a momentary jab of pain to them.
"OUCH!, YOU FUCKER!" yelled Tayuya
"Sorry...You know what...If you want you can join our clan and start a new life, what do you think?" said Luis
"Are you sure?" asked the four armed boy
"I don't think Orochimaru was such a good leader since here he was such a psycho, but I'm serious" answered Luis
"You are not fucking with us, right? You won't use me as a shitty sex-slave?" asked Tayuya
"OH Kami no! I have a girlfriend and even then, I'm not that kind of guy" said Luis
"I'm okay with that" said the Boy with two heads jumping near Luis
"Sakon! Ukon! What the fuck!" yelled the red haired girl
"You can return to Sound if ya want..." said one head
"But I'm staying here" finished the other
"I'm in...my name is Jirobo...Boss" said the big guy bowing
"We are Sakon and Ukon"
"And I am Kidomaru" said the four-armed boy
"Fuck!...Okay I'm in too...My name is Tayuya" said the red head
"Well then, welcome into the Umbra clan...I guess" said Haku
"Umbra Four...sounds cool to me" said Kidomaru
"Okay, now that we have an agreement let's go, we lose too much time!" said Luis sprinting in the forest
"ROGER!" yelled the others following him.
Konoha – Forest – Gaara's Location
Temari and Kankorou were leading wounded against a tree as Sasuke, Sakura, Kiba, Shino and Shikamaru were trying to defend themselves from a blood-lusted Gaara with half of his face and both arms transformed into a demonic representation of the Biju Shukaku's body parts.
"Gives us blood! We need to prove our existence!" the Suna boy said in a demonic voice jumping from a branch to another trying to crush an exhausted Kiba
"Shika! I can't fight anymore! Please tell me you have a plan!" said the boy holding an unconscious Akamaru in his arms while dodging another swing from Gaara's clawed hands.
"The situation is dire, my insects can't absorb his chakra, it's too dense by now" said Shino, panting heavily and bleeding after his fight with the puppet user
"I'M THINKING OKAY?! The fact that he was a Jinchuriki should have been obvious with his level of chakra, we need Minako and the Fox! Even if I hate to admit that, Gaara is out of our league by now" said Shikamaru holding his side, the fight with Temari had almost drained him and he was near chakra exhaustion, he was ready to ask Minako's help even if he personally didn't like her for her attitude.
"MOTHER WANTS BLOOD!" Gaara yelled again this time attacking the Uchiha
"Chidori!" Sasuke yelled trusting the lighting covered hand in Gaara's arm
"GRAAAH!" the Suna boy growled punching Sasuke against a tree and making the boy fall unconscious
"YOU ALL WILL DIE AND FEED MOTHER!" came the battle cry as the demonic boy charged Shikamaru, as he was near the Nara heir an Ogre wearing a dark green full-body suit with its hair covering its entire head and face tackled Gaara, using Its giant studded metal club to launch the Suna jinchuuriki far away.
"TAYUYA! PROTECT THE WOUNDED NO MATTER WHAT! Sakon, Ukon! take the girl with the fan, Kidomaru! The puppet user must be immobilized, Jirobo! You, Haku and Kimimaro will help them, you all have to stay out of harm's way, I'll take care of Gaara!" ordered Luis
"HAI MASTER!" yelled the other Umbra members with Tayuya summoning other two Ogres and positioning them in a triangular formation with both the Konoha group and the two Suna siblings in the centre.
"YOU! YOU WILL PROVE MY EXISTENCE!" yelled Gaara
"I will prove to you that being the container of a tailed beast does not make you a demon!" said Luis, the fire from his skates burning like a raging Inferno and leaving a flaring trail as he sprinted towards Gaara
"GRAAAH!" yelled Gaara trying crushing Luis
"Stay down Motherfucker!" yelled Luis kicking away the clawed hand with the heat of the skates turning the sand into glass
"BUAAAAGH!" came the scream of pain as the glass shattered leaving and heavily burned arm standing parallel to the boy's body
"What's wrong? Too hot for ya?" taunted Luis trusting his left leg forward mimicking a kick ( Regalia's taunt)
"MOTHER WILL HAVE YOUR BLOOD!" yelled Gaara summoning a sea of sand and creating and huge Body shaped like a tanuki
"HE'S LETTING THE DEMON'S OUT! TAKE EVERYONE AWAY!" ordered Luis at the others
"ROGER!" came the Umbra group answer
"Playing Possum!" said Gaara, the eyes of the sand-made Shukaku flaring to life
"I'M FREE FINALLY!" roared the demon
"What a cute living sand castle we have here" Luis said playfully
"You dare mocking me? DIE!" Shaukaku said crushing the Umbra heir under his feet
"Everyone jump me here...I feel like a Fucking celebrity!" said Luis appearing on a tree branch
"Graaaah!" roared again Shukaku trying stomping on him.
"Well...It's time to play!" said Luis passing an hand on his hair, his usual long scarf disappearing and leaving his now longer hair moving freely in the wind (serious mode)
"I'LL CRUSH YOU!" yelled Shukaku trying using his fist to grab Luis, only for said boy to jump on the fist and starting skating vertically along the arm, turning it into glass in the process
"DAMN YOU!" roared in pain Shukaku while using the other hand to try and crush the boy
"OH NO YOU DON'T!" yelled Luis turning the whip handle making the snake skin retreat so to let the Kusanagi blade out, effectively turn Orochi from a whip into a sword.
Moving in a vertical swipe, a ghostly blade came down slicing the whole arm in two (Orochi wicked wave)
"BUAAAARGH! YOU FILTHY INSECT!" roared Shukaku
"I'm taking offence in that" muttered Shino watching the scene with the others
"THIS IS GETTING BORING SHUKAKU! LET ME PRESENT YOU A FRIEND OF MINE, ZNRZA: HEKATONCHEIR! (the man of thunder: hekatoncheir!)" Yelled Luis in a body-builder pose, focusing the Kyuubi's soul onto his hair to give them the Demon's shape.
From six different portals came out six diabolical arms white in colour, five golden faces looking like demonic oxes on the tip of each finger grinning their fanged mouths, each hand as big as Shukaku's head.
"DO YOU HAVE ANYTHING TO SAY BEFORE I START?" yelled/asked Luis
"...please not in the face" answered a sweating Shukaku in a surprisingly high pitched voice.
"As you wish" said a smirking Luis as he left Kurama to take control of the situation
"Now it's my turn to have some fun!" said the demon woman in the seal sitting on the ground with a strange device on her hands that looked like a controller, the gigantic hands started pummelling Shukaku savagely as Kurama kept smashing the button with a Square on it (or an X, depending on your point of view) muttering "Gigatons bonus" from time to time.
While the six arms were beating Shukaku into a fine paste (especially focusing on the face) the other shinobi present couldn't help but look in wonder at the power Luis was manifesting, just like everyone else in Konoha since they were still pretty close to the village.
Konoha – while poor Shukaku was being used as punching bag -
Minato stood over the corpse of the defeated Kazekage as he and the other Kages watched the beating the young Umbra heir was delivering, they had felt the boy's chakra flaring as he summoned the arms.
"You know...my pride as parent and Kage didn't hurt anymore now that I know that my daughter lose her match against someone that can do That to a Biju" simply said the Yellow flash pointing at Shukaku
"No shit Minato...tell me...are you sure he is REALLY a ninja of your village?" casually asked A
"Hands down you muscle mountain! I saw him first!" yelled Mei
"Please, as if he wished to stay in your pathetic village of weaklings, Iwa would welcome him with open arms just like a member of nobility!" said Onoki
"Sorry to crush you dreams, but he is committed with a girl from MY village, not considering that he asked ME first, so he is more mine than yours!" answered Minato watching as the arms were now using Shukaku as the ball in a volley match they were playing by themselves
"We have pretty girls too, you know?" said Onoki
"My Yugito had already showed interest in him and she is the prettiest girl in Kumo!" said A
"I'm not too old, so I have the Older woman vantage on those brats" said Mei striking a sexy pose
"I can always present him my daughter, two women would signify a faster growing of his almost deceased clan...and he would be easier to control" said Minato to himself
While the eminent Kages were bickering like kids, Bayonetta had summoned the huge raven Malphas, the multi-eyed bird started swallowing whole a snake summon called by the Sound ninjas.
"It looks like my son is kicking some demon's ass! I can finally be a proud mother HA!" said Jeanne from a pillar of death invaders while watching his son fighting
"He sexually dominated a girl in front of a crowd of people coming from the whole nation and keep making his girlfriend scream so loud to raise the dead and STILL she wasn't proud of him?" asked aloud Joy sitting on HER mountain of death Shinobi
"OH! SHUT UP JOY!" yelled Jeanne throwing a body to her
"HOW DARE YOU!" yelled Joy throwing a body herself.
The scene could have been funny if not for the fact that they were throwing dead bodies at each other. ( I'm sorry if someone found this a little too much, let me know if that's the case)
Konoha – forest – back to the demonic beating -
"STOP! PLEASE STOP! YOU WON...I'LL BE GOOD JUST LET ME GOOO!" whined Shukaku while he was being used as a jumping rope with an hand holding his head and another his tail, the other four were standing on two fingers mimicking the act of jumping.
"COME ON! WE JUST STARTED! I KNOW SOO MANY GAMES WE CAN DO TOGETHER!" yelled Luis with a dark grin on his face.
"YEEEEP!" yelled the Tanuki as he reverted the transformation letting a baffled Gaara to fall down
"L-let me go!" yelled a frantic Gaara trying scrambling away from the young wizard
"I know who you are Gaara, I know you are the vessel of the one-tailed Biju Shukaku, I can help you" said Luis
"Y-You? Helping me?" asked Gaara
"Me and my clan can fix your seal, so you will finally be able to sleep" said Luis
"W-why will you help me?" asked again Gaara
"Because you are not alone, remember, no-one is really alone in this world, somewhere there are friends that will be ready to do anything in order to help you, you have your brother and sister that still loves you even after all your threats of death..and I'm here too if you want" he said smiling
"GAARA!" yelled Temari and Kankurou helping their little brother to stand up
"Temari...Kankorou...I'm...I'm sorry" finally said the boy
"Don't worry Gaara, it's all okay" said Temari
"Okay let's go, my mother will help you and then you can answer few question I'm sure the Hokage will have for you three" said Luis signalling the Umbra Four and his team to escort them to the Umbra clan house
Konoha - Umbra clan compound -
"This place is nice" said Tayuya watching around
"Please don't wander too much, ok Gaara please lay down here" said Luis pointing a table to Gaara
"Why don't you try fixing it by yourself?" asked Jeanne
"It may be a bad Idea, if I am wrong I can kill him or worst, freeing Shukaku" answered Luis
"I...trust you" said Gaara
"...Okay then" said Luis
"WAIT BOSS!" said Sakon
The four of them stood at the four corners of the table, encasing the two of them in a purple barrier.
"Like this if Gaara-san goes on a rampage we may be able to slow him down enough for the others to act" said Jirobo
"Thank you, my friends" said Luis, he couldn't see their faces by now, but the four of them were smiling at being considered "friends".
The seal was similar to his own, but instead of filtering the Biju's chakra so to slowly add it to Gaara's chakra system it was created as an open link, making the boy access directly Shukaku, but in exchange making extremely easy for the demon to influence the boy.
"If I have to follow Minato's knowledge...here it should be like this..." muttered Luis adding few spirals here and there and re-writing- a portion of the containment section of the seal, finally, in a spark of inspiration, he added a personal variation to the seal.
"It should be okay now, let's try...Fujin!" Luis yelled the last part, hitting Gaara's stomach with his hand coated in chakra, the seal glowing blue for few seconds as the Suna boy started trashing before setting down, finally asleep.
"Okay...I can't see a psychotic Shukaku trying to murder us all...I think you did it!" said Kankorou from behind the couch
"Let's take you to the Hokage for questioning, I take Gaara" said Luis hosting the boy on his shoulders
"We'll accompany you, Boss, we'll get registered as Konoha's shinobi...and your personal guards" said Kidomaru
"You really like this bodyguard thing" said Haku
"It's kinda cool, we only need a pair of sun-glasses to be even more awesome" answered Tayuya.
Konoha – Hokage Office -
"The seal on the Suna boy is a good one if I have to say" said Jiraya while checking on the still sleeping Gaara
"So Luis, you are interested in Seals?" asked Minato
"I like to consider myself a Master in training" answered Luis
"Look at this! He even managed to create a variation where the Biju's conscience is sent deep in the vessel sub-conscious, but creating a fast route for the chakra so to leave the boy's sand manipulation unchanged...he may even become better than you Minato" joked Jiraya
"It could be amazing, a new generation of seal masters is something always well accepted" said Minato, secretly seething at the boy, HE was a seal master and NO-ONE will surpass him...EVER!
"Well...since you three Team Durga not only stopped an enemy from unleash a terrible beast upon us, saving several clan heirs from certain death in the process, but you even found four people to join our village, I think that the whole clan needs a retribuition" said Minato smiling
"Don't forget the boy's family...I don't know what kind of summons they used, but I saw the glasses-wearing one summon a Raven that swallowed a three-headed snake whole, and his mother, sister and instructor had single-handedly decimated half the enemy forces...even that Luka guy saved several civilians by taking them to a safe place" said Jiraya, recalling the evening events
"You said they were civilians" said Minato glaring at the boy
"I said that I was the first one taking the ninja career, the Umbra clan is a civilian clan holder of ancient techniques used during religious celebrations, but in order to defend themselves the elders learned to use them for fighting" answered Luis
"I understand...but just because I am curious...what was that summon with the six arms?" asked the Hokage
"That's Hekatoncheir, he is a six-armed demon so strong to reduce mountains to dust...even if a little dumb, he was usually summoned during festivities dedicated to particularly strong warriors" lied Luis
"There is any possibility for us to learn summoning them?" asked Minato
"Unfortunately not, you need to be an Umbra clan member and receive the teachings since youth and even then, only one over ten scholars is choosen to take on the final ritual...and that has an HIGH mortality rate" answered Luis
"How high?" asked Jiraya
"Nine time out of ten the boy taking it dies, you have to take on a challenge from each demon and survive"
"There are others?" asked Minato
"There are eight of them, I managed to pass all of their challenges and obtaining the right to be the clan head after my aunt Bayonetta, her and my mother Jeanne can use them too" answered Luis
"Good, it's a pity that we can't use them, but we can't risk so many lives in order to achieve that power, right Minato?" said Jiraya
"Yeah...I guess you are right" answered the Yondaime, angry that such strong techniques were out of grasp, but risking Minako's life for them was out of the question.
"You can go now, I'll have few people helping you in creating a bigger compound, your clan is growing and the one you are using is already too small, I'll prepare the needed paper-work so you will be able to build new sections in your property" said Minato
"Thank you, Hokage-sama" said the Umbra heir plus Team and Guards bowing to the blond Leader
Konoha – streets -
"So he is the Jerk" asked Tayuya once the group left the tower
"Exactly" answered Luis
"I can't wait to see his face once he discover that his son is the one kicking more ass than him" said Kidomaru
"It will be priceless, Boss I'm sure you will manage" said Jirobo
"YOU! THE UMBRA DOBE! How dared you stealing my fight!" came the voice of Sasuke Uchiha
"You were almost killed emo-queen, be grateful that the boss saved you sorry ass, fucker!" said Tayuya with her flute at ready
"I'm an Uchiha, you dirty whore! You have to respect me!" yelled the boy
"Can we kick his ass, boss?" asked Sakon and Ukon
"I'll take care of him myself" answered Luis
"You better surrender now dobe! If you teach me that techniques you used in the finals and against that monster I may spare you the Humiliation of being defeated by me" the Uchiha boy said in a smug tone.
What the duck-ass haired boy didn't took in consideration was the fact that an Umbra wizard has free control over his hair, hair that had shifted from being used as a scarf into bindings on Sasuke's four limbs to keep him in place.
"You challenged me, remember, a lot of people can testify it sooo, Kidney punch!" yelled Luis hitting Sasuke's kidney
"Buaargh!"screamed the boy
"Kidney punch!Kidney punch!Kidney punch! Little pause...Kidney punch!" continuously said Luis
"uuuugh!" groaned Sasuke
"Hey Sasuke?" asked Luis
"Yes?"
"Stop hitting yourself!" Luis said punching him in the stomach
"Stop hitting yourself!" and again
"Stop hitting yourself!" and again
"Stop hitting yourself!" a fourth time
"You are the one hitting meee..." whined the Uchiha
"My bad...I'm bored, see ya around!" finally said Luis, stripping Sasuke to his boxers and throwing him in a dumpster, closing the lid over the groaning boy and kicking the whole thing down an alley.
"Maybe you overdid a little" came Tenten's voice
"He'll be okay, few bandages and a shower and he will be back pestering the world pretending power" answered Luis
"That's also true" answered the girl
"Good job with that weakling...but you won't be so lucky with me" said another female voice
"Minako-chan! Nice to see you are okay!" happily said Luis
Suppressing a blush on her face the Namikaze heiress glared at the boy
"I want a rematch! The last one was a fluke! I'm the heiress of the Namikaze line! A clan-less idiot such as you can't defeat me!" yelled the red-head
"I do have a clan little one" answered Luis
"Umpf! A Civilian clan, just like saying you have none, Tonight at training ground ten and don't you dare skipping, I'll teach you who is the best between you and me!" Minako said stomping away to train.
"So it's tonight uh?" said Tenten
"What will happen tonight?" asked Tayuya
"I'll have to brake her into a submissive girl, still my girlfriend, but without that smug attitude" answered Luis
"So you are gonna make her your bitch?" asked again Tayuya
"I like her, now that we are no more siblings I can stay with her, but after tonight she will act more humble and amorous with me and Tenten since I'll dominate her"
"You will treat her as an object or as a lover afterward?" asked Jirobo
"As a lover, I'm not a beast" answered Luis
"Then I think I can accept it...you said she liked being humiliated during the finals" said Tayuya
"She moaned loudly as he tortured her on the wooden pony" said Tenten
"Hot damn! A masochist!" said Kidomaru
"I was thinking the same" said Kimimaro, taking an elbow to the ribs from Haku
"Since you liked it so much...no safe word tonight!" she said angrily while walking away
"PLEASE! EVERYTHING BUT NOT THAT! I'm sorry, please Haku, forgive me!" tried reasoning the Kaguya boy following her.
"WHIPPEEEEED!" came the chorus of the others
"I'll be watching in case you need some help" said Tenten
"Thank you, my hime!" said Luis kissing her.
Konoha - Later that night – Training ground 10
Warning strong lemon content – don't like the genre, skip this part (All thanks to my bro Soarath, the man that teached Jiraya how to be a pervert, long life to you, my friend ^^ thank you fro writing this)
The night was cold, a feeble wind blowing away few leaves fell from the trees, in the centre stood Minako glaring at the coming boy, she was wearing an ANBU-stiled vest with her sword on her back.
"So you came...ready to get humiliated?" asked the girl
"I'm always ready for a good fight, what about you? Are so so anxious to have a reply with my little toy?" he asked
"Pervert!" she yelled, trying with all her might to stop her lower regions from dampening.
After the whole invasion and speech with the Umbra heir, Minako's mind kept returning to the finals where the boy had humiliated her making a spectacle of her domination, but no matter how much she denied it...she liked it.
The whole evening she spent masturbating was a proof of that as for once having a great stamina played against her.
"I'm not a submissive, masochist slut! I will prove that! After beating him I will RAPE him and make him my sex-toy! I will be in charge!" she was thinking
"This will be the REAL finals of the exam, the winner can only be the best one between the two of us! are you ready, loser?" asked Minako
"Hai!" Luis grunted in affirmation with a nod making her rush at him.
Waiting until she was close he prepared his hair for a surprise attack, stepping to the side at the last second he knelled her in the stomach before swinging in a wide arch with his foot and making his hair extend into a huge fist, hitting her in the back of the head knocking her out instantly.
"She is such a strong Kunoichi...she only needs to stop acting like this and focus" said Luis motioning Tenten to came out of her hiding spot
"So...the show may begin now that we are all present" said Tenten
"Are you sure this is the only way?" he asked
"She likes being dominated, we'll simply show her that we can give her what she wanted" answered Tenten
"So, a loving boyfriend by day and a Master by night?" said Luis
"Exactly, the whole BDSM will be for the Alone time with us, she can still act all bitchy with the others if she want it" said Tenten
"At least she will have a soft spot for someone...I think" finally said the boy
"I'll be under that tree watching, when the show it's over I will show up, she need to see me as a Mistress too" she said
"Tell me the truth...you are getting horny right now" joked Luis
"Just start already before I jump you" answered the blushing girl stomping away
"Let's go...I'm sorry sis, but know this...I really love you and after tonight, we'll be together...forever" he whispered giving Minako a little kiss to the cheek, a cute little smile appearing on the girl's face.
Looking at Tenten he received a nod signifying that he could start, giving Minako some smelling salts waking her up, she blinked and sat up glaring at the boy who smirked.
"This is twice I have beat you, I am enacting the demons law...you are mine now" he said.
"Shut up! I belong to nobody, you clan-less loser" Luis chuckled and backhanded her, gripping her hair he pulled her up to her feet, she struggled lightly but once he head-butted her she stopped with a whimper.
The Umbra boy pulled her again and crushed his lips to hers, she protested but went ignored as his tongue snaked out of his mouth to dominate hers, exploring the new area slowly before pulling back and serpentining, she whimpered again and tried to push him away, but he just smiled and shoved her to the ground where she scrambled backwards a little, he shook his head slowly and sent his hair out to restrain her.
Tendrils from his head shot out and wrapped around her waist, legs and arms, holding her in place. Luis walked up to her slowly and smirked kneeling in front of her tilting his head "A clan-less loser am I? Well then, let me show you what it means to be MINE" he said smiling sweetly.
She whimpered at the look in his eyes knowing he wouldn't stop, using his hair on her he make the girl stood straight up, arms out and legs spread open before pulling out a kunai from his pouch and cutting the front of her shirt in a straight line and around both arms, pulling it off.
She tried to get free again as the cold night air was caressing her skin, she again felt heat flushing over her body, mostly centered in-between her legs, turning the whimpered groan into a strangled moan.
Luis laughed lightly leaning over so to kiss her again, a kiss she sloppily returned with lust filled eyes, making the boy grin and using the kunai he was holding to cut her pants, making them fall to the ground and pool around her ankles.
The revealing of her burnt orange panties and bra had Luis to lightly grunt in approval before chuckling and unclasping the bra, letting it fall to reveal a seal-covered breast band to him, something that made him frown before realizing that her breasts were indeed bigger than what others normally see, he ripped the bandages off roughly making her B-cup breasts bordering C's juggling a little, his grin almost splitting his face in two.
"What we have here, this naughty girl was hiding such wonderful things from the world, certainly that was your father's plan to lessen the number of suitors" Luis states with another chuckle, leaning in he captured one of her nipples in his mouth sucking on it lightly, letting his tongue run around the outer rim slowly before running across the erected nub, making her gasp and moan louder, a sound he relished in.
She finally found her voice once he pulled back and said "L-Luis please stop! I don't want this please!" Luis frowned, running his finger across her jaw slowly.
"You are mine, but I promise you that you will see it my way soon, I swear" he said in a warm voice in her ear.
She moaned again and he smiled leaning in, capturing her lips in another kiss, something she seemed to enjoy due to the moan she let out as soon as they touched.
Luis hand slid down her body slowly and between her legs, rubbing her moist mound through her panties and making her squirm against his hold before falling back accepting it, a light moan escaping her lips as he continued.
He leaned in and took her nipple in his mouth, working using his teeth on it while his hand slipped inside her panties to touch her directly.
She couldn't stop from letting out a pleasure-filled moan escape her as Luis had his finger starting vibrate as he touched her now extended nub, making her gasp and tense, only for him to pull away making her whining "N-no fair! I'm almost there! touch it again please!"
Luis shook his head and kissed her again, this time with her returning it fiercely, before grinning.
"beg me!" he said
"N-no!" she scoffed
Smirking he touched her clit once more, making her tensing up
"N-no" she moaned
He smiled and kissed her neck, touching her clit a third time, she squeezed her thighs together and groaned at the loss of the sensation before looking in his eyes with a pleading expression.
"I-I don't beg anyone!"
Luis grinned, leaning forward and biting her neck softly making her yelp before kissing the same spot and nuzzling into her, his hand vibrating while touching her clit with one finger and sliding the others inside her slightly, making her gasp and giving a long drawn-out moan before tensing.
He pulled them away making tears stream down from her sky-blue eyes.
"P-please let me cum...please I'm so close" she said making him smile
"Beg me" he said
"P-please Luis, please give me what I want...I will do anything" she said whimpering
"Will you become mine?" Luis said grinning.
She blinked and frowned so he repeated it
"Will you become mine to do with as I wish? If you will, I will give you your release" he emphasized by letting his fingers brush her clit, making her gasp again and tense for a second before relaxing, she moaned again and frowned.
"...Yes...I-I'll be yours, just please give me it" she finally said
"Say please" Luis said grinning
"PLEASE!" she groaned
"Please?...Please what?"
"Please Luis?" she moaned, squirming around.
As he was looking at her, she widened her eyes finally knowing what he wanted.
"N-NO! I'm not calling you that!" she said shaking her head
He smiled possibly even wider and touched her clit again while putting pressure on it and rolling it between his pointer and thumb slowly before pulling away, making her gasp and groan in disappointment, but she was still holding up her defiance.
Getting an idea he held up a cross sign making a clone popping into existence, putting his fingers in his mouth tasting her juices with a smile, and grinning as her eyes widened slightly as the clone knelled in front of her, pulling her panties down.
The clone's tongue darted out shaking fast, the clone started running his vibrating tongue across her pussy's lips making them part lightly before running it up the slit from bottom to top and stopping on the clit, making her scream and try to clench her thighs together.
She tensed for release, but as she was going over the edge the clone pulled away and licked its lips.
"Say it" he said looking at her lust-filled eyes and smiling deviously
"P-please m-master...give me my release, I will do anything you ask" she moaned and shifted before looking in his eyes
He grinned and dispelled his clone before unzipping his pants and pulling his erection out, placing himself at her entrance making her moan at the small touch, he grinned and leaned in kissing her soundly.
"As you wish, my beautiful slave" he said shoving his dick into her with full force making her scream something that was muffled from Luis kiss, tears streamed down her face at the pain.
Luis saw the small amount of blood on his dicks head as he pulled out due to the shock of her screaming.
"She was a virgin...she is really mine forever now" He thought before smiling happily, kissing her again and whispering sweet words to her for a moment before shoving his dick back in with a rough movement of his hips.
He let his hands slid down her body slowly stopping at her breast for a moment to play with them before continuing down, stopping once they landed on her hips, pulling her down with each thrust making her moan loudly.
She bit her lip and his hair released her, making the girl clutch onto his neck and burying her face in it, he smiled at her and increased his speed until he could feel her tensing up, using a little layer of hair to give to his member the same vibration he did with his fingers and sending her over the edge and making her squeeze him as tight as she could, his cock was coated in her juices a few moments later just as he followed her release.
Feeling his seed seep within her the girl was now laying on the ground with a smile on her face
"Who did this to you?" Luis asked
"You, my master" she panted out
"Whose bitch are you?" he asked grinning wider
"Yours, my master" she said lifting her head to kiss him
Luis grunted happily, rocking his hips again making his half erect member slowly getting hard
"And if anyone approaches you in a romantic aspect, what do you do?" he asked
"I-I D-deny them?"she said moaning at the movement
"Good girl, here is your reward" he said starting rocking his hips again, he was a stamina freak too for some reason she mused.
"Good to see you like it, my dear pet" said Tenten coming closer
"Tenten? I-I can explain!" frantically said Minako as Tenten's mouth crashed on hers in a fierce kiss
"It's Mistress Tenten to you" she said making Minako's eyes grew in size
"Do you want to join?" asked Luis
"Yes, I'm kinda in the mood right now" answered Tenten showing the wet spot on her pants
Laying down the girl Luis kept rocking his hips, making Minako scream in pleasure once more
"EAT ME OUT!" ordered Tenten discarding her dress, grabbing Minako's hair and showing the girl's face between her legs
"UUUHM!" both girls moaned in bliss making Luis speeding up, excited beyond words
As the trio reached its climax Luis grabbed Minako lifting her up and taking out his still hard member
"NOO! Please Master! I'll be good so keep fucking me!" Minako pleaded
"Don't worry, your Master and Mistress will give you all the love you wanted" said Tenten unsealing a two-headed dildo she jokingly called "the boomerang".
"What a pretty ass you have! A perfect heart shape and toned muscles, a real piece of art" Luis said caressing her plucking hole with the tip of his dick
"NO! Master please, not my ass! You are too big! It won't fit!" Minako said scared and at the same time excited
"I'll make it go in don't worry! Ready Ten-chan?" he asked
"Of course I am!" answered the girl
Slowly Luis started thrusting his dick forward, every inch earning a new orgasm from Minako, once he was completely inside he waited a little as Tenten entered the girl's pussy.
"I-I'm so...full" Minako moaned
"And it's only the beginning" whispered Luis taking out before slamming his cock back in full-force making a loud scream escape the girl's mouth
"You better keep down your voice, what will happen if someone came here to see the great daughter of the Yondaime moaning like a slut?" said Tenten
The image of her being discovered like that sent Minako over the edge, making her squeeze both Luis and Tenten making them come, the feeling of the boy coming buckets of spurt inside her bowels nearly frying her brain as a shattering orgasm went over her
"And now...the grand final, Luis-kun? Let's switch place so you can release the Lust seal!" said Tenten
"Are you sure? I was saving it for you" said the boy
"I can let it slide for once" said the bun-haired girl switching place with Luis
"AAAANH!" moaned Minako as Luis started assaulting her pussy in a manic pace with his hips reduced to a blur as Tente was doing the same to her ass.
"HERE I COME MY SLAVE! Releasing the Lust Seal: Non-Stop Infinite Climax!" the boy yelled pinching her clits with his hand, the seal shining in a dark-purple light.
The effect was instantaneous, as the girl's ungodly scream of pleasure rocketed the whole village an Aura of sheer, unadulterated Lust washed freely of any impediment over the whole Elemental Nation.
Everywhere the most chaste virgins went on a lustful rampage making out or downright fucking with whoever was near them, the more perverted ones were instead convulsing on the ground as a mind blowing orgasms took over their minds, filling them with dirty images.
In Kumo Yugito woke up screaming as both her and the Nibi could feel the raw Lust clearer than enyone else thanks to their seal
"Y-You feel it Nibi?" moaned out Yugito
"OH! KAMI YESSS! I FEEL IT! PLEASE KITTEN DO SOMETHING! MASTURBATE, FIND A GUY TO RAPE, I DON'T CAAAARE!" screamed the two-tailed cat at her host while reduced in a quivering mess.
In an hidden cave a man wearing an orange mask was being fucked by a blue haired woman as six people with equally orange hair were servicing her in a huge gang bang, said Masked man deciding that it was time for him to go on with his life instead of focusing in world domination after losing his loved ones. They all will run away to never be heard of again after that night.
Near them a male resembling an older version of Sasuke and a blue-skinned man were having a threesome with an orange haired woman with piercing, they too seem to decide to settle in a normal life instead of living as criminals.
Two men were instead living the area muttering about a waste of money with the other decreating the whole thing as an insult to a certain Jashin.
In a corner a black and white man was satisfying a cactus, a blissful smile on his face.
Konoha took the blunt of the Lustful assault with wives and girlfriends jumping their loved ones on the spot easily ignoring their pleas for a pause...a certain snake mistress joining the Umbra heir in his fun with his girlfriends.
Lemon end – WOO!...some hardcore stuff happened (Minato is the main bad guy here, and I finally found a good way to get rid of the Akatsuki)
Konoha – Namikaze compound – several hours later
An extremely tired Minako entered the house limping a little, luckily she had few spare clothes with her, she was happy because she had finally found someone able to love her no matter what and still capable of dominate her during sex, even if she has to share him Minako didn't cared, just earing her "Luis-kun" telling her how much he loved her was enough.
"W-Welcome home h-honey...did something happen?" tiredly asked Minato, he was lying on the couch wearing only his boxers, his voice a slurr.
"I was fighting against the Umbra heir and lost" she answered
"AND?" her father asked, fearing for what could have happened after that strange Lust washed over Konoha
"...after he left I felt a strange heat and...and" she muttered a lie, her eyes down pointing at her crotch
"Don't worry, at your age the masturbation is normal, just refrain yourself from now on" he said before falling asleep due to exhaustion
"Go to bed honey, Me and your father need to Talk" said Kushina dragging Minato upstairs by the man's leg
"Noo please! No more Snoo-Snoo! It will fall off!" whimpered the Yondaime
"Poor mother, I'm sure that if He wanted, my Master Luis-kun could easily fuck me for days to no end" the girl said smiling, dragging herself to bed and collapsing on her pillow.
What a good soreness she was feeling right now.
Omake – Stand Talking -
or "What the audience was saying during the finals"
"So that's the boy? I heard he can make you scream so loud that the heavens split in two" asked a woman
"Yeah, legends says that his tongue alone can drive a woman insane with just one lick" said another
"Actually...after our first time my heart stopped, luckily a second orgasm made it pump again" proudly said Tenten
"NO WAY! The legendary Super Orgasm! Only the Sage of the Six Paths is said to be able of it!" said a kunoichi from Kumo
"Exactly that" Tenten said smirking
"Is it true that he is also VERY big?" asked a woman from Iwa
"Bigger than Luka and Rodin put together" answered Tenten
"Amazing!" said the women from all over the country
"WHAT THE HELL!" yelled Luka and Rodin
"Congratulations! You two became a measurement unit!" Bayonetta said laughing
"BUU-UUUH!" whined the two men, crying in shame.
Omake 2 – After the Lust storm calmed down -
In an apartment a man with grey hair was blissfully sleeping in the bed, during the whole ruckus he finally scored with the woman of his dreams, he was now stirring waking up.
"OH! Hey Tsunade-hime! Did you liked it?" asked Jiraya
"Uhm? Yeah-yeah I liked it" said the woman dismissively dressing up, a lighted cigarette in her mouth
"What about a little cuddling?" asked Jiraya
"Listen...eeh..." she trailed off
"Jiraya..your teammate, remember?" said the man
"Yeah Jiraya, Jiraya...listen it was nice and all but I have to go now, we should talk again sometime" said Tsunade
"What?...you mean this night...didn't means anything to you?" he asked with his eyes watering up
"What? Ahahaha, listen Jibaya..."
"Jiraya" he muttered
"Jiraya...It was a one night stand, but we can stay friends if you want, bye bye Jinkanya, it was a nice night" Tsunade said closing the door
"Real men don't cry...real men don't cry... BUUUUUUAAAAGH!" Jiraya started sobbing, feeling used.
"My Innocence...she stole it" he whined getting under the shower, the splashing water washing away his tears.
"...At least I touched her boobs" he finally muttered.
The end! Now a little clarity, Minako will be treated as a normal girlfriend, sweetly and caring, the only difference is that she likes being dominated during sex and being "objectified" since she was always pampered and respected thanks to her father she wanted a man able to treat her well by day and dominate her by night. (I hope it is somehow clear).
A little character sheet about Luis weapons.
Twister sisters: created with an alloy that even the Devil would kill to have his hands on, they are his basic weapons (and his favorites)
Orochi: Orochi is a whip that channels a white serpent demon out of its hilt as well as the soul of Orochimaru the Sannin. It has a golden grip with a trigger-like button, at the hilt's base is a gold chain with a nine-tailed fox hanging from its end, the soul of the ancient serpentine demon Yamata no Orochi giving it life, it can be used in the same manner as a normal whip or making the snake's skin retreat to take out the blade of Kusanagi, turning the whip in a sword.
Dandy-Man: A pair of gloves with an Ace-themed Royal Flush on the back, containing the soul of a man that waged his soul in a poker game with a powerful demon in exchange of the Immortality, his damned soul powering the gloves and his grief condensing into explosive poker cards of high power. The can be used as long ranged attacks as well as forming whips and blades for close-range fighting, Luis managed to have them to create Card-clones using his knowledge of ninja training. (the same attacks of Tubalcain alhambra from Hellsing).
Kitsune Regalia: A pair of roller-blades burning with the very same flames of the Inferno, a Nine-tailed Fox with flaming tails on it, The demon sealed in its wheels is said to be the son of a powerful Nine-tailed Demon Fox ( Kurama is still refusing to admit that he had a son) giving the user supreme speed it burns whatever dare crossing its path.
Modeled after the Flame Regalia Gear from Rodin's favorite Anime.
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BYYYEEE!