Update (8/1/13) ~ Hello everyone. I know it's been over a week since I last updated. I normally stick to my promises, but this one is super-hard to catch up to.

With the Writer's Block I have been having, I could not write at all. It would either come out not making sense or not sounding as it should.

Also, no-one has reviewed to the second or third chapter. Please, anyone, take one minute and submit a review so I know about your opinion on the story. Each review helps me with the next chapter, so your input is helping me and helping yourself to have a new chapter to read (Hopefully not under 500 words, like what I have been doing... ^^;

Now, onto Chapter 3 until I can get Chapter 4 done. Thank you for reading!


Blue sparks flashed, smoke spread everywhere, and a familiar figure appeared within the smoke. Jewel heard Sharkboy screaming and resisting it's grip, but it faded away before she could investigate. Jewel looked at Lavagirl, who had a horror-stricken expression in her eyes. Within 5 seconds, it went from sadness to determination. Lavagirl's hair flickered with hot-pink flames, and she raced towards where Sharkboy disappeared. "Wait up!" Jewel called as she ran after her.

Once Jewel catched up to Lavagirl, they were both in shock. In front of them, about 100 yards downhill, was a cave. It was too dark to see inside, but every few seconds sparks flew from the entrance. "Sharkboy is in there, I am sure if it..." Lavagirl muttered to herself, "If only there is a way in." She looked around, hoping to find a way inside without being caught by... whoever was in there.

They climbed down the hillside, with Jewel occasionally slipping on the wet dirt. Lavagirl ducked behind some rocks and signaled Jewel to get beside her. "Are you sure you know what you are doing?"Jewel asked. Lavagirl answered, "Pretty sure..." There was a pause. "OK, I have no idea what I am doing. But we have to get Sharkboy back." She darted toward another large rock in front of them. Jewel followed closely, still wondering what she saw before, in the vision.

Then, it all came to her.

"Lavagirl, remember when you asked me if..." Lavagirl hushed her before she could continue. They both peeked above the rock, and saw someone exit the cave.

"What can we do with him?"

"Its for me to know, and you to find out. Now, get the Electrifier ready. The other two pests should be here momentarily."

Jewel glanced at Lavagirl, not sure if she really heard what she just heard, but she was gone. Jewel looked around, and saw Lavagirl running towards the entrance. "Lavagirl, no!" Jeweled shouted. She chased after her. "It's a trap!" She warned once she catched up. "Jewel, listen." She looked at Jewel with a serious expression, "I know Sharkboy is down there, and whoever is keeping him there will be destroyed. Who knows, Max may be in there." Lavagirl sighed. "Sharkboy, please be alright..." She whispered to herself.


-Sharkboy POV-

"Let...me...GO!" Sharkboy punched one of the henchmen in the eye, knocking him out. Sharkboy landed on his feet. "That was easy..." he thought, brushing himself off. He turned around, and the feeling of victory faded away quickly. "Well... look who we have here." A familiar voice came into the cave.

"Hello... brother."


I know, the chapters are getting smaller and smaller, at least by 200 words... ^^;;

I am having symptoms of the brutal Writer's Block, and starting to not think of ideas that will work smoothly.

So, I am (kind-of...) relying on you, my honorable viewers and followers, to help me with making this story interesting!

Either post your ideas as a Review below, or PM me, whatever you decide.

Also, I am hoping to get some feedback wither or not I should have different POVs (Point Of View). Decided to try it out on this chapter.