Here is the latest rewrite with all the grammar repairs and sentences fixed hoop you all enjoy
"Jesus smallville of all the times to take a vacation it had to be now" Lois said speaking to herself as she poured over the statements to the newest story she was writing.
"The Blur decides to go rouge and go on a killing spree and your nowhere to be found" at this point she has gotten the attention of half the basement bullpen.
She starts shuffling through all the papers she has on the desk and can't figure where to start seeing as she has been asked to investigate the blur killings.
"Where do i even begin this is not like the blur yet it is him according to the eyewitness" she says rather loudly at this point she has caught the attention of the newest guy to grace the basement of the planet.
"Usually you start at the beginning and work your way forward' the new guys says looking at Lois with a big grin on his face.
"Well i see the new guy has a sense of humor and who the hell are you anyway?' She asks him as he stands over her.
He stands not to tall with slightly scruffy dark hair and bright green eyes
"Hi he he yea names Kyle Rayner I'm the new cartoonist for the planet just moved here from New York sorry i could not help but over hear you talking about these blur killings and was wondering how they know it's the blur?" he asks.
"Well for one the eyewitness report is a good place to start although i don't want to believe it" she says "but the evidence points to him the only thing i can't figure out is why him and why now after spending the last two years saving people in the city?"
"Well it's like the old supposed heroes from the past that all of sudden went rouge i mean all of a sudden they are helping people then the next working against people" Kyle replies to her question
"yea but from everything i read they were framed by some government organization" Lois says.
"Where did you find that out by the way i read the article you wrote on that pretty impressive reporting by the way" Kyle says
"I have my sources and flattery will get you nowhere with me just ask my partner when you meet him" Lois snidely replies to him
. "Yea where is your partner i have been working here two days and have not seen anyone working with you unless he is in your imagination seeing as you like to talk to yourself allot" He says laughing as he does.
"No he's not my imagination he's in D.C. visiting his mother she's a U.S. Senator for Kansas" Lois replies with a big smirk oh her face
"So he has not been in yet this week although i wish he was here he might be able help shed some light on this whole situation although in my opinion i don't think this is the blur i think it's just some sicko pretending to be him" he looks at her skeptically
"and what proof do you have that it's not how many people can actually act like him or move as fast as him i would venture to guess not many" at this point Lois looks at him and has a worried look to her
"I guess your right new guy,'" and with that goes back to typing on her computer.
Back at watchtower however Chloe, Oliver and John are going through files and surveillance looking to see if they can find any clue as to why Clark would all of a sudden go on a killing spree.
"Chloe when was the last time you talked to Clark?" John ask her
"three days ago right before the first killing he said he was going to visit his mother in D.C. for a bit but i have not been able to get a hold of her at all since this started but that's no real alibi for Clark given how fast he can move he could go from here to D.C. and back again in the same amount of time it takes you to go the store and back." Chloe states
"Have you tried calling Lois to see if she has heard from him at all?" She then asks Oliver
"What am i supposed to ask her hey Lois have you seen Clark so we can ask him if he is really going around killing random people" Oliver sarcastically replies.
" No but I am his best friend so i can just say i need to talk to him about something or the other."Chloe says with a big smile on her face.
With that she grabs her phone and calls her after talking with Lois for about ten to fifteen minutes comes back
"well Lois has not heard from him and she's very upset with him cause he was supposed to call her yesterday and never did i just think she misses him," Chloe laughs half heartily.
"I just don't know what to do now we can't get a hold of Clark or his mother and all we got now is what John saw the other night I don't want to believe it but I'm afraid that Clark may have turned against us all." Chloe states as tears well up in her eyes,
"it seems that Kal'El is following the same path that Zod followed and will try to conquer this world like Zod tried to do when he inhabited Lex's body," John states in a almost sad and disappointed voice.
Johns phone starts ringing he looks down and answers it "yes captain where ok i will report there right away," he hangs his phone up and looks to the others
"that was my captain there has been another murder same cause of death it looks like our friend has killed again i need to report to the scene once I'm done i will update you two on what's going on when I'm done there," and with that he leaves as Chloe finally breaks down in tears at the thought that Clark has really turned against the world.
Mean while Clark starts to wake up from his ordeal with his doppelganger and tries to look around and all he sees is walls and a door the room is barely lit, he realizes he is bound to some sort of chair or something he tries to break free to no avail.
He looks down at his bound wrist and See's that he has a blue colored bracelet on.
"Well it seems he wants to incapacate me without killing me" Clark states to himself realizing that the bracelet is made of blue kryptonite, now realizing that his powers are stripped away he starts to think of another way to escape.
As he does he starts wondering and hoping that his mother was able to get to safety due to the fact that he is worried that she might get hurt but also for the fact that she would be able to contact Chloe or Oliver and tell them what is going on.
With that thought a door swings open and in walks his sadistic doppelganger
"well well well it seems little Kal'El is awake and how did you sleep i hope very well" he asks,
"who are you what do you want with me?" Clark asks him looking up slightly weakly
"one simple reason Kal'El REVENGE" he yells at him
, "how is this possible i killed you when i exposed you to the blue kryptonite" Clark yell at him thinking this to be bizarro.
"What you think I'm that half wit phantom think again young Kal'El think again with you now out of the picture i can freely have my revenge and free my people from the hell hole your father stuck us in and take our place as the rightful rulers of this world" he states laughing, and with that his eyes glow a bright red and Clark's head starts ringing with massive pain as he passes out again.
John is at the site of the newest murder looking around the crime scene trying to figure everything out, but can still not figure out why Clark would be doing this as he looks around more he hears a familiar voice only to look up and Lois snooping around the scene asking officers all sorts of questions.
"I'll take it from here officers, you must be Lois Clark has told me allot about you" Lois looks up at him
"and just who the hell are you" She asks.
"name's John Jones I have known Clark for a long time" He states
Lois looks at him suspiciously "yea well when you see him next tell him thanks for returning my calls" Lois states very angrily.
At this point she is very upset at not hearing from Clark but also from not hearing from the blur who usually confided in her and she has not received one phone call from either and Martha has not answered or returned any of her phone calls either.
"Well then i take your the lead detective for this case mind answering some questions?" She asks holding up a tape recorder.
"sorry Miss Lane but i can't comment on a open case" John replies to her.
"Oh please spare the no comment mumbo jumbo i just have one main question do you think it is the blur killing these people or not" Lois demands from John
"well seeing as you have already talked with some of the witnesses and heard what they had to say then i have to answer truthfully yes it looks like the blur is the prime suspect at this time" he says As Lois has this dejected look on her face when she hears his answer
"This can't be true it can't this is nothing like him" Lois is thinking as she looks around and sees the blurs symbol burned into the wall at the crime scene.
"If that is all miss lane i have a case to get back to if you don't mind" John states to her
"yes yes of course sorry" Lois says slightly dazed not sure what to think anymore as she walks away getting what she needed from the people on the scene when she all of a sudden hears another man talking to a officer.
"Yes officer that's what i said a man in a green and black costume tried to stop the blur it was quite unusual this other man he seemed to make what looked like green robots out of thin air and sent them after the blur to try and stop him but the blur ran away before they could then this green guy just jumped up and flew away like he was after him" the man recounted to one of the police officers
. She went to try and ask the man some questions when she bumped into someone
"whoa what's the hurry lane" the man says to Lois as she looks up and sees the man she met this morning
"what are you doing here Rayner wanting to draw cartoons of the crime scene" she says sarcastically.
"No i heard that there was another murder by the blur and was curious that's all" Kyle replies to her.
"Hey Lane you ok you look a little pale" he asks
"yea yea I'm fine thank you just have not eaten much today" she replies
" really well I'm just on my way to get something to eat want to join me no sense in eating alone right" he asks with a big smile on his face.
"Um yea i guess so cartoon boy just remember one thing look but don't touch" Lois says to Kyle
"well are we a bit conceited Lane not really interested in touching just wanted some company while i eat." The look on Lois face could have had General Zod surrendering in fear
"yea fine cartoon boy," and with that they walk away from the scene.
well here's the next chapter a little sooner than i planned please review let me know what you think the next chapter will focus more on the Clark doppelganger would like to see if you guys have figured out who he really is love to see who guys think it is well till the next chapter please review and enjoy