So I received a guest review saying "Please do not make chara evil. Make her a passive-narrator". Here's the thing- she won't be evil, per say. She'll be relatively good. However, why do people think Chara was always a perfect person? She's not. Asriel even says himself, "I know Chara wasn't the greatest person" and her interactions with Asriel on the tapes made her seem... mean. Anyway, I like to believe that Chara was what Asriel says she is- Not a very good person. It's your actions in the Genocide Route that make her become the "Demon that Comes When It's Name is Called".
But realize, she calls herself that. Anyway, her red dialogue is always a murderous thing- but anyway, I like to think that Chara was a rude kid, but deep down loved her adoptive family, and hated humanity. Her plan was bad, and wound up getting both her and Asriel killed. After that, when Frisk eventually goes through with a Genocide Route, Chara becomes... corrupted. She was always a more violent person, it only took some LOVE to tip her over the edge and make her be evil.
Anyway, she's more of a 'reformed villain' type of character here, at least after she's formally introduced. I have planned for her to push Frisk to do something, but it's before she's even introduced, so... on with Chapter 3.
"Hey!"
Jimmy turned to look at her. "What do you want?" He sneered at her. The short boy frantically shook his head, telling her to back down. Of course, she didn't.
"What are you doing? He can't carry that huge case by himself. It's yours, isn't it? Why are you forcing him to carry it?" asked Frisk. Jimmy gave her a look.
"He's a nerd. He could use the workout." said Jimmy. Frisk could see that the boy was trembling now. His arms couldn't take the weight of the tuba much longer. "What are you gonna do about it, anyway?"
Frisk was silent. The boy set the case down, and then Jimmy snapped at him. "Don't put it down, you're going to scratch it!" he shouted.
"Wait." said Frisk. They turned back to look at her. "I'll carry it."
Jimmy raised an eyebrow. "You're too weak. You'll last even shorter than this guy. Besides, everyone knows girls aren't strong. I bet you can hold it for one second."
"How much you wanna bet?" challenged Frisk.
"How much do you have on you?" asked Jimmy.
"I have five dollars." said Frisk. She hoped Jimmy didn't realize she was bluffing.
"Deal, then." Jimmy said. "Carry the case all the way to the band room, and I'll get you five bucks by the end of the school day. If you set it down before we get there, you have to pay me five bucks by the end of the day."
"Fine." said Frisk. She handed her flute case to the boy. "Will you carry this for me?" she asked.
He nodded. "Yes." Frisk let go of her flute and picked up the tuba. Luckily, the band room wasn't actually that far away. It was heavy. She made her way forward as Jimmy kept giving her skeptical looks. She stumbled and nearly fell at some point. Frisk noticed that her shoelace was untied, but she wasn't going to set the case down to tie it. Finally, the group reached just outside the band room. The doors were open. Suddenly, Frisk toppled forward as Jimmy stepped on her shoelace.
"What the-" she fell forward, face slamming into the front of the case. Just about everyone in the room turned to look at her.
"Are you okay?" asked the band teacher.
Frisk let go of the case and stood up, rubbing her sore face. "I'm fine." The boy shoved her flute case into her hands and ran off towards the choir room.
Once the attention was off them, Jimmy turned to Frisk. "Huh. Guess I'll be owing you five bucks." He dragged his tuba case away. 'He didn't want that boy to put the case down, but now he's dragging it?' thought Frisk.
Band class was loud. Very loud. From the squeaky clarinets to the shouts of the band teacher, Frisk was completely done with everything as she left for lunch. "Hey."
That boy from earlier stopped her in the hall. "Thanks for that... earlier, I mean. I have to meet up with Julia, but, uh.. yeah. My name's Elliot, by the way."
Frisk gave him a smile. "It's nice to meet you. I'm Frisk." With that, they parted ways. Frisk began walking down the hallway by herself, towards her locker. She grabbed her lunchbox and began heading to the cafeteria. Frisk met up with Max, Alex, and Bella along the way. The three of them got a table together. Elliot and a girl that Frisk assumed to be Julia sat down at their table as well. Julia was that petite brunette girl Frisk had seen rushing to the Special Needs room. "Hi." she said as she set her binder and lunch bag down.
"Hey." greeted Frisk.
"It's official. Hunter's skipping today." said Alex, digging her spoon into the applesauce on her tray. "Jimmy hasn't seen him either. And Hunter and Jimmy definitely wouldn't stay away from each other."
She made a face as the terrible taste of her school lunch registered. "Ugh, what do they put in this?"
Julia was reading a comic book, her meager lunch untouched. Wait.. that wasn't a comic book, that was- "Hey, is that Death Note?!" Max asked excitedly.
She looked up. "Yeah! You like anime and manga too?"
Max laughed. "Are you kidding? I love anime and manga! Video games, too." He pointed to his shirt- a Black Butler shirt- and then the symbol on his beanie- three triangles and a bird shape.
"Oh, is that the Royal Crest of Hyrule?" Bella asked.
Frisk leaned over to Alex. "I have no idea what they're talking about, but they're making me interested." Alex nodded before cringing at the bad taste of her food again.
"Seriously, does nobody in there know how to cook?!"
I HAVE PUT IN SO MANY OCS...WHY