Hi guys! I know I haven't written one of these little paragraphs before but I am new to the fan fiction world and I am just learning. This is also my first fanfic, but don't be afraid to comment on anything good or bad. If you have any ideas for the plot go ahead and put it in the comment section. I have an idea of where I want this story to go but I am open to suggestions. Thanks!
-TobiasEaton12
Four Pov
Through most of my morning classes I find out that the blondes name is Tris. So far she has most of my classes with me so that makes me ecstatic. I honestly can't wait for lunch, I over heard Christina asking Tris if she wants to sit with us. Everything is calm until math class.
When we get to class she sits down next to me. Life is perfect. I see her kind of wondering off into a daydream. One thing I know is that Mrs. Seifert does not like people who don't pay attention. Just as if she read my mind I hear "Mrs. Prior!" Uh oh. "Yes ma'am" I hear her squeak. "Can you do the problem on the board for me?" She asks expecting her to fail. Sick. This will either turn out very good or very bad. "Yes ma'm, I will" she says. Everyone including the teacher is very shocked. She goes up and solves the problem just like that. Then she explains it. Even though what she did was boring I can barely hold in a laugh. If she was paying attention she would know that this was a problem the Math teacher couldn't figure out for a long time. She just made the meanest teacher in the school look like a fool. Wow. She is Smart, and beautiful. All I know is that I want her.
Tris Pov
After a very awkward ending to Math class it is time for lunch. I am so glad to get out of that class room.
When we get to the cafeteria, Christina makes me get the burger and Dauntless cake. It is supposed to be the best in the world. I am excited to try it. When we sit down at the table I soon realize I am sitting next to Four. Dang he is cute. They start having a conversation that I occasionally interject in but don't have much interest in. Then they start talking about my little show in math class. I blush deep crimson. I figure out that I solved a problem the teacher has been working on for months. Whoops! If I had known it was that important to her I would have just said that I didn't understand it.
I am kind of excited because I have have Art after lunch which is followed by PE. My afternoon is going to be fun. No one knows that I was on the track team last year and that I can run a 5:30 mile. (Dispite my shortness)
Hi again. I forgot to mention that if you want your name, or a name that is special in some way to you in my story, put it in the comments. They will be smaller characters in the story but some will be in their. Please note I may use some of you characters as good or bad guys so if you have a preferred character type (good or bad) please put that too.