Okay, looks like there was some trouble with the pictures on the last chapter...lets try this again.
h t t p / i 2 1 4 . p h o t o b u c k e t . c o m / a l b u m s / c c 3 4 / d a n c i n g t h e f o x x c h a l k / n a r u t o g i r l s . j p g
That url should be for the dress that Sakura is wearing, in the picture the one that Ino has on is the one that I pictured Sakura wearing okay? This next url, I just thought went good with the chapter to show Sakura and Naruto's friendship
h t t p / i 2 1 4 . p h o t o b u c k e t . c o m / a l b u m s / c c 3 4 / d a n c i n g t h e f o x x c h a l k / n a r u t o d f e d r e . j p g
Anyways, I hope that works. Well, again thanks for reviewing, I really enjoy all the positive feedback!
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kirei na yukki:D Lol, your little Ramen cup? I just loved that! He is pretty cute huh? Poor thing, he just likes to hang out with Sakura! Everybody is questioning his sexuality now :( A bear should eat Ino's fat head. :
XxSasXSakXx: Your very welcome :D & Thanks so much!
Sadbrowneyes976: Thanks! & Yeah a lot of people were having problem with it, I put the links above, so I hope they work now /
Theblackroseofkonoha: Oh my god, are you serious! I feel your pain, I had to do the exact thing for about five of my classes. Im glad you liked it :D
Kiba Girl: Lol! Most of the people that read my story for the first time said almost the exact same things. Something about their mothers walking in while they were laughing thinking that something was wrong with them! Sorry for making you look like you were on crack / I bet your mother was worried lol :D Thanks a bunch.
-kyuubiqueen-: You know you scare me sometimes right? Lol, but that's a good thing! I tried fixing the pictures so look at the link above and tell me if it works yes? Creepy with the whole stalking me and my love Neji, but if you must. Lol. Okay good, My Neji-kun needs to breathe with his glorious nostrils. I think I've gone delusional, yes, I have. HE IS NOT A MANIAC! Lol. What did your dad say? Are they plastic? Did you have a Naru-kun moment? With the 'believe it' :D My stories are NOT all that popular, honestly 'IRD' would be my first story that I've had that many reviews / Fine, I guess...as long as you don't take Neji-kun, -sniffle- you may take the bear. I'll miss you bear. I would like a muffin!
Lozzieh: Thanks! I really have no idea where I get my ideas from. I freak myself out some times. ESCALATOTORS. I decided that's how i'm saying and spelling Escalators from now on :D
else1324: Ha! Yeah, I was trying to think of a very cheesy line that I could imagine Naruto saying. I guess it worked, no? Why, thank you! I'm flattered.
Sakura0chan: Sakura in my story really is creepy huh? yay, you liked it! 2:30 A.M tsk, tsk. That's what I'm here for, to be the mother figure, and make sure my reviewers go to sleep. :D Just kidding. I think I'd annoy myself. Oh jeez, I don't want to be haunted :D
animeluvr215/anon: Thanks a bunch! I like making Naruto sound girly! It makes Sakura have someone to talk to that's not all manly and macho like Sasuke /
Teenyjewel: It's okay! I'm glad you reviewed for this chapter though. I go on spring break this week. On Friday to be specific. Why thank you, they aren't all THAT short though are they? Lol, yeah I was like cracking up while I wrote it myself, it's pretty pathetic actually :D
ForgiveButNeverForget: Wtf? What picture showed up when you put the URL in? Well the link above should work now, I hope. / Yeah, I'm not a big fan of malls, I like buying my clothes at places that not EVERYONE goes to. :D
PhantomSoul103: Yep a sequel! I hope you keep reading :
Chibi Kabuto: Yeah! Someone recognized the Italian : I know Italian, I just can't speak it all that great, I like know what people are saying but I can't speak it. I know weird. Yep Goose, that's me! They are HUGE teases. They just make the story so hilarious, it's better then if the story was like this:
'Sakura, buy the dress, because you are my friend.' looks at Sakura.
'Why, I think, I will, my lovely friend, who's name is Naruto.' She buys the dress.
Lol, I think you get the point.
HopelessRomantic: I wouldn't call it PERFECTION. Lol, but thanks! BEHOLD THE POWER OF MONEY. I like that :D
Jay95: Oh god, please don't put the picture of Naruto being gay. Oh, just wait for his reaction! I like this chap, she's how should I say...Possessive? Don't worry about that, this whole story will be crawling with jealousy. I know right? I know who to call when I need dress advice 'Ghost Busters!' Lol, that was so gay...:D
Sariasprincy: Lol, I agree, he's kind of um, how do I say it? Uh, brain dead? Lol.
AngelofMist: OMG You're finally caught up! Now, I can respond you on my chapters! Okay, well about the link to the dress, check the link above and tell me if it worked ok! & I'd be GLAD to hold Sasuke-kun for you! Lol, that would be really hilarious! Did you think that part was that funny! Ha ha. I know right! I like making them a little like retarded :D I didn't really get into that much detail of what she had on when she stepped on his hand, but lets just say no she didn't:D Okie doke, and that my friend, i may have to say is the funniest thing ever. You're friend fell up the stairs, but i know what you mean! Enjoy the chap!
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, that is so obvious.
Goose: Me and Neji-kun just want to get married. Leave us alone, right honey? -cuddles-
Neji: MMPH!
Goose: There, there muffin, let me just get more duct tape, just stay still. -kisses forehead- Oh and Sasu-kun don't worry AngelofMist is coming for you soon ok? -pats Sasuke's head-
Chapter 3
Maneater
X.x.X
Everybody look at me, me
I walk in the door you start screaming
Come on everybody what chu here for?
Move your body around like a nympho
Everybody get your necks to crack around
All you crazy people come on jump around
I want to see you all on your knees, knees
You either want to be with me, or be me.
X.x.X
"Naruto, get me my black nail polish!" I yelled as I ran around, my apartment, trying to get ready before it was time to go. Naruto sat at the foot of my bed, eating Ramen from a bowl.
"What?" He asked dumbly. I barged back into my bedroom, and grabbed him by the ear.
"Ow, wait, Sakura-Chan, Just don't spill my Ramen!" He shrieked as I dragged him into the living room. I dropped him onto the couch, and walked back into my room.
"Stop eating so much Ramen, it's not good for you!" I shouted at him from my bedroom.
Naruto had been ready eons ago. I mean seriously, how much trouble does a guy go to get ready? Compared to a woman, it's about, no time at all. Naruto had been eating bowls and bowls of Ramen since we got here. I was smart enough to know that when Naruto was here, I had to have countless supply of instant Ramen. Naruto had a plain black tux with a black tie, that really went well with him. He looked cute actually, and I could only imagine what Sasuke looked like. Ugh, I almost drool just thinking about him.
I have a problem with trying to do more then just one thing, when I know it will not work out. Yeah I am pretty good at multi tasking but not when I try to put my dress on, paint my toe nails, find my shoes, and look at the time. Of course, that ends in catastrophe, but it's only natural. It's insane, no one can do all that at the same time. And i'm no super hero.
I had been running around, in Sasuke's boxers, a white spaghetti strap, with my hair up in a ponytail, since I had gotten home from the mall. No, don't think like that. I had just stolen a pair of boxers from Sasuke when I had gone over to his apartment, a few weeks ago, and I got a routine of wearing them when I went to sleep.
So as I tried to zip up my dress, and find my shoes at the same time, I tripped over the said shoes, and tumbled head first into the wall. Seriously, why am I not dead yet? I've cheated death about a million times. My poor head, I can't believe it's still intact with my body. Well, since Naruto had known my whole Karma infused life last year, he had always been looking out for me. When he hears a huge noise, it just can never be good, in his eyes. So while I rub my head, Naruto barges in the room, still holding his damn Ramen.
"Sakura! Are you okay!" He shouts. I look over my shoulder.
"Yeah, just dandy. Please help me Naruto, I've got 10 minutes to finish getting ready!" I said in dismay. I was so excited, for the first time. He put down his bowl of Ramen. That's like, the nicest thing he's ever done for me. He actually set down his precious bowl of Ramen, to help me. I could almost cry.
"Okay, Sakura-Chan, what do you need me to do?" He asked me thoughtfully. Seriously. I could cry right now, but I won't because I had just finished doing my make up and I wasn't about to ruin it.
I had put on some clear mascara, and black eye shadow. Not all gothic like or anything, but smoky.
"Okay, this is the plan." I said seriously.
"While, I finish doing my hair, you, paint my toenails." I said handing him a small clear bottle with black nail polish. He looked at me dumbfounded.
"Are you serious?"
"I'm fucking serious! I don't have time for this! Hurry!" I sat down at a stool in front of the full length mirror, and proceeded to flip out my hair with a curling iron. Naruto just stared at my reflection in the mirror, not knowing what to do. I snapped my head in his direction. I really had no patience whatsoever right now.
"What are you doing just standing here! Paint my nails!" I shouted. He slowly walked over to me, and opened the small bottle. I could feel him holding my foot steady, and his hands shaking, as if, this was a life and death situation. Actually, it was, because if he messed up I'd probably throw him out my window. I ignored him for a while as I continued with my hair. Please, let me get there on time.
Ten minutes later I was done with my hair. I looked down to see Naruto finishing with my pinky toe. He looked at me, smiling, triumphantly. I inspected his work and nodded. He did a FANTASTIC job. Who the hell would have known that Naruto had the gift for cosmetology? Just as I was going to congratulate him on a job well done, I heard a knock at the door.
"Sakura, you ready?" I heard Sasuke's smoldering voice say from the other side of the door. Oh no! Not yet!
"Uh...Naruto, go get the door." I said ushering him to the door.
"Tell him, to go on ahead. Go with him. I'll just meet you guys there." I said to him as I shut the door from my bedroom. I heard Naruto talking and then I heard my boyfriends infamous "Hn" and the door close. I sighed, hoping he wasn't getting too impatient with me.
"Ugh!" I sighed in frustration as I looked for a parking space in the crowded Uchiha Co. Parking lot. The building is this HUGE ominous looking, black building. It had about 10 floors, all with about a dozen offices, but they all have so many rooms, that they had plenty of space to do this whole ball thing. I bit my nails nervously.
"Damn!" I shouted, I had forgotten that my nails had just recently been painted. I looked at the clock, just above my radio of my Ford Focus...10:45 P.M. I had went over my time limit. 10 minutes later, I finally parked. I looked at all the glamorous people, as I got out of my car, and locked it. Damn, everyone looks so beautiful. I looked at myself, sadly, jeez way to lower my self esteem. I had just stepped out of my car and my heels were already killing me.
When I had finally pushed open the door, I was more then surprised. I was astounded. Picture this: A room full of gorgeous people, lights dimmed with strobe lights blinking, and R & B music blasting in the background. The noise was deafening, but what had me distracted was the glittery, sparkles that fell from the ceiling. I looked up, but then quickly looked down. The last thing I need is to be blinded by a fucking little sparkle. I was surprised, just as I had walked in, every one turned around to look at the chick who had just walked in. The DJ even stopped playing the music. My heels clicked loudly as I walked across the linoleum floor.
"Sakura Haruno!" I heard the DJ yell into the microphone. I looked up to the stage that was set up with lights and a lot of balloons. Everyone stared at me, and whispered to whoever was closest to them. I stood there with my hands on my hips, glaring at everyone. I flipped my hair dramatically, as I waited for the DJ to continue.
"This lovely young woman, is the first girl friend of THE Sasuke Uchiha!" An applause erupted from the huge crowd. What was the point of this? Just after the DJ made his unnecessary introduction, the music started again. 'Shawty Get Loose' by Lil Mama, blared, as I looked around for Sasuke.
'Greatness Greatness Great Greatness
Hey, Hey, Hey
The way we get loose
We move our shoulders
Foward
Heads back
Get it in control
Like Janet Jack
Get it on da flo
Let em kno Whats Happenin'
I made my way to the middle of the dance floor. I stood there as men looked at me from every direction. Damn, I told you, I don't want this kind of attention. Sasuke where the hell are you? Just as I was about to go search somewhere else, he appeared from right behind me.
"PUT YOUR EYES BACK IN YOUR SOCKETS AND FUCKING BACK OFF!" I heard him roar from over the music. Uh, jealous much? I turned around, and oh my god. There he was in all his glory. Seriously, and just as we both stared at each other from a few feet apart, a spot light fell on us. Then, it was silent, except for the music.
'L.I.L You better ask somebody
I been on my grind since butt-touch-potty
Y'all don't really want it wit the Yung God Toddla
Wit a flo so spec like technolotta
It's.. so sick
How da clock go tick
Keep given ya'll hit like techmatic UH!
Its the reason why I spit it
How I spit
When I spit its like mucus
Gotta get rid of it'
I had no words to describe how he looked. He looked angelic to me, and just as I thought, how it was possible that someone like me could possibly have someone as great as him, a smile spread across my face. I just couldn't contain my happiness. How? How can I...Sakura Haruno, have someone like...him? He's too good for me. He's out of my reach, but yet, here he is...looking at me, as though i'm the only one here. His eyes were wide, like if he couldn't believe that I was actually here. What could possibly be going through his mind? No doubt, beautiful thoughts. He was mine...and mine alone. I strode over to him. I stood just a couple of inches away from his face, so I could feel his breath on mine.
"How...could you love someone like me?" I whispered into his ear.
With the spot light still on us, people stood there gaping at the couple, who were so different, yet perfect for each other. Sasuke held my shoulders and looked at me from arms length, still unable to believe his eyes. Then he pulled me into a tight embrace.
"How...could you love someone like me?" He repeated my own question, into my ear. He kissed my cheek. I put my hands around his neck.
"...because you're my soul opposite, and I need you, to feel complete." I whispered to him.
'These chicks don't pop like me
Incompatible girl
No comparing me
And!
Ain't none of y'all scarin me
Like don't cha wish ya girl was as bad as me YEAH!
Wit a flow so sick like Twista's
So sweet
It can be cold like a Mystic
Instincts come so smooth
Like what is it?
BK-H-Dub ours like a wizard'
I could feel his breath down my neck, and it gave me the chills.
"...because you're my angel, without you...I'd fall apart." He said back to me.
"...& you look like an angel too." He said before he twirled me around.
I loved how even though the spot light was on us, and people were now clapping hysterically, the words that were exchanged was just a secret between me and him. No one could invade the bliss that we had come to. We could all tell that the claps they gave us were completely fake. Just to gain our respect, they clapped out of jealousy, and anger. We could see the crooked smiles, the narrowed eyes, and the faces contorted in anger. None of the guys wanted to admit that they were all staring at the girlfriend of Sasuke Uchiha, hoping to get some alone time together, and no one wanted to admit the longing for Sakura Haruno's boyfriend hoping to catch his heart. Among them, I could see a snickering Ino, waiting for a chance to pounce.
No i'm not trying to be conceited. I'm stating what i'm seeing with my own eyes. All the guys stared at me, mouthing obscene things, hoping I would catch their eye. I scooted closer to Sasuke. I pressed my body to his, as the lights finally shined at something other then us. I teased Sasuke, grabbing his tie and pulling him closer to me, and then walking a few feet away from me. He'd grab my waist from behind as though, I was actually going to walk away from him and then we'd go back into the swaying, and mesmerizing trance. We swayed to the music together. Only we knew the special moment being shared. Only we knew how much we cherished this time together. Sasuke stared me down, and I just smiled sweetly at him.
"Kiss me." I demanded.
WOOT! How'd you guys like that? I hope it was decent. Well anyways, the song, was not Nelly Furtado, although, she did come out with the song first, I have the version of Panic! At The Disco. The song is called Maneater, as is the chapter :D
The picture for the chapter actually goes WAY good with the chapter of today. It shows Sakura's power over Sasuke and I love it! With no spaces people! try either one of the links below, its been giving people problems...its the same pic for both URL's
h t t p / i 2 1 4 . p h o t o b u c k et . c o m / a l b u m s / c c 3 4 / d a n c i n g t h e f o x x c h a l k / r o x a s . j p g
OR
h t t p / s 2 1 4 . p h o t o b u c k e t . c o m / a l b u m s / c c 3 4 / d a n c i n g t h e f o x x c h a l k ? a c t i o n v i e w & c u r r e n t r o x a s . j p g
Until next time!
-Goose-
