Thankyou for the reviews, tried to paragraph better this time haha enjoy:D
Dark ace walked through the corridors of the cyclonian 'palace' with a stern yet pleased expression lingering on his face. His archenemy was gradually being deleted and replaced by a cyclonian.
He knocked twice on the heavy door leading to cyclonis' chamber. A feeble cyclonian opened the door for him 'the dark ace m-m-master..is here'. Trembling as the head of her cloak unveiled to produce the evil cackle from within.
Ace stepped forward towards her location 'Ace I have a job for you that I think you will enjoy' he loved it when she said things like that, it always meant that he was going to cause pain for something or someone.
At this he grimaced and kneeled 'my soul is of your use master' she liked it when people kneeled to her, she liked being "worshipped".
She sneered at the terrified talon door man and looked back at ace with an evil grin 'I have spent time creating a crystal that will pair with my darkness consumer, the effect, it is like a catalyst to speed of the process of our task, whenever near, it will make the reaction take place, all you need to do is find the condor and land on top of it, and hold the crystal in you hand until you think he's had enough, only me and you can activate it. Also you need to be within a 200metres radius of aerrow'.
Nodding he said in a calm tone 'I will not fail master, it will be my pleasure' (a scary calm), with that he exited taking the crystal gently from the stand it had been placed on. It was wrapped with a special cloth for protection and as not to activate it. Throwing the door open he punched the poor talon knocking him unconscious 'I never do like people presenting me without my permission.
At this she giggled [am I really getting a thing for Ace, no.. how pathetic, only weak pathetic people love, I am not either] 'thankyou master' and he exited, but oh how she wished that she didn't want him to stay, but she did, she didn't want him to leave..
On the condor
He stood up to look into the mirror in his room lifting up his top to take a look at the marks. 'what is that?! It looks like blood but it can't be.. it'll be ok. I hope. I just wish that I could stop whatever this is.. why does it hurt so much?! I could ask pip- NO..i can't worry my team, don't be weak, a sky night isn't weak..great now I'm talking to myself in a mirror..'
[aerrowwww] 'cyclonis..' he spitted out [it's weakening you] 'but why?!' [because I want it to(cackling like the was no tomorrow) 'witch' [and by the way aerrow, it is your blood, slowly turning to the darkness hahahaa].
Slowly the voice stopped talking and left him to peace of course with finn on the ship, he knew it wouldn't last long..
'AERROWW YOU COMING FOR LUNCH DUDE?' Finn yelled across the corridor disturbing the entire squadron. Aerrow rolled his eyes [so finn to do that..] 'I'm coming' he said in a quieter tone slightly encouraging him to do the same 'OK AERROW!' he face palmed his head, nope finn wasn't gonna learn..
Well that's another chapter, need 3 more reviews for the next one, thankyou for reading