Oh my gosh guys ! The reviews have been amazing! I love seeing that little notification saying someone cared enough to comment :D MAKES MY DAY! Anyways hope this chapter reads clearly! (Reviews inspire the story so DONT BE AFRAID TO GUESS AROUND AND HINT! I may even use some of your hints in my story! ) Tragically i still don't own Divergent ;(
The whole entire group was stunned at this. From somewhere in the back they heard a laugh burst out. Stepping forward a young man looked at the girl with a grin.
" Abnegation? seriously? where did you get your clothes?"
She grinned at him cheekily. Winking she stepped up close to the young man...
"you wanna know where I got them? Well its none of your business"
With that she laughed and winked at the crowd.
Even Tris and Four had to stifle a grin at her spunk. This girl was going to be interesting, and judging from the way the boys were looking at her, the cause of many fights and much jealousy. She had long brown hair and startling green/brown eyes. Her face was a very pretty, soft face.
The young man didnt smile, but instead his eyes narrowed as he watched her, as though he was studying her. Turning he joined the group in watching Tris and Four. Four recognized that look in his eye. Ash had caught his attention, he still clearly rememberd how he himself had felt when he'd first met Tris.
" You Candor.. .whats your name ?"
The young man looked at him for a moment
" Rainer"
His answer was hesitant, but firm, leaving no questions about how he was supposed to be addressed. Four nodded and turned to the rest of the group.
" Alright... now that we have established the basics, were gonna head to the chow pit. Once inside it will be up to you to sit where you will. We are not your parents so outside of training unless something is serious, you will not run to us with every question and problem. We expect you to be able to handle your own.. am I correct to assume this?"
At every ones nod's Four led them towards the mess hall.
The noise was explosive, as though screams and shouts had been surpressed and now expanded to fill the room. The transfers couldn't stop the excitement from flowing through their bodies. Warming them with a sense of abandonment they had never been allowed to feel. Ash's eyes were wide, coming from Divergent, she was the most unused to the noise and freedom, but she had a certain look in her eyes, as though she was finally free. Her breath quickend as she quickly memorized her surroundings. Tris watched her with a certain understanding, she rememberd the feeling of awe as everything sunk in. Mostly as she had begun to realize she belonged here and had finally been able to release her long pent up emotions.
"Tris, are you gonna stand and stare at the transfers? or scare them by keeping up the tough girl act?"
Four lifted one eyebrow as he watched understanding dawn across her face. When he saw it hit home, he ran.
"Act?! "
Her screech sounded right behind him and he felt the impact before he hit the ground, he grinned having known full well she would react like this.
" Act? Ha I am tougher than you! you think I have to act?"
They were in the middle of the arguing match, Four having managed to roll over and deflect most of her blows, when they heard a low cough above them. Two pairs of innocent different color'd blue eyes looked up into a pair of dark brown amused eyes.
" Hey guys! I didnt know this was makeout time to scare the new transfers! Damn...I needa grab a girl too"
His handsom face was lit up with amusement, and a trace of sorrow. After a year he still hurt over Marlene. Tris glowerd at him.
" Well there's always Christina, I mean you two are training the initiats together, what more bonding could you need? "
The amusment died in his eyes. Tris immediatly felt sorry, she hadn't meant to be cruel, but she knew her comment had been a low blow. Even Four was giving her a odd look. Wait ..They were giving her odd looks, not mad, angry ones!
" Ok whats going on? Is there something that you all forgot to tell me!? "
She glared at each of them in turn, while they squirmed under her gaze.
" .Now!"
Gulping Uriah turned to Four for support, Four promptly shook his head and looked down.
" Coward"
Uriahs voice hissed through his teeth. Four just smiled at him.
" Fine! Me and Christina have been talking alot and were good friends, but thats all it is,for now, maybe someday.. but neither of us could handle it presently. Please dont tell the others I dont want it getting out and our friendship being ruined."
His voice was pleading and desperate, and all Tris could do was nod. This was not a laughing matter. Christina hadn't told her! She was going to have a few words with that girl!
" Alright people LISTEN UP!"
Tori's demanding voice rang across the room.
" From here we will be showing you where your dorms will be. You will have a free time from 6 on to do whatever you want. We have a tattoo parlor, clothing stores, regular stores and basically anything else you want. Everything you buy will cost you points instead of money at this present time. Once you are an established Dauntless you will begin to work and earn money like everyone else here. Once you have a job, the point system will be taken away and you will begin to purchase with cash. Alright, now im sure you all have been informed about the Faction before blood motto? I see you have, well in this case tattoos, piercings and hair styles are all a big part of that. To BE Dauntless you have to LOOK dauntless, got it? "
The whole crowd screamed and yelled stomping with their feet and clapping. Freedom of choice was all they heard.
" Alright lets get this over with! Dauntless born initiats head to your dorms with Uriah and Christina ,you had better not even need a guide to show you them, i'll be seeing most of you at the tattoo shop. Transfers, follow Four and Six , I really hope to see you guys at the tattoo shop. You guys have alot of work to do physically before you will truly look Dauntless."
The chaos was overwhelming as the teens began to pick things up and follow their trainers. It was a full hour before they were all settled in and able to roam around.
Collapsing next to Four by the chasm Tris leaned on him sighing.
" Four?"
"Hmmm"
His voice was calm.
"Were we this much work when we first came here? Im exhausted, are you?"
He suddenly smile and leaned down to kiss her, after a few moments he pulled back and leaving his hand on her cheek smiled.
" Tris, youve been exhausting since I met you"
Leaning down before she could protest he took advantage of their few,rare, minuets of privacy.
Thers you go folks :D I know its kinda confusing but i want the story to be from their point of view, yet about other characters. Now time for my favorite part HEARING FROM YOU! Love it? Hate it ? REVIEW IT!