Chapter Three
Wow, I've gotten to a third chapter and it's still making sense I haven't trailed off and started talking about bunnies or anything, anyway bunnies are so cute...damn so close. Anyway I hope everything's making sense so far. And my sister's teaching me the wonders of grammar.
She actually threatened to tie me to a chair, and pin my eyes open unless used proper grammar!
Anyway please review; it's my reason for living!!
NEW YORK
When Spidey got on the scene it was already chaotic; there were people all over the place. At first he couldn't see the object of all this chaos. Then, "oh crap" was all he had to say. It seemed that the once great scientist Doc Ock was free...again.
"Why do I even bother?" Spider-man asked himself, of course he knew why. "With great power, comes great responsibility" he said under his breath. With a sigh barely more volume than his earlier sigh, he leaped into battle.
TARDIS
When Rose and Jack came back in The Doctor was standing there as if he was incredibly bored, and had been waiting for hours.
Which of course he hadn't, all and all he'd been waiting roughly 15 minutes. Rose and Jack were wearing much more normal clothes. Without even a hint of clown.
"About time" the Doctor chided, making a huge show of checking his watch and tapping his watch. Rose bumped into him, "I'm so sorry" she replied in a joking voice.
As the trio left Rose thought about the Doctor, he looked worried back there, and he was spacing out a bit more than usual. Rose hoped he was okay. She looked up and realized that Jack was giving her a strange look, realising that she had spaced out she smiled at him to reassure him that she was okay.
He grinned back at her and then she, Jack and the Doctor joined hands and walked in an indiscriminate direction.
"Where are we going?' she and Jack asked almost in unison. "Oh well..." said the Doctor scratching his head with his spare hand "I don't know really" he finished. Looking at Jack and Rose as if waiting for them.
"Ooh, I've gotten an idea," said Jack who wanted to raise his hand but couldn't because he was holding Rose's and the Doctor's hands. "How about we wander around until we hear the sound of a person screaming".
"Shouldn't be long" said Rose "our record for being in any given place without having to race to someone in need is...about 5 minutes". Just then as if the universe had responded to Rose's statement they heard the sound of a distant scream. They stared at each other for about a second, before racing off to help.
Well that one was a little shorter than what I usually write but next chapter The Doctor and co. meet Spidey.
It'll be dramatic so I hope you'll like it!
Anyway review!!