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And for those who actually like my story here's another preview of the third chapter:
She had to run, the wind combed through her night sky hair. Her pulse began to speed up underneath her snow pale skin. With a cry, she threw herself at one tree and laid limp against it as she tired to cool her burning lungs by breathing greedily the cool night air. The echo of a loud howl made her gasp as she looked back.
She pushed herself off the tree and started to sprint through the woods and blocked her face with her arms from low vines and branches. It was coming and it was coming FAST. A dark figure then materialized on her path and she dug her heels into the ground, the sudden stop mad her tip over onto the ground. With loud and heavy breaths she pushed her hair back to look at the husky, primitive figure that took a step forward made her bones lock into place. Her dark eyes watched as the figure stand over her, both paws placed on sides of her head. Her heart raced, he had her pinned underneath him! Her eyes widened when she looked up at his eyes, only to see bright yellow eyes with red pupils that glared into her own eyes sent shivers down her spine.
She turned her head to the side, it was only afterward she realized her mistake. She felt something wet press gently into her neck, her mind went blank. She gasped as it seemed to linger there, feeling a sort of breeze on her neck did she realize that he was smelling her! Her skin started to heat up from the contact and she was sure that her pale skin was now stained a bright pink from the gesture. Its nose was immediately lifted off of her and to say she couldn't help but feel a bit disappointed. It lifted a claw and gingerly let her hair shift through its fingers like sand. The same claw then placed itself to her face and turned it towards him, forcing her to look straight back up at those gold colored eyes with the ruby pupils. She noted that they seem to jump from one place to another. It then dawned upon what what exactly he was doing. He was inspecting her!
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