AUTHORS NOTE!: Hey guys! It's Cambo here and I am so excited to have this chapter be read! If you've stuck it out this far then be prepared for on hell of an epic battle. The traffic for this has been pretty extensive and I am happy to see that, please leave a review of your thoughts on the story! I would love some feedback. Anyway! Enjoy =)
Visual Aids to made up characters:
Gimlock: Large Namekian, body structure of Demon King Piccolo with Nail's facial structure.
Jax: A white colored version of Cui
Fortu: A blue version of Jeice with a scottish accent (because all his people have weird fucking accents lol)
ALSO- no I am not writing Fortu with his accent, so just imagine it...OK!
Chapter 2
Age 740, Yardrat
Speeding to the planets surface in his pod, with a fiery passion burning in his heart, Raditz couldn't stop laughing. Raditz had not ye been on the front lines, tasked with training exercises with Saibamen, but now he was finally getting his chance at a real fighter. Though Raditz loathed Frieza, his Sayian blood loved the idea of a challenge. After years of being mocked, he was finally able to compete with more of the elite soldiers of Frieza's army. Even able to keep up with Zarbon. "I'll show them all" Raditz thought with a snaring growl. Raditz pod hit with a thunderous explosion, behind him he heard the sounds of four other pods crashing near him.
Raditz opened his pod and jumped out, taking a deep breath and sighing with satisfaction "I love the smell of upcoming fight!" he said with a relaxed tone. "Man Raditz, you really a twisted little punk" said a booming voice, Raditz turned to the voice glaring "don't talk down to me, slug! I'll not be sassed by a Namek!". Gimlock was a very large and very powerful Namekian warrior who was kidnapped and sold to the Frieza army several years ago. Over time, he grew to enjoy the violence and power, getting stronger and stronger, accepting any and all challenges. So when Turles came to him with the offer to join him and Raditz to fight opponents of all strengths, Gimlock couldn't refuse. Gimlock laughed at Raditz temper, rubbing Raditz head gently "little Raditz acting so tough", Raditz swatted his arm away in anger "shut up!". "Gimlock! Leave Raditz alone, I can't stand his whining" said Turles as he landed next to them. Gimlock smirked at Turles "little teasing good for 'em Capt, toughen him up" Turles smirked at this "good point, continue". Raditz glared at Turles "Don't mock me!". Turles and Gimlock both laughed at this silently.
"Enough of this chatter, Master Frieza isn't paying you to goof off!" said Jax as he landed a few feet away from the three comrades. Turles glared at Jax "You aren't in charge here Jax, this is my expedition" Turles snarled. Jax was the fill in replacement for his then-mentor and friend, Dodoria. Rumor spoke that the rebel outlaw, who destroyed many properties and men owned by Frieza, also had hand in the execution of Dodoria. Frieza had insisted that Jax go on this particular hunt, simply to repay him for his hard efforts as well as a compensation for his loss. Jax crossed his arms at this comment, spitting in their directions "we don't work under monkeys and slugs, right Fortu?". Next him a humanoid man colored blue lands next to Jax "that's right" he says in a strange accent. Fortu was the first lieutenant in Jax's elites, it was said that he got into an encounter with Zarbon at one point and pushed him to the point of transformation. Raditz glared at the duo, but before he could say anything, Gimlock motioned for him to be silent. Raditz grit his teeth and looked off to the side, Jax smirked at this "I was ordered to make sure you amateurs got the job done, Why Lord Frieza didn't task us to do it is beyond me. I suppose the 'help' occasionally needs a purpose in life" Turles smiles at this "w're doing it because he wants the job to get done". Fortu growled at this " Shut ya goddamn mouth, ape or I'll shut it for ya!" Turles positioned himself to appear open to attack "make your move blue boy".
Suddenly, Raditz heard the a wind breaking rapidly, Raditz turned to see a bright orb of energy heading straight for the group. "What the hell!" he thought just before quickly blasting off into the sky "Uncle! Gimlock!" he shouted out to them. Turles and Gimlock were right on it, following Raditz close behind. Turles looked to see Jax and Fortu had also seen the attack. Jax and Fortu were up in the air moments after them. Turles scoffed at this "Damn" he thought "I was hoping that would have hit". The blast connected, destroying all the space pods that brought them there. "Damn it!" shouted Fortu "I just bought that thing!" Fortu looked over to Turles, his eyes filled with rage "You stupid ugly son of a bitch! I'm gonna rip your-" "enough Fortu!" interrupted Turles "Stop being a fool and look behind you!".
Fortu and Jax turned to see a figure standing several feet away from them in the sky. The man was dressed in odd armor of black and green cloth as well as wearing some strange turban-like mask. But the thing that caught everyones eye, was the tail that waved back and forth in a predator like manner. The warrior stood there silent, gazing at the hunters who came for him. Jax and Fortu glared at the figure "how did he get behind me?" thought Jax. Turles stared in joyful surprise, the rumors had been true, there was another Sayian! Gimlock looked over to Turles in amazement "Captain... Is that..." Turles nodded gently "another Sayian" he answers. Gimlock smiled at this, his heart filling with excitement "He's mine" he stated and before Turles could stop him, Gimlock charged, roaring in excitement "fight me, Renegade!".
Gimlock threw a fury of fists and kicks to the masked Sayian, but not a single one made contact. The Sayian casually moved out of the way as though his attacks were nothing. Finally the Sayian made a mistake, dodging one of his fake outs, the Sayian left himself open. Gimlock thrusted an uppercut to the Sayian. Suddenly, the Sayian was gone, vanished, Gimlock couldn't find him "I can't sense his energy! He's moving-". Gimlock felt a hard blow into his stomach, causing him to spit up and lose his breath. "So...fast!" he choked out, finishing his thought. Gimlock could feel himself losing consciousness, but it wasn't until the sayian flip kicked him in the back of the head that he truly blacked out. Gimlock darted to the ground and hit the dirt with explosive force. When the smoke cleared, he was seen half buried in the crater.
Turles looked on in amazement, "I blinked and he was gone! How can he move so fast?" he spoke to himself. Raditz, on the other hand, felt nothing but rage at the sight of his friends defeat. Raditz charged to the masked Sayian "I'll kill you!" he shouted as his speed increased. Raditz launched his fists to the masked Sayian, who blocked them with ease. Turles watched as the kid attacked this obviously powerful warrior and argued with himself. As a Sayian, he craved the chance to take a shot at this guy but did not want to ruin Raditz chance. Turles smirked to himself "ah fuck it" he said softly, he then charged to the fight and joined in with his own fiery attacks. Despite him joining in, no matter what they threw at him, the Sayian continued dodging their movements.
The masked Sayian stopped his dodging and once again, he disappear. Raditz and Turles look around for him desperately. "My scouters not picking him up" said Turles "who cares!" shouted Raditz, an obvious anger in his voice "I don't need the help of my old uncle to beat this tra- Raditz was interrupted by a swift knee to the face, blasting him to the ground. Turles fires a hurricane of energy in the direction of the Sayian. The Masked Sayian flies towards Turles, dodging each of his blasts, Turles and the Sayian get into another blow to blow fight. Turles, one of the few who've managed to keep up with him, laughed at this "yes!" he screamed as his attacks continued "I knew you were powerful!" The Sayian disappears again, appearing to his right. Turles turned his head and opened his mouth, a suddenly flash of energy erupted from his mouth, making contact with the Sayian.
Jax watched this scene carefully, observing the rebel very carefully, there was something odd about him. Jax studied under Dodoria, a powerful monster who would eat his victims if they provoked him. To think a mere Sayian could beat such a grand warrior as Dodoria. Yet, this Sayian moved a a speed that even Jax was having a hard time keeping up. "This rebel is quite something" commented Fortu, Jax nodded in agreement "have you noticed that he'd holding back?". Fortu looked to Jax curiously "how can you tell?" he asked curiously "easy" replied Jax "each blow he's pulled it slightly, this Sayian isn't even trying... what's his power level read?" Fortu turned forward and activated his scouter, after a few minutes, it gave him an answer "readings at thirteen hundred. Impressive for a Sayian". Jax scoffed at this "also inaccurate. The Namek's reading is at least over sixteen hundred and Turles sits at twenty thousand". Fortu looked at Jax with worried curiosity "So, he's hiding his power?" Jax nodded at this, a slight twinkle in his eye. "The smoke is clearing" he said "let's see what this warrior truly looks like".
As the smoke cleared, Turles floated back a few feet away, he knew whatever state the Sayian would be in, he would be angry. Raditz shot up from the dirt, stopping at Turles side. Raditz had blood dripping from his forehead. Turles smirked at him "Decided to join us, child?" Raditz snapped at him violently "I said you aren't needed old man!" Suddenly a figure ripped through the smoke, delivering a massive knee kick to Raditz gut. Raditz passed out almost immediately, falling to the ground, only to be caught by the tail. "I've told you hundreds of times Raditz, be respectful to your elders!". Turles looked on in surprise and shock, standing before him, was his older brother Bardock.
Bardock stared at his younger brother, holding his son by his tale, Bardock smirked at Turles "been a long time... brother". Turles smiled at his words, a loss for some of his own. "Enough with the family crap" cried out Jax "Turles, kill this traitor" Turles looked over to the duo and spat in their direction Shut your fucking mouth" he said calmly. Jax was taken aback from his statement, since he had received this ship and this job, Turles had been the most obedient of the Sayian squad. Jax glared at him "Turles you are making a big mistake-" "I am not! I'm freeing myself" he cried out "I'm sick of murdering people who have the strength to fight for their existence". Turles floated near his brother, the two beside each other, brothers in arms yet again. "How dare you!" growled Fortu "I will tear you apart in the name of our master". Bardock smiled "We'll see about that", Bardock began his descent to the ground, everyone following him.
The men touched the ground. Jax and Fortu standing several feet away from Bardock and Turles right behind him. Bardock spoke without facing his brother "Turles, I appreciate you deciding to side with me, but" Bardock turned to Turles and glared at him, a glare that sent a shiver down his spin "if you cut in on this fight, I will kill you". Turles looked at his brother with awe, he had become something so much different than when they last met. He was calm in battle, not hot headed or arrogant as he once had been, it's as though something changed him. "I wouldn't dream of it brother... give me Raditz". bardock smiled and tossed his son to Turles, Turles caught him "I'll take Gimlock an-" Suddenly Bardock was gone, Turles looked around confused "You should be watching more carefully monkey!"
Turles looked up to see Fortu jumped down to him, gathering a large amount of energy to hit him with, Turles stared in shock "Shit, i can't dodge it!" he thought. The next thing he knew, blood was flicked onto him, Fortu had stopped, the energy ball he held depleted, blood erupted from his mouth. STicking from his chest was a hand, behind him, stood Bardock, cold as sneered at this "attacking an opponent using such childish tactics, disgraceful!" Bardock threw the corpse into the air, "we'll start with you!" Bardock fires a large blue energy ball to the corpse, evaporating it almost instantaneously. Bardock faces Jax, glaring "this is our fight, I expect you to keep it that way!". Jax felt sick in his stomach, he had never faced such a swift opponent, he was worried, he was scared, he didn't want to die. Jax pushed his scouter and began shouting "We need help! We need help! Get down her-" Jax felt the powerful blow of Bardock's fist against his cheek, the feeling of his jaw breaking and snapping. Jax cried out in pain, trying to hold his jaw. Bardock stands by and watches, Turles to his back "Bardock...he called for my crew, they will be here in a few minutes.
Bardock looked upon the weakened Jax, how pathetic he was, what a sad sight for an warrior to be. Defeated and crying for help, it made Bardock feel sick to his stomach. Bardock help up his hand, gather energy. Turles looked at him with surprise and confusion "Bardock, there are over one hundred soldiers on that ship!" Bardock simply smiled "let them come" he spoke softly "This war begins now". As Jax felt the heat and fire of Bardocks blast, he wondered if this truly was the beginning of the end, but that thought, nor any of his thoughts, was very shot lived.
Else where...
Staring out the window from sheer boredom, the now teenage Prince found himself more and more irritated. "Why do Nappa and I have to come to this god forsaken world?" he thought to himself. Vegeta had been training day in and day out for the past few months. Upon hearing news of a warrior Sayian rebel going throughout the cosmos and destroying Frieza capitals and militia bases have inspired Vegeta. Vegeta would one day find his place in the universe one day, and that place would not be at someones side, he would achieve his birth right, the right to be called a legend. "The Super Sayian" he said to himself "Your power will be mine". The sound of his door opening broke his concentration, Vegeta looked over to see Nappa had entered. Vegeta scoffed at him "you should learn to knock Nappa! I don't like people entering my private quarters". Nappa bowed apologetically "I am sorry Prince, but I came to inform you that we arrived at Tech-Tech".
A few months ago, contact was lost on the planet of Tech-Tech, two elite soldiers were sent to figure the problem, Abo and Kado. That was two weeks ago, Frieza became nervous, thinking it might be this rebel whose been destroying the Frieza territories. "I can't believe I am tasked with this, what is Lord Frieza thinking?" Nappa nodded as the Prince spoke "Wasting my potential like this, I can't stand it! I don't deserve that shit!" punched the ships wall, denting it severely, Nappa put his hand on his shoulder "Vegeta calm down, think of this as a test of strength. Abo and Kado were very powerful elites, this opponent should be fun"
Vegeta entered the bridge, ignoring the foot men greeting im, staring at the planet, Vegeta felt a smile crawl on his face "You're right Nappa" he said with an excitement in his voice "Let us see this fighters true strength".
AUTHOR NOTE: Holy shit I did another chapter in one night! and it's only 3 am this time! lol Thank you guys for enjoying this series and for the review, I hope you like this too. I will be kinda busy, but another chapter is on it's way. What will Bardock do with 100 men coming to attack them? Who is Vegeta going to be fighting? What do you care? You just want the episode, well, you will get it! Thanks guys and please be sure to leave reviews!
