WOW GAIZ!CHAPTER 3 ALREDY!thx 4 all of ur support!
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"commander..."
"THE commaner..."
a voyse eccoed in the this another dream?what was this feeling the commander feel?
then suddenly the armless legless thing came back running and bumpet into the comamdner...
the commander looked into his eyes with love
(this is the part were the boy starts having crush on the other boy so if u dont like LEAVE NOW!i now this is weried!O3O)
commander relized some thing
something that fellt... real... this fellt real
shure he new it was a dreem, but the emoshuns he fellt and the presense of the thing he loved fellt...real
the thing huggd him and unleeshd its raynbow commadner opend his mowth and they FRENTCH KISSD for 1 howrs.
"goodbye commadnr" eh say
"MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHY WHY WHJY WHY WHY"
"its break tiem now"
sundely HIS ALARM GONE OF
"ITS A CASIO ON PORK BEESH" alarm screamed as commander scared of fmaf likejumpscar escrea get out of his mlp fim bed
"remember grounded sun your grounded" miss commander *his mommy) sayed...
it seemed like another normal day grounded for commader but he felt like today was a different today...
he got his backpack witch was black with red dots with "ONE DIRECTIO" ritten on it in big italic blue letters. it held exactly 39573857937=05937593 papers thats how good commander is at making back packs... inside the back packs cotten blue insides were 924 englis teckts books... commander remember why today felt different today...
HE FORGOT TO DO ENGLICH HOMEWOR! OMG!
then his mommy found his secret art
IT WAS A DED BARE!
"MR UR GROUNDED GROUNDED GORUNDED FOR 139473478375 MORE MILENI UMS~!"
the commander cryed as he slowely walked to porky micnh high school musickl...
OGM THIS TOOK 5EVER 2 COMPLEET! OKKAY IF you dont LIKE thestor y you dont have to readit u know.