So I decided to write the love-making scene. But like I said, it's my first, so please be nice. And I'm sorry it's so short but I just need to find my confidence.
So human, he thought. She was so human that maybe she could help him feel his humanity again. That dark hole inside him that screamed after being filled. The place his humanity once was.
He lay down on her again and kissed her. Then he moved his lips along her jawline down her neck. He could feel her shiver. That was a sensitive place for human who was more than once bitter by a vampire, but this one was not going to hurt her. Elijah was softly moving his lips over the skin of her neck.
When he moved lower towards her breast he could hear her heart beating faster. He smiled and his left hand found its way up to one of her breasts and his tongue took care of the other one. At the first contact it made with her nipple Elena's back arched and she moaned his name.
Elijah could swear he'd never heard more beautiful sound.
When he was done with her breast he moved back up to her lips and gave another kiss. Then he kneeled between her legs again and he put his thumbs under the strings of her panties. She bit her lip. She placed both of her legs on one side so he could remove them. After they were somewhere on the floor he grab her right ankle and put it on his left shoulder. With Elena's eyes following his every move Elijah placed kisses all over it, making his ways to her calves and her thigh.
From his now lying position he looked up to see Elena's dark eyes burning with desire because he was closing up on finding the place she wanted him the most. He could feel it, sense it. Her arousal.
He smiled and deliberately avoided making contact with the sweet spot between her legs. Moving on to her left thigh he could hear her whine of disapproval.
"Was there something I missed, my love," he casually asked when he reached her left ankle.
"You could say that," Elena answered biting down to her index finger.
"Shall we see what I could do about that? And maybe correct my mistake?" he was smiling at her now.
She nodded.
He lay down and embraced her legs with his arms that his hands were now on her underbelly reaching for her pussy. Before he dived into her he once more looked into her eyes and all he could see was desire and love.
When his tongue made its first contact with her sensitive skin she shivered and groaned; and that made him want her even more. He moved the tip of his tongue over her clit in circular motion and that made her involuntary arch her back from the mattress. He moved one his hands up to reach her sternum and he ran his palm across her belly down to her core.
The moment she felt his fingers on her spot she shivered again and ran her hands through his hair just to keep him in place. He very lightly mover his fingers at her entrance but he wouldn't put them in, where she wanted them.
"Elijah?" she moaned.
"Yes, my love," he said into her clit.
"Please!" she begged.
"Please what?" he giggled.
She raised his head with her hands: "Are you trying to make me explode?"
He smiled again.
"Don't make me push you," she said basically sating up reaching his fingers. "I need you in me," she said urgently. "Now," she grabbed his arms and pulled him over body. They kissed.
"Are you su – "
"Yes. You asked me before and my answered has not changed, Elijah," she kissed him once more to reassure him.
"As you wish, my love," he said and placed his cock at her entrance. He looked into her eyes and slowly entered her.
In this moment he knew he reached the gates of heaven and in a while all his sins will be washed away by Elena's purity. Because if someone as good and compassionate as Elena let him be a part of her, there is no way he was doomed. There was still hope for him. For his own redemption that he'd seek for so long.
They moved together in a motion of passion and love like a ship that is sailing the ocean. Free, living in a moment. Elena placed her hands on his back to support herself because she felt it coming. Elijah felt it too so he raised himself up and his fingers reached her clitoris.
In a couple of seconds Elena came like a hurricane and her tapering walls made Elijah to come right after her. He moved down to kiss her and then he roll over on his back and took Elena with him so her head was resting on his chest and her leg was wrapped around him.
They both lay down for a while and Elijah could hear Elena's heart beating slower. She fell asleep.
"Oh, my lovely Elena," he whispered stroking her hair. "If only you knew what you had done to me. I haven't felt this ways for what seems like forever. You made me feel like a human again. And it is something I've been missing the most as a vampire," he kissed her forehead. "I love you, Elena Gilbert."
"I love you, too," she whispered.
So did you like it? If yes, please let me know if you want me to continue. I'm sure what course the would take but if you like my love-scene-writing I can promise more. If not, that's okay too. I will just stick to my basics.