Hello, all. This is the first ever Writers Commentary type thing that I've done for this story. What happens is, I'm going to show you exactly what I was going for in a few chapters. The first will be, of course, the first chapter. This chapter took forever to write, because I tried to write a fan fiction for Kingdom Hearts at least three times. But after I got the special moment of inspiration and finally got started, the rest came easy. Now, all the text in bold will be my commentary. The things that were originally in bold (the title, caption and so on) will now be in Italics.

Double Date?

A Kingdom Hearts Fan Fiction

By: The Darkside Incarnate

-Chapter 1: The Plan-

If you've read my stories before you may have noticed that I begin every single story with the title bolded (you can't tell here) and underlined, the caption in italics and bolded (still can't tell), my penname positioned to the right margin (also in bold), along with the chapter, contained in two dashes and in bold. This is how I like to start every story, with all necessary information at the top.

Now, I begin the chapter with our favorite Nobody, Roxas, although, since this is an AU, he isn't a Nobody, he's just a normal high school student. After Rocky Relationships, I planned to begin all of the Double Date stories with Roxas, but I broke that tradition with Livid Love, beginning with Sakura instead.

He starts doing what all guys are good at…ogling stuff they can't have.

I'm sitting on a bench when it happens. She smiles at me. Namine, yeah, that's right, the girl I've been crushing on for GOD knows how long. Her blonde hair slides through the air, her eyes glowing. Wait…is she really looking at me.

'Oh crap she's going to talk to me? What do I do? What do I do?' the thoughts swirl through my head like a crazed tornado. God I wish that Sora was here, he'd know what to do.

Notice how he thinks wishes that Sora was here, because he would have the courage to get up and talk to the girl. Roxas has this issue where he thinks Sora would be better equipped to deal with romantics, because he, as I've pointed out, isn't too skilled at playing the leading man quite yet.

And magically, just like that, my spiky haired, optimistic brunette of a cousin is beside me. "Hey Roxas, what're you doing?"

"Um…um…admiring the view of…"

"What view?"

"The one of the uh…wall…" I'm such an idiot. I mean if I can't even think of something intelligent to say to my own flesh and blood then what am I going to do when Namine' actually notices me?

Sora stares where I stare, then grins his signature cheesy smile. "Right…" he laughs, "the wall."

"It's the truth!"

I originally brought Sora into it because he's so fun to make fun of. He's down right hysterical. But I found that Roxas and Sora could have great chemistry, and banter between them was pretty damn fun to write.

"Oh, and I guess it doesn't matter that NAMINE' is in front of that wall?" he asks loudly, laughing his head off the whole time.

"Dude, shut up!" I whack him in the head with one fist.

"Ow!" Sora falls off of his seat, hitting the ground with a thump.

Wow, he made a real crash that time.

"You know," Sora murmurs, rubbing a newly made bump on his head, "if you're gonna hit me every time you have girl trouble, then we'll have some problems. I mean, you're always staring at her."

"Like you always stare at Kairi?"

"Yeah, but me and her are dating. Besides, don't get depressed, she was going to come over here…but then she just changed her mind and turned."

This sentence essentially introduces to the reader the concept of Sora and Kairi being a happy and established couple; a concept that may not hold up so well in Rocky Relationships.

"True…wait…she was GOING to come over?" I ask, bewildered, I redirecting my attention to Namine' then to Sora, then back to Namine'. She's no longer looking at me.

She's so beautiful. It's amazing how her hair is like sun light, bright and amazing, it's captivating how her form perfectly fits her clothes. She's just…perfect.

"Dude!" I turn back to Sora, with a dazed expression on my face.

"Um…what?"

"You're doing it again."

-Sora-

Now, this tells the reader that the entire story won't be told through Roxas' point of view. I feel that stories should always have multiple perspectives, to give layer to a story. But, I mean, books like "Heavy Metal and You," are brilliant, and they only tell the story of one character. I could never do it that way, though.

My cousin Roxas turns back to me, "Um…what?"

"You're doing it again."

"Doing what?"

Someone's in denial.

"Staring at—never mind, I'm clearly not getting my point across."

"You have a point?" He asks; his voice layered with that tone that he has when he's thinking about a girl. That voice that tells me that he couldn't care less about what I'm saying, all he cares about is Namine'.

"Yes and—"I stop, an idea forming in my head.

"What…" before he can finish his question I'm gone.

"I'll be right back!" I yell to him, before dashing towards the other side of the school. It's the end of the day, the time when everyone is getting in their cars, or being picked up by others.

'Where is she…?'

I finally come upon her, my red headed beauty, stepping into Olette's car. Kairi is an amazing girl; let's just get that part across right now. She's nice, funny and smart, and we've been friends since we were kids. Not to mention she looks great in miniskirts.

Hey she's my girlfriend; I'm aloud to have thoughts. You should see what happens when she actually DOES wear miniskirts.

Kairi's introduction begins like a lot of my introductions, with a brief summary of the personality and an outlook on the more…attractive aspects of their body.

"Hey Kairi!" I shout.

She turns around, "I'm right here you know."

Making fun of Sora is so fun…

"I have an idea, Ithinkweshouldgoonadoubledatewithroxasandnaminebecauseroxasistooshytoasknamineoutsoithinkwecanmakeiteasierforhimifewejusthaveadoubledatewiththem!" I say, all in the space of a couple seconds.

See what I mean?

"Repeat, but slower this time," Kairi says, I have a tendency to talk too fast if you haven't all ready noticed.

"I think that we should go on a double date with Roxas and Namine' because Roxas is to shy to ask Namine out, so I think we can make it easier for him if we just have a double date with them," it takes all my strength to talk that slow.

"Roxas likes Namine'?"

"Yeah."

"I KNEW IT!" Kairi squeals.

"Aw…" I say, falling on my back from the force of the strange scream.

"Namine' likes him too! She's been to shy to ask him though."

"REALLY?"

We both stare at each other, a sly grin that screams "deviousness" crosses Kairi's face, a huge grin on mine. A plan forms.

This is where the chaos starts…

-A couple seconds of scheming later…-

"Okay, I'll ask Namine' if she wants to go, I'll tell her it's just us…when you guys show up we'll just say it was an accident. Just make sure Roxas is at your house, so that you guys can get there when we get there."

"Yes sir!" I salute her.

"You're so cute—"Olette honks her horn impatiently.

What could possibly be more fun then making fun of Sora? Sora and Kairi's rare but still bizarre and sometimes sexual moments. It's just so…wow. I love me some Sokai.

"We should invite Hayner and Olette too!"

Before I can answer, Kairi jumps into Olette's car and they drive away. As I watch her go she shouts, "Stick to the plan!"

This is going to be a very interesting night.

-Roxas-

In five minutes Sora is back, and he's begging me to go to his house. Well…I don't have anything better to do…

A bit of foreshadowing never hurt anyone, right?

TO BE CONTINUED

A\N well…how was the First Chapter? This is my first ever fan fiction attempt. Please, no flames. I know it's bad. Just tell me how I can improve, not how bad it is. Thanks. Anyway, till chap. 2.

And, like all my chapters, it ends on an author's note.

The next segment of the Extras Edition will be a Bloopers section, where everything that CAN go wrong, usually does. Tune in next time, folks!