Alright so I got a couple reviews that I want to talk about.

The first one is from Cake;

"Omg I love this story I like how it reminds me of the vampire diaries *wink wink* please continue!"

Do you agree with this? If you think it's too much like vampire diaries let me know. You will not hurt my feelings.

The second one I don't know who it's from;

"I think you should make it like Chris is a witch and makes Tris a daylight ring like tvd (the vampire diaries) :)"

Should I make Christina a witch? If you agree let me know.

Now on to the chapter! Hope I didn't take too long to update!

Chapter 3

Tris' POV; a week later

I come home from work around 10:45pm. I don't normally work that late but I had to cover for Tori. I walk into the bathroom to take a shower and as soon as I walk in I see a note on the mirror. I take it off and read it.

If you don't want anything to happen to Tobias be at the chasm tonight at 11:00

XOXO Peter & Marcus

No! What do they want with us? I storm out of the bathroom and into the bedroom. I go to my nightstand and I grab my gun and all ten of my knifes. Then I go to the dresser get another gun and extra ammo. I flit out of the apartment and all the down to the chasm. I get there at 10:57 and I see Peter standing next to Marcus with a tied up unconscious Tobias. I pull my gun out and send a bullet flying right between Marcus and Peter to get their attention. They look over to me and Peter steps in front.

"What do you want?" I say coldly.

"I know what you are and I want you dead." He says. Shit! He can't know I worked so hard to keep it hidden. Just act like you have no idea what he's talking about. Maybe he'll buy it.

"What are you talking about Peter?"

"You know exactly what I'm talking about!" he says. "And you're going to come with us so nothing happens to your boyfriend over there."

"Just leave him out of this!"

"Oh, We won't hurt him as long as you listen to us!"

"I'll do whatever you say." I tell him. "But Four stays with me and the second you hurt him… I will kill you."

"Okay; just come with us." Peter says. "You have to carry Four."

I run over to Tobias and start untying him from the railing. Marcus walks over to Peter and tries to whisper but forgets I'm a vampire and can still hear him.

"I thought we were going to inject her with rosemary when we get there!" he says. Damn it! How can I protect Tobias if I have rosemary in my system?

"This is easier! We don't have to carry any bodies!" Peter says. "Now shut up! She a vampire and can hear us right now!"

"She can't hear us! We're fine!"

"Actually I can hear you!" I say picking Tobias up with ease.

"Shit!" Marcus says under his breath. Then he grabs my arm and drags me down dark hallways I've never been down. I don't think Marcus knows where he's going because he stays a couple steps behind Peter. I study each turn we make, every rock, hole we come across. Just in case Tobias and I get out so we can find our way back.

Peter opens a door and Marcus throws me in. I try my best to shield Tobias when I fall. They chain me to a wall and I'm injected with rosemary. I feel the burning pain running though my veins and every muscle in my body tenses. Then everything goes black

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"Tris!" a voice says. "Tris wake up!" I open my eyes and see Tobias looking down at me. "Tris! Are you okay?"

"Yeah, I'm fine." I say sitting up.

"What's going on?" he asks.

"Peter is working with Marcus and I have to do whatever they say. So they don't hurt you." I say leaving out the part about them knowing I'm a vampire. I will not tell Tobias about this; not now at least.

"You don't have to do that for me!" he says. "If you got hurt, I would never forgive myself."

Before I can say anything the door opens and peter walks in with Marcus. I guard Tobias as much as I can when Marcus steps forward.

"Oh, relax I'm not going to touch him." He says. He reaches in his back pocket and pulls out a stem of rosemary. I step backwards a little but Marcus just moves forward. Tobias steps infront of Marcus and pushes him back. Marcus stumbles but comes back quickly and shoves Tobias down. I run to Marcus punch his jaw and get right in his face.

"Remember our deal." I snarl with my true face showing.

"He'll find out one day and he'll leave you." Marcus says. "All this is for nothing." He leaves without another word. I push away my true face and go over to Tobias.

"What do they want with you?" he asks.

"I don't know." I lie.

Did you like it?

When should Tobias find out?

How should he find out?

Should Christina be a witch?

Is too much like The Vampire Dairies?

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Until next time!