Me: So, the story isn't very good right now, but it will get better soon, i promise.

Max: Is Dylan in the story?

Me: Well-

Fang: Why?

Max: Well, uh, it would be unfair not to.

Me: Exactly. But, he gets beat up eventually.

Fang: Good. Please, continue.

Fang POV

I sat in my chair in the front yard, thinking about my new girlfriend. I mean, she was pretty, but she wasn't natural or nice. Besides, she was only my girlfriend because she agreed not to bully my friends if I was her boyfriend. Man, it's not my fault if the friends I have aren't specifically popular or known, and I was. They always make it such a big deal. Suddenly, a car screeched into the driveway next door. What the heck? It was only 4 in the morning! These people need to stop going to parties! Oh wait, that house has been for sale for years. I wonder who bought it?

I watched the people get out of their car and unload the boxes. The Hispanic girl was kinda cute, but it was the second girl that caught my eye. She had long brown hair, chocolatey eyes, and wore modest clothes and no makeup, just jeans and a long sleeved shirt.

"Wow Fang, you creep!" You must be thinking. "You remember the color of her eyes? Jeez!"

Don't blame me. She was just next door

"Maximum? Could you help me with this box please?" the woman asked. I could only assume that she was her mother, even though they looked nothing alike.

"Sure!" The girl called out. Maximum. That is a really cool name. And her voice was so smooth, and it sounded very cool, and…..what is wrong with me? Anyway, when she walked around the truck, she caught sight of me watching her. I turned red and turned away. Stupid, stupid, stupid! Now she probably thinks I'm an idiot!

"Why do you care?" a voice inside my head said. "You don't even know her!"

"Shut up voice." I said in my thoughts. I hoped that I might be able to talk to her. Maybe she would go to my school. I hoped she would, so I could…introduce her to all my friends. Yeah, that's it. Nothing else could explain why I wanted to know her a lot.

Max POV

"Oh my gosh! Did you see that guy outside? He was hot!" I exclaimed to Ella, my new sister.

"I thought that he was ok looking." She replied. "Not my type. I don't like guys who wear all black and sit on their porch at 4 in the morning staring at random brunette girls next door."

"He was staring at me?!" I asked. "Yes! Do you think he likes me?"

"I don't know. I only just saw him today."

"Oh. Ok. So changing the subject…" I said.

We talked about different things. The first day of school coming in 2 days, making new friends, and other stuff, but I just couldn't get the boy in black off my mind. I wonder if he had a girlfriend… Oh well. Maybe I'd see him sometime.

The next day-

I was so excited for the first day of school tomorrow. Surprisingly, I was still caught up in my math, English and science skills, but I really lacked skill in creative classes. Ms. Martinez (my adoptive mother) was taking Ella and I shopping for our school supplies. We were at Staples, and I decided to wander around a bit on my own. After all, I am 14! So anyway, I rounded a corner and ran into this really pretty girl with long red hair.

"Oh my gosh. I am so sorry!" I stammered. She glared at me with so much hatred that I wondered if I've met her before.

"Watch it, idiot." She growled, pushing past me to get to the cute pencil cases. If she did go to my soon-to-be school, I would need to watch my back. I'd already given her a reason to dislike me.

Well, that's chapter 3 folks. PLEASE review. give suggestions for good parts to the story. And please, no profanity.