Laust Hart: So, like, we haven't updated in forever. See, me and Ruby actually decided to look over what you guys sent us, and we kinda gave up on fanfiction...
The truth is, English isn't our first language. We were actually still in the learning process when we started writing. We were writing phonically, so that's why it probably pissed you all off.
In fact, this story is being beta'd by somebody we know who DOES know very good English. So, expect better quality from us. Or, more like me. Here's a second reality I'd like to enlighten you all to: Ruby and I had a fight, at the moment, we're no longer friends. See, she found out I liked her sister, and got angry at me. There was a lot of fighting, including her falling me a faggot and a few other things that really hurt me...
So, yeah. This story may turn around a bit.
The character has now been renamed Maryanne Arabelle Potter.
She has black hair, bright red eyes, and scars from vampire bites. Make of this as you will.
Crimson eyes graced the presence of the new giant wolfs.
Samuel has shifted back into a wolf, while I crouched down, preparing to attack. It wasn't needed though, as the wolfs suddenly all whined, backing off.
What I wasn't aware of was that Samuel had ordered them to back down.
I thought they'd just realized I was the top of the food chain, not them, and that's why they were backing off.
Samuel shifted back again, pulling pants off a cord I hadn't noticed was tied to his leg.
"Oh..." I mumbled, wondering how the telepathy worked.
"Are they... werewolves too?" I asked. I'd never heard of a pack of werewolves before, I swore in England they were all loners...
"Yes. I'm the pack leader." Sam shrugged off.
"Ah..." This would be weird, adjusting to this thought.
And then, there was rustling in the leaves. I turned around to see-
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