OH this is what Fanfiction looks like I forgot…..

Sorry people I been dealing with a tiny crises but it's all fixed I swear flinches waiting for lighting bolt But any who I finally finished this chapter I think it might be a little short but hey I'm working on barrowed time…not mine of course.

Oh and once again the not mine dance gets up and dances like a whit boy while singing off key This is not mine not mine not mine not MINNNNNNE

Now on with the story…..

"State your designation" Renfro's voice came from everywhere and nowhere at once.

Max looked around in an attempt to maybe see Renfro. She wondered what it was that she had planned. "What part of Kiss my Ass do you not understand?" she shot hoping her sarcasm sounded genuine.

After her words escaped a piercing noise entered the room Max's hands flew on top of her ears as she tried to block it out. She started to wonder how this was supposed to break her when she felt one of her shaking fits happening. Inside she started to scream this can't happen now not now. She was so consumed in trying to make the fit stop that she barely noticed the pitch fade into nothing. Shortly after her tremors went with it. Standing up she looked around hoping what she thought wasn't true.

"Do you like our new installment 452?" Renfro's voice floated across the room "It was built shortly after you and the other 09ers left. We found out that by making a very specific pitch we can trigger your seizures a fault that the X5 series has as you are well aware of." A sick sound of satisfaction entered Renfro's voice. "It is actually what we used to reindoctrin your sister, 734 or as you called her Brin." Max's heart filled with pity for her big sister having to go through this. "It took 2 hours I believe, for her to remember who she really was." Renfro spoke as if talking about the weather "but you always were stronger then the rest." with that the pitch started once again.

Max clasped her hands over her ears in hopes of blocking it out but before she could her seizures took over soon she was crumpled on the floor focusing on not biting her tongue off something Manticore had warned them of. When the noise stopped Max let out a breath she knew she had to make this look good, and she would have to last longer then two hours she would have to resist for a day.

Max pushed her self up and looked around. "State your designation" the voice floated through the room.

"You know I'm not sure could you read my barcode for me?" Max let out a hard laugh " I've been dealing with those my whole life, and you thought it would break me, you must be really desperate to pull some shit like this" With that the tone started once again. But the tremor came faster then before and stronger.

Max felt no control as she shook on the floor her body pleaded to give in but she knew she had to wait Renfro would suspect other wise.

Hours passed with the same question only to be answered with sarcastic remarks. Each seizure was worse then the next fallowed by an even more colorful come back from Max. Slowly Max lost track of the time it felt like she had been in there for months each seizure lasting a day and each tone stretching a week. Finally she felt that she could start to give in.

Sweat poured down Max's face as Renfro asked the question that was now burned into Max's mind. Her head to the ground Max let out a soft whisper "X5-452"

"What did you say?" Renfro's voice held triumph as she spoke

Max gritted her teeth " I said….X5.…"a long pause passed before Max's head shoot up and she screamed "KISS MY TRANSGINIC ASS YOU BITCH" With no energy Max dropped her head onto the ground once again preparing for another shock.

Soon she was once again in a mind rattling seizure. When it stopped Renfro's voice sounded. "Would you like to change your answer?"

Max breathed into the floor. Make it look good she spoke to herself let her think she won but put up a fight. "Just because I say my designation doesn't mean I will give in" her voice was soft with exhaustion that she didn't fake.

"That is my problem, now state your designation" Renfro voice held a secret that scared a small part of Max. The part that Lydecker controlled for so long.

After a long pause Renfro's voice came again "Would your brother want to see his heart going through this?" with that words Max hands formed fist as Before I leave I am so snapping that bitch's neck.

"X5-452" Her voice was hard as she spoke

"What?"

"X5-452, ma'm" Max sounded off as she stood up. Without another word from either a door appeared and Renfro stepped through with an X5 behind her. Renfro walked toward her and for a moment Max believed she might have figured it out known she was faking.

Renfro placed a hand on her shoulder and spoke softly "Welcome home 452" a slow breath escaped Max's lips. "734 take 452 to Psy-ops for further work" With that Brin stepped from the shadow with a smile on her face.

"Yes ma'm" placing a firm hand on Max's other shoulder she walked her out of the room. "Welcome back home little sister"

Brin took her to a small room and turned on the light "You will be taken to Psy-ops in two hours get some rest" after she spoke Brin stood for a minute. Max looked at her and saw a small hint of the old Brin look at her she leaned forward almost as if to hug but quickly her mask was replaced and she turned and walked out closing and locking the door behind her.

Max let out a deep breath and placed her head in her hands. She was 452 a soldier a killer. With that thought circling her mind she cried.

Now time for the Reviews dum dum dum

Let's see we got candyabble: thank you I hated it too I mean really Max would break that easily

Gabbie760: I know it's not very original if everybody does it. I'm not really sure which I'm going to do yet she's going to be with all of them heh heh but I'm not sure who she's really really going to be with.

Well thanks lot's for reading and I'll get the next up as soon as possible with out becoming two people…though that would be really cool I mean I could do so many things at once babbles on and on about nothing important