Hi yawl! I want to say tanks to Hedi Drakona, Janie Sin, ruiki, and
cresent02 for agreeing (almost) to letting me add them to my story! I sort
of need to thank the meanest nigen I have ever had inspiration from, fanni.
Yes you, the mean person that insulted me in the mist of my happiness. You
are a person that is bad, so I don't like you. I am a nice person unlike
you, and that is why I am including you in my story.
Now that that is over, I want to say that I know that all my previous chapters sucked royally. Sorry. I have a new format and intend to use it. Hope you like!
Daimien Sin
"Well, thanks for coming yomi." daimien said as she tried not to gawk at her friends six *noticeable* ears. The party was well under way once yusuke opened the door, oddly, carrying a large club. Daimien sat next to kuabarra and started sipping her drink, an odd-tasting mix of diet coke and some kind of sake from the makai. Kuabarra said something to her and he was apparently expecting an answer. Daimien said something like whatever and kuabarra seemed hurt.
Surprised, daimien said," I am sorry, I wasn't paying much attention, could you please repeat that?" "Well, I asked if you wanted to dance." Kuabarra said hopefully. Daimien stared stupidly at kuabarra. "Sorry, but I have to greet the guests, maybe later." then, as if on que, the doorbell rang. Daimien popped up and ran to the door before kuabarra could say a word.
And who else but kurama was there, holding a case of Mountain Dew. Daimien said hi and let him in. out of nowhere, hiei took the case and led kurama to the kitchen. Just as daimien was about to close the door, she heard a rustling over the door. Down landed daimien's friend hedi dracona. "Hello, daimien." Said hedi dryly. "Your house is harder to find than Atlantis!" " I am so sorry," said daimien with a wince. She knew how frustrated hedi became when she was lost. "Hay, why don't you go and-"daimien was cut short by the sound of ruiki's newly acquired black dodge viper.
"I missed you so much, daimien!" said ruiki with a tight hug. They hadn't seen each other since the last mission, almost a year ago. Daimien felt the presence of evil nearby. Daimien quickly scanned the aria and found a brooding nigen hiding near hiei's ryu shrine. Ruiki and hedi followed her gaze, ruiki drawing both of her swords.
Daimien snatched the sorry nigen up by the shirt that hang loosely from the things torso. Ruiki shouted at the thing in absence, "you scared my half to death!" Daimien slowly scanned the creature and asked how it knew ruiki. "Well, I invited her. I meant to tell you but you seemed to be in a hurry." "...and my name is fanni!" said the thing. Whatever, thought daimien. Just then, hiei called, "daimien! One of your friends is here!" "yay, that's Janie!" daimien escorted her new group to the house and told Janie to meet her in the guest room. Daimien laughed as the sound of A-F-I's ' girls not gray' sounded from the hall.
Sad but true, jin sat in the center of the den, talking to touya about the weather. Daimien walked toward the guest room and noticed that cresent02 was standing with duo (how did duo get in this story?) and she seemed to be concentrating very hard on something, but they said nothing. Daimien thought of asking them what the hell they where doing, she just decided to find Janie.
She sat on the sofa, playing with her hair. Daimien sat next to her and told her that all would be fine. She then started to cry softly on daimien's black clad and welcome shoulder. "They are not important, you are the only one that matters now. They are gone, yes, but their legacy lives in you." Daimien said with a loving care.
All of a sudden, a drunken yusuke came stumbling in with a very, very drunk J.C. Yusuke said, "sorry. I didn't know this ones taken." They turned and headed for daimien's room and she already knew that her room would be occupied for the night.
"Err...what was that?" asked a very confused youko from the door. "That was just J.C. and yusuke." daimien said, then she realized that she had some how made Janie cry again. Kurama said in a very soothing voice, " you know, tears are the emotional fount of the body..." then Janie just looked at kurama as though he was a supremely soft teddy bear, only better.
Daimien took this as her que to leave. She found fanni making fun of daimien's friend cresent02 and had cresent02 noticed (she was still staring intently at duo...), she most definitely would become a * very * dead nigen. Daimien decided to do so herself.
Daimien stepped in the room, fanni trying absurdly to hide the fact that she had been giving one of daimien's best friends (next to hiei) the finger. Daimien raised her hand and used 1 ½ of her power to send fanni and her pleas to the makai.
~daimien's note to readers~ I know that some would say that my treatment of fanni was wrong, but to tell a brand new writer that her story sucks and that she is the worst writer ever is complete crap. Oh, and fanni, this is how you spell would. [See reviews]
I wuv you guys! New chap. Soon!
Now that that is over, I want to say that I know that all my previous chapters sucked royally. Sorry. I have a new format and intend to use it. Hope you like!
Daimien Sin
"Well, thanks for coming yomi." daimien said as she tried not to gawk at her friends six *noticeable* ears. The party was well under way once yusuke opened the door, oddly, carrying a large club. Daimien sat next to kuabarra and started sipping her drink, an odd-tasting mix of diet coke and some kind of sake from the makai. Kuabarra said something to her and he was apparently expecting an answer. Daimien said something like whatever and kuabarra seemed hurt.
Surprised, daimien said," I am sorry, I wasn't paying much attention, could you please repeat that?" "Well, I asked if you wanted to dance." Kuabarra said hopefully. Daimien stared stupidly at kuabarra. "Sorry, but I have to greet the guests, maybe later." then, as if on que, the doorbell rang. Daimien popped up and ran to the door before kuabarra could say a word.
And who else but kurama was there, holding a case of Mountain Dew. Daimien said hi and let him in. out of nowhere, hiei took the case and led kurama to the kitchen. Just as daimien was about to close the door, she heard a rustling over the door. Down landed daimien's friend hedi dracona. "Hello, daimien." Said hedi dryly. "Your house is harder to find than Atlantis!" " I am so sorry," said daimien with a wince. She knew how frustrated hedi became when she was lost. "Hay, why don't you go and-"daimien was cut short by the sound of ruiki's newly acquired black dodge viper.
"I missed you so much, daimien!" said ruiki with a tight hug. They hadn't seen each other since the last mission, almost a year ago. Daimien felt the presence of evil nearby. Daimien quickly scanned the aria and found a brooding nigen hiding near hiei's ryu shrine. Ruiki and hedi followed her gaze, ruiki drawing both of her swords.
Daimien snatched the sorry nigen up by the shirt that hang loosely from the things torso. Ruiki shouted at the thing in absence, "you scared my half to death!" Daimien slowly scanned the creature and asked how it knew ruiki. "Well, I invited her. I meant to tell you but you seemed to be in a hurry." "...and my name is fanni!" said the thing. Whatever, thought daimien. Just then, hiei called, "daimien! One of your friends is here!" "yay, that's Janie!" daimien escorted her new group to the house and told Janie to meet her in the guest room. Daimien laughed as the sound of A-F-I's ' girls not gray' sounded from the hall.
Sad but true, jin sat in the center of the den, talking to touya about the weather. Daimien walked toward the guest room and noticed that cresent02 was standing with duo (how did duo get in this story?) and she seemed to be concentrating very hard on something, but they said nothing. Daimien thought of asking them what the hell they where doing, she just decided to find Janie.
She sat on the sofa, playing with her hair. Daimien sat next to her and told her that all would be fine. She then started to cry softly on daimien's black clad and welcome shoulder. "They are not important, you are the only one that matters now. They are gone, yes, but their legacy lives in you." Daimien said with a loving care.
All of a sudden, a drunken yusuke came stumbling in with a very, very drunk J.C. Yusuke said, "sorry. I didn't know this ones taken." They turned and headed for daimien's room and she already knew that her room would be occupied for the night.
"Err...what was that?" asked a very confused youko from the door. "That was just J.C. and yusuke." daimien said, then she realized that she had some how made Janie cry again. Kurama said in a very soothing voice, " you know, tears are the emotional fount of the body..." then Janie just looked at kurama as though he was a supremely soft teddy bear, only better.
Daimien took this as her que to leave. She found fanni making fun of daimien's friend cresent02 and had cresent02 noticed (she was still staring intently at duo...), she most definitely would become a * very * dead nigen. Daimien decided to do so herself.
Daimien stepped in the room, fanni trying absurdly to hide the fact that she had been giving one of daimien's best friends (next to hiei) the finger. Daimien raised her hand and used 1 ½ of her power to send fanni and her pleas to the makai.
~daimien's note to readers~ I know that some would say that my treatment of fanni was wrong, but to tell a brand new writer that her story sucks and that she is the worst writer ever is complete crap. Oh, and fanni, this is how you spell would. [See reviews]
I wuv you guys! New chap. Soon!