Hello people, I'm back. Please review, it would be good to know what I did right or wrong. The tenth reviewer can name one of Cinderheart's kits, Sootkit. Also, if you read Bleach, be sure to check out my friend Snarlingwolf's fanfiction. I am sorry this is short, but I didn't want to put two different characters in one chapter.
Spottedkit's POV
Spottedkit felt the warmth on her pelt and decided, it's time to open my eyes! She linked, and found herself in a large den. Beside her, a small body stirred. Her sister? As she watched, the kit opened her eyes. They were a pretty leaf green. The other kit blinked at her curiously. Just then, their mother stirred, her blue eyes resting on the two kits. She purred loudly. "Your eyes are open already? That's great! Look at those two sleepy heads, Mistykit and Stonekit. Well then, Maplekit and Spottedkit, I'm your mother, Dovewing" she mewed. "By the way, we're in the nursery."
"Oh" Spottedkit and Maplekit chorused. Then, Spottedkit peered behind Dovewing and saw a large dark gray shape curled around three lumps, one black, one silver, one gray.
"Who is that?" She piped up. "Oh, that's Cinderheart. Her kits, Hollykit, Sootkit, and Silverkit were born only a few sunrises before you." Dovewing replied.
Spottedkit decided that they should play with them, and sat up. Maplekit copied her, but Dovewing pushed them both down.
"Later," she promised. "just rest, for now . After all, it's only dawn." Spottedkit and Maplekit began to protest, but they quickly fell asleep on their paws, and the last thing Spottedkit saw was her sister's flanks rising and falling unevenly.
The next chapter is from Maplekit's POV. It reveals why her flanks are rising and falling unevenly. I'll update as soon as I can with exams coming up. Read and Review, please!