Hey I'm back with the next update and I got 22 reviews , it took a while though so I'm going to set my standard lower next time. I'm sad because I had this story written and I had to wait like two weeks but no exceptions I want at least 40 until the next chapter, That was a lot to ask for though. Anyways see you at the bottom.
So my first day was finished and I was walking back from school the way I came. I heard a loud roaring sound and turned around to see a Jet Black Mustang cruising along the street. I stared at it and it started to slow down. The tinted windows rolled down revealing Jack, figures he would have a car like this. "Hey me and the guys are going to the mall to hang out at Phil's, do you want to join us?" He asked which all though I barely knew him but from his less than flirtatious relationship with me so far I ruled out the scenario that he was going to try to trick me into going on a date with him. I nodded and smiled as he got out and opened the door for me. "Wow I guess chivalry isn't dead, oh and your fly is open." I giggled as he looked down slowly and quickly attempting to pull it up and still trying to act cool.
My fingers tapped impatiently against the slightly sticky counter top, smelling the sweet smell of grease and goat that made me think of the hunger deep inside of me that could never be satisfied. No I'm not being deep I'm just really hungry. Jerry and Milton were arguing about some movie they watched on the weekend that involved food which got me interested until I realized it was just about people. I didn't really enjoy things that weren't about food. My eyes were torn from the two boys two the jingling I heard from the door being opened. There she was the girl of my dreams. I could never t show my feelings for her because even though they weren't dating everyone knew she was Jerry's girl but he didn't treat her right and even I could see that. She walked up to Jerry he smiled. "Hey Grace, yo I got this hot chicks number her name is um she's blonde, she's right here, I think." He said while he was frantically searching on his IPhone. She rolled her eyes and I was surprised that her eyes landed on me. "Do you want to come for a walk with me?" She asked as if it was the simplest thing in the world, but for me it was anything but simple. Words ran through my mind should I say ya or yes maybe just nod. What would Jack say? "I skateboard and I am really sexy, no wait Jack wouldn't say that." My eyes drifted down as I realized I said that out loud. She blushed and grabbed my arm pulling me up and out of the restaurant before I got to eat, but for once, I was glad.
My eyes scanned the girl sitting across from her blonde bangs that came from one side of her face and came halfway across her forehead. She laughed, I gave her a confused look. "Have you ever seen a girl before?" She joked with me, I smiled. "Sorry I'm not familiar with this situation, I mean I don't have too many friends that are girls." I spoke eagerly as if I was attempting to prove some kind of point. "Jack, relax it's not a date or anything." She said smiling. Before an awkward silence could even begin to form a loud banging noise rung out. My head lurched and I found the two people that were the cause of the interruption of basically nothing. Jerry was the one that pushed the door open him being in the front completely ignoring where he was walking. They were in an argument over the bro code or something. " So if Julie is mad at you I can go and make-out with her in the bushes?" Jerry asked not too politely. "First, I don't neglect Julie, second, he is just on a walk with her or mainly platonic reasons, third, Jerry you don't have the guts to get a girl like Julie." Milton said emphasising the word guts. "Says the guy who needed Jack to set you two up." Milton gasped offended by Jerry's quick comeback yet impressed he remembered the eventful day. Jerry's eyes glanced over at the blonde seated across from me and he smiled sliding in next to her. "Hey, babe." She fake smiled at Jack with pleading eyes. I jumped out pulling Jerry out o the booth and sitting next to Kim slipping my arm around her shoulders. Her eyebrows raised as though she might interject but she kept quiet. Jerry's eyes were filled with disappointment for a split second. "Oh wait I have a girlfriend grace." He smiled and looked up at the ceiling. "Jerry she's not your girlfriend, she's off with Eddie." Jerry's smile evaporated. "What that backstabber when did this happen? Voy a matarlo." He said the last part in spanish and stormed through the door only stopping to look around for his momentary enemy until he screamed something and bolted. I looked over at Kim who smiled back at me enjoying the drama of our everyday lives.
I mindlessly walked next to the brown haired beauty nodding my head as she talked about Jerry and his short attention span. I don't know how he could treat a girl as nice as Grace so badly. We walked closer together are arms rubbing against each other and I could smell the perfume that she constantly wears. We got closer to Falafel Phil's and she stopped and we stared at each other for a while. I leaned in unconsciously and I felt her warm lips press against mine as I grabbed her hand and we were enveloped in a passionate kiss. Our head snapped apart as we heard a scream and a tall boy running towards us.
Okay there you go I actually had this chapter finished but I really wanted those 30 reviews.I was just reading away-to-the-water's story playing to win, which I just recently read the latest chapter, if you haven't read it then hurry up and read it. Anyway I want forty before I update which isn't that much but I really want a lot. Voy a matarlo means I'm going to kill him. Well read and review my pretties.
