Hopesparkle's Sparkle of Hope!

by Mandriel

Hope is exiled from the Twoleyplace by her mean family but then joins ThunderClan and falls in love and has her heart broken and gets a prophecy and falls in love again and gets some powers and falls in love again and saves ThunderClan from ShadowClan and a bunch of other stuff! Mary Sue! Purposely terrible! Decreases your sanity!

3. Hope, Evil and the Patrol!

Chapter Three: Hope, Evil and the Patrol!

Hope was really sad. How could her family cast her out like that? She curled up beside the tree and cried and cried and cried.

"What's wrong?"

Hope jumped, expecting to see her mean siblings but instead saw her best and only friend, a tom called Evil. "Oh, Evil!" she wailed, "It's so sad! My family has cast me out!"

Evil nodded, his glowing red eyes sad, "I know." he meowed, "I saw the ceremony."

This made Hope really angry and her eyes turned red with RAGE, "HOW COULD YOU!?" she yelled, "ARE YOU SAYING THAT YOU JUST WATCHED ME GET BANISHED FROM THE TWOLEG PLACE?! I THOUGHT YOU WERE MY FRIEND!?"

Evil looked sad now, "I'm sorry." he meowed, "But Bob told me that he'd kill me if I tried to defend you. I tried to stop him from chasing you, but he scratched me." he showed her a big scratch on his shoulder.

"Oh, sorry. I didn't know." Hope said, calming down and her eyes turned green again, "I'm just so sad and I don't know what to do. Can I stay with your family?"

Evil looked even sadder, "I'm sorry but I don't have a family." he meowed.

"Oh no!" Hope exclaimed, "Where will I go now!" she began to cry even more, "I'm all alone now!"

Suddenly, there was a growling sound and three cats jumped out of nowhere! "You're trespassing on our territory!" the leader growled angrily and leaped at Hope!

Hope screamed in fear and scratched him and he fainted. She ran at another cat and scratched her and then bit the other cat.

"Wow, you fight so well!" the cat she bit exclaimed.

"Thank you." Hope said, "I never really knew I was that good."

They revived the leader of the three cats, who's name was Whitefur. "I'm the deputy of ThunderClan." he told her, "We're the coolest Clan in the forest, wanna join?"

Hope's eyes widened, wow! She could join a Clan?

"But Whitefur!" a cat she scratched exclaimed, "She can't join! She's an ugly kittypet who was just banished!"

"Be quiet, Lilypaw." Whitefur told her, "I've made my decision. Let's take her to Barkstar!"

Hope cheered, she was going to be awesome!

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