Hey Guys! WEll this is the next chapter in Maximum Survives and i really hope you like it. Sorry it took so long in getting here i finally got my internet back up on my computer (stupid computer) but i love it anywa cause it allows me to write these stories! Well ENJOY!


I watched the boy fly off into the night, I'd never seen something soo wonderful as this. It was the dead of night, the moon shinnying from above while his brown wings swiftly moved up and down, drifting back and forth. It was more amazing than anything else. As he finally was to far for me to see I went back into the cave to start up a fire, knowing that if I was going to have to wait till morning for Dylan to show back up. That boy was in for a truckful of trouble when I saw him next!

"Oh My Soul, Oh my Soul.." I started to sing to myself as I worked trying to fill the silence of the night.

"You never let go, You NEVER LET GO!" I sang as loud as I could which I should have realized was a very stupid thing to do.

"So this is the infamous Maximum Ride." I flipped around to see Rufus and his buddy standing there with ugly little smirks on their faces. I knew I was in trouble not only did they have the advantage of being infront of the only way out, I was also really woren out and didn't have enough energy to fly far enough away from these guys.

"How about we have a little talk about your manners, Max." With that it started, Rufus jumped at me and I moved just in time to not get flattened by +200lb. of eraser fat, but his buddy jumped as well and landed a punch to my stomach.

"AHHH!" I grunted as I passed to his side trying to get away before they got another hit in. I opened my wings and jumped off the cliff edge, just as the boy had done not 20 minutes ago. I felt the wind on my face right before a skreaching pain came from my back.

"AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!" I was pulled back into to cave by my wings as my scream echoed on the wind. I knew without looking that at least one if not both of my wings were broken and I wouldn't be able to fly, not to mintion pull my wings in.

"Give her the old one, two Rufus!" the buddy cried out as a flood of punches landed on my body. As each punch took a direct hit, I felt my body little by little fall away. I was just coneous enough to feel when they finish punching me, picked me up and opened the brown bag that they had put the boy in. The last thing I remember before finally letting go of consiousness was shouting from the intrense to the cave.

"LET HER GO!"


Ok so it was really short but you have to say i picked a great spot to end it. Well the next chapter is coming soon, acually i'm going to work on it the second i put this up! WEll see ya and have a Merry Christmas!