i will not post nemore of da story unti i get sum revews! Plz ples plez reviw! TRIXIE is be st pny!

Chapeter 3: Twilght Sprekle an da magic dool

"Wat u gaspin bout!" Trixie axed.

I point my hoof at purple unicrn wit bacon lookin hair. Who's that?" I say!

"Trixie say, Oh, dats just twiligh spark. She think she better dan me becaus she frm canterlo and student of da princess saltlestia. She donut lik any1 butt her freinds. She suposed to b strong uuuunicorn."

"I bet i culd beet her wif my magic!" I said (since my cuty mar is magic stars around magica moon)

"Oh noes dont do dat" Says Trixe. "I have the bests magic better thn heer bu she cry if she loose!"

But... I ran up to Twalogt anyway!

"Twilghy! I chalenge u to a magical dool!" I says to her!

"who be you?" Says Twilig but I hit her with magic blass and she star crieng

"tho hav beeten me! I wil go cry in tree now" then twili run bac to tree but tree was futtersy so she ran to librery!

U are awesume!" says Trixie. "u should come wif me now"

sooo we left 3 da place dat trixie was takin me 2~!`1

It was... sugarcyobe korner!

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Plz please revw