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reviews were amazing! And I am just so happy you guys like my story
so much :
so here is chapter 3 of
Time will Tell
Reminders
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Saturday, September 15, 2007
Beep.
Beep. Beep. Name: Danny
Fenton
Tick, Tock, Tick
Breathe in, Breathe out, Breathe
in
Hold it there.
Time is running out.
Age: Fourteen
Occupation: Sophomore at Casper High
School
Status: Single, heart taken.
What do you want to do with
the rest of your life: Try to live.
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Accidents fault.
Voices
emerged like shadows through the dark.
Mom, Dad, Jazz.
They
were here
They were watching me.
I could feel it.
My mind
was slow, my body weak.
Far too weak to open my eyes, and see them
again, maybe for the last time.
Maybe.
It changed my life.
"Go in. Go in." A
beautiful girl spoke
"I shouldn't" I argued
"You
should." Her sweet voice wrapping around my mind.
I did.
For
her.
One step into that portal.
And I knew I had a one way
ticket to heaven.
It was dark,
and cold.
The jumpsuit was
sticking to my like a second skin.
My hands felt the smooth walls
that surrounded me.
The
smoothness was interrupted by a button of some sort.
I pushed
it.
Why?
Because I wanted to see her cringe at what she was
making me do.
a sudden flash emitted from further within the
portal.
Racing towards me.
No time.
No
time.
It hit me.
And I knew I was dead.
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he was.
Barely.
My baby boy.
We shouldn't have made the
portal.
None of this would have happened.
None of it.
I
wouldn't be here, watching as my son could be taking his final
breaths.
I wouldn't have to see Jazz break down.
I wouldn't
have to see Jack so quiet.
The only thing that reminded me that
Danny was actually living was the faint beeping coming from his heart
monitor.
Even that seemed to be fading.
Tomorrow.
Tomorrow
could be the end.
Tomorrow I could be planning his
funeral
Tomorrow I could have to tell Sam and Tucker their best
friend was dead.
Dead.
The word seemed new in my mind.
My
parents haven't even died yet.
How could this happen?
A
sudden, faint whisper filled my ears. I saw Jack and Jazz perk up as
well.
They heard him too.
He was awakening.
"Mom?"
He asked.
"Yes, yes I am right here" I said rushing to his
side and grabbing his frail hand.
"I don't
feel too good right now" He said, not opening his eyes.
"I
know sweetie but just hang in there okay?"
"I don't think I can"
His words
echoed through my mind, and repeated over and over like a broken
record.
"I don't think I can"
"I don't
think I can"
"I don't think I can"He has
to.
He has to hang in there.
He can't die.
No not my
Danny.
"Try, please Danny. For me, for Jazz for Jack, for
Tucker, and for Sam."
He started shaking his head, and
whispering,
"No, Sam she, No, I-I jus- No"
He wasn't
making sense.
"Danny what…I don't understand"
"I
don't know what to do" He said opening his eyes.
His bright
blue eyes targeted my heart, and I slowly felt like I was melting
inside.
"I love you mom" He said, closing them again, and
falling back into sleep.
This could not be the end.
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