Hi there readers! welcome again . Sorry I wasn't able to update the story in awhile because of my studies. Anyway I apologize for the delay and also for the 2nd chapter being so short. Actually I haven't watched johto since a long time ,so I forgot almost all the things about it. So I am playing Pokemon soulsilver again to get the details again. So if there are any mistakes please report them to me and I'll correct it and be sure to drop some reviews and follows. Here are replies to some reviews:
Jaune the Betrayed: no I don't mind you stating the fact. It's not rude at all. Thanks for the review and making the suggestions. I know about the 'u' thing so I've updated the chapters and corrected it . for some errors I'll try to correct them, but you know as I am the writer I can't know what's good and what's bad . Only readers like you can point it out so please be sure to keep dropping suggestions.
Xivitai: I know . sorry for the mistake I've corrected it . thanks for the review and please keep telling me my mistakes and some suggestions. I am in search of beta but I can't get one I dunno why.
guest: hmmm... yes they can have both canon and non canon Pokemons but I won't reveal any of their names . Just one thing is sure I'll make some twicks to limit break the non legendary pokemon to drastically improve them. As for the latter one please see author's note at the end.
Super Mario: please read the author's note at the end.
Scooby-Doo 150 : thanks for the review . Yes I got many requests to make them both win but I don't think I'll be doing it so .
YohanKC: thanks for the suggestion. I'll look forward to it from now on but there can still be mistakes out there. So I'll appreciate to tell me which part doesn't fits in chapter or has most mistakes so I can make changes.
Phantomsoul2015:thanks! A cyanthia fan is always welcomed ( as well as Diantha fan)
Arklova: I'll do the spacing from now on as well as other corrections. I will try not to jump gun as much as I can. But if somethings a bit rushed please take some time to report it to me and also some suggestions. its not rude at all and I'll make that 2 out of 5 ,a 5 out of 5 surely. So stick with the story furthermore in the future .
And so on . If your doubt is not cleared you can always pm me. And let's continue to the story.
But then...
A voice woke her up from her sweet cursed the fate for it, she was just about to kiss Ash if not in reality but in dreams still! She turned her head to see Cynthia alongside ash who was like he had just seen a Gengar( reference to ghost).
If it wasn't for the look on Ash's face she would have given Cynthia a piece of her mind for trying to touch him or she would've thought Cynthia was trying to advance towards Ash.
"Cynthia, what in the world happened to ash?"
"I don't know ,I was just sleeping when Ash woke out of blue which caused me to wake up also. But when I saw the look on his face, I couldn't help but give out a large scream."
Both women laid Ash carefully on ground besides Pickachu who also seemed to spaced out. Cynthia tried to wake them up somehow while Diantha quickly rushed to river and collected some water and sprayed it on the trainers and it's partner's face.
After what seemed to be an eternity Ash's dead eyes returned to normal and he blinked several times before his brain finally registered the situation.
Both of his companion's face lit up with relief when they saw this. They quickly hugged ash like it was last moment of their life.
"Hey I am alright now. You can free me now." said ash. "Pickachu..." Pickachu also regained consciousness and quickly took his place on his trainer's head thinking that the girls were trying to steal his personal cushion... not in a hundred years.
"Hey buddy, you OK now?" Ash asked his partner scratching behind his ear. " Pickachu...picka..." the pet assured his trainer.
" So if you both have regained your senses can you please tell us what in the world happened?" asked Cynthia catching the trainer's attention.
"Yes you were like someone sucked the soul out of your bodies." said Diantha also wanting some answers. She was on verge of crying thinking something might happen to her love.
" Don't worry I am now alright. Don't cry please , tears don't suit on such a Beautiful beautiful face ." said Ash. The compliment made Diantha blush like mad and she calmed down but Cynthia was angry that she didn't get a compliment. She will have to do something if she didn't want to fall behind but now wasn't the best moment.
"And about what happened just now you can say we had a bad dream." ash said to which Pickachu nodded his head.
Cynthia and Diantha sensing that they shouldn't press the matter any further kept quiet.
And after some breakfast they left again for their journey towards azalea town which will lead them through Ilex Forest.
~ Ash's POV~
I was grateful that both of them didn't press the matter any further. But what I saw was it just a dream? no I can't be it must be some indication I'll have to investigate it further. But even though just what the heck was it?
-Flashback-(Ash's memories)
I woke up from my slumber, there was fire everywhere... wait!what? FIRE! But something was out of ordinary the flames were black with some tint of blue ... weird isn't it? I am standing in a forest which is burning with black flames but I am all safe not even a scratch definitely weird. Everything feels too weird even for a dream.
Is this a forecast? telekinesis? I don't know but I know something is definitely wrong. Suddenly I hear cries of pain there's chaos everywhere people are running helter skelter but from whom? or rather from what? I see up the sky to find it blood red and suddenly it turns black. Now I can sense it . The feeling which feels so familiar but distant at same time. The world suddenly starts spinning and the red sky it transforms into something . the red sky is a pair of eyes filled with nothing but pure anger and desire to destroy and the dark flames make a silhouette which covers something. I can't make it out .is that? is that Arceus?... what doesn't this mean?
I was sucked into what seemed to dimensional portal I can see it many worlds being destroyed and another myself? but its only statue and its crying. Before regaining my senses I heard a faint sound. ' I shall cover the world with enternal sorrow . the universe shall be rewritten.
( End of flashback)
Maybe I'll find some clues at the celebi shrine since I can't seem to be able to contact arceus. Is world going to end? I look up to the blue sky. ' No even if it does I will save it' I raise up my palm to the sky hoping my words will reach arceus or whoever is watching over me.
Author's note
And that's for it..
I thought making just a simple story with ash traveling and beating gyms won't be any good even with the romance added. So I thought to spice up the story a bit. How was it? better than last time? worse? please tell me your opinion. I made it short because I still have to plan out the next scenario so forgive if its too short.
And one more thing.. I am getting many request to end up both Diantha and Cynthia with ash in this story. so I gave it a thought but I don't think I will be doing it. if you really want it then I am going to set up a new poll which will include option of both girls. But still I think two girl ending for my first fixlc is too much for me . So there can be some disappointement. Anyway please give me your thoughts.
I am searching for a beta reader please apply!
Until next time!
