Hey all, sorry, my dad took the laptop on a trip for a while… anyway, even more reviews! Thank you very much! And by the way, great ideas! I'll add a bibliography at the end of the story of all the people who gave me such great ideas. I promise. I just got final fantasy 11 for the Xbox 360 and it's awesome! I got some friends already and I'm having a great time! I'm not burning my social or school life away though… Oh, I forgot that for those of you who don't know the story of "Dot Hack: legend of the twilight," I'm not telling the story. Sorry, but that would be a kind of spoiler, and it's a whole lot better if you read it on your own. School is almost out to! YAY! Ok, lets go!

Disclaimer: I DO NOT own Dot Hack or Love Hina. You heard that you wackos? I DON'T!

Summary: An innocent little suggestion by Su becomes a really big adventure for the Hinata sou.

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BETA SERVER:

HOPELESS

EMPTY

SPIRAL

LV.10

Shugo: Well, the email doesn't say where to meet her.

Keitaro: Uhh… We're level one, why are we in a level ten area? We'll get clobbered!

Rena: Don't worry; we'll save you guys if you start to get whipped.

Shinobu: Oh! My grunty is looking for something!

Mireille: He's proabibly searching for food, speaking of which, where is Hotaru?

Meanwhile…

BETA SERVER:

HAPPY
ENDLESS
STAIRCASE
LV.1

Hotaru: Where is everyone? I followed Shugo to Happy Endless Staircase… Where are they?

Mireille: Knowing her, she might have gotten in a different area… P

Shugo: Oh, well, she's gotten a lot stronger over the months… She can take care of herself in any area in this server.

Rena: Anyway, maybe Aura's in the dungeon!

Keitaro: AAAAAAAAHHHHH!

Naru: OMG…

Motoko: What is that thing?

Sarah: That isn't a normal monster!

Combat mode on:

Opponent: sK#!Th

LV.0# HP:99)$

Shinobu: Uhh…Uhh…

"Shinobu? Shinobu!" "She seems to have passed out from all the excitement. "

Su: She's a sitting duck! Keitaro, rescue her!

Keitaro: Oh! Ok…

Option: Rescue

Target: Hinachef

Keitaro: Alright!

Rena: Attack!

Skill: Revolver

Target: sK#!Th

Hit. Current HP:99!)

Rena: What the… It's invincible!

Shugo: It's got infinite life!

Mireille: RUN!

Skill: Magnum Slash

Target: sK#!Th

Hit: Current HP: 74)

Shugo: Balmung!

Balmung: Are guys alright?

Rena: Yeah, but it's unbeatable! It's got infinite HP!

Balmung: No, just keep attacking! And whatever you do, don't get killed!

Keitaro: Who are you?

Balmung: Not now, later ok?

Skill: Magnum Slash

Target: sK#!Th

Hit: Current HP: 6$!6

PROTECT BREAK

Balmung: Shugo! Use Data Drain NOW!

Shugo: Ok!

Skill: Daa Dran

Target: sK#!Th

DATA RE-MODIFICATION

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….

….

COMPLETE

New enemy: Epitapth Skeith

LV.3 HP:500

Skill: Repulse Cage

Target: Epitapth Skeith.

Enemy Defeated

10000 exp gained

10000 GP gained

AbuseTaker, Pervertslayer, Swordmaster2, Hinachef, Havoc247 & Banannalover436: Gain 4 levels!

Shugo, Rena & Mireille: Gain a level!

Kamui: Well, Isn't this a lovely little reunion…

Shugo: Kamui!

Rena: Kamui… Kamui… Oh, yeah. You're that lady who wanted to delete us! Why are you here?

Balmung: Yes, why are you here?

Kamui: I'm here investigating data bugs at this area. You?

Balmung: I got an email from Aura. It seems that they did to.

Naru: Wait, who are you guys?

Balmung: I'm Balmung, of the azure sky! Decendant of Fiana!

Kamui: … And FORMER CC corp. member. I'm Kamui, leader of the cobalt knights.

Balmung: …coughflunkycough…

Kamui: What was that?

Balmung: Oh, nothing… who are you guys?

After a long introduction…

Balmung: Ahh… I see. Beginners. You guys were lucky after we defeated that monster.

Motoko: Why?

Balmung: Do any of you remember the incident four years ago? When people were place in comas from this game?

Keitaro: Hey, Shinobu is gone!

Naru: What! Weren't you carrying her?

Keitaro: And she's not awake yet in the real world either!

Balmung: Oh no… Check her HP! Is she dead?

Keitaro: Uh oh, from the looks of it, she was poisoned and died!

Balmung: NO!

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Poor Shinobu! What will happen now that she's unconscious? What will Keitaro and the others do now? All will be continued next chapter! Ok, Bye! I have to re-attach my fingers right now from all the typing. Bye!