Hey all, sorry, my dad took the laptop on a trip for a while… anyway, even more reviews! Thank you very much! And by the way, great ideas! I'll add a bibliography at the end of the story of all the people who gave me such great ideas. I promise. I just got final fantasy 11 for the Xbox 360 and it's awesome! I got some friends already and I'm having a great time! I'm not burning my social or school life away though… Oh, I forgot that for those of you who don't know the story of "Dot Hack: legend of the twilight," I'm not telling the story. Sorry, but that would be a kind of spoiler, and it's a whole lot better if you read it on your own. School is almost out to! YAY! Ok, lets go!
Disclaimer: I DO NOT own Dot Hack or Love Hina. You heard that you wackos? I DON'T!
Summary: An innocent little suggestion by Su becomes a really big adventure for the Hinata sou.
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BETA SERVER:
HOPELESS
EMPTY
SPIRAL
LV.10
Shugo: Well, the email doesn't say where to meet her.
Keitaro: Uhh… We're level one, why are we in a level ten area? We'll get clobbered!
Rena: Don't worry; we'll save you guys if you start to get whipped.
Shinobu: Oh! My grunty is looking for something!
Mireille: He's proabibly searching for food, speaking of which, where is Hotaru?
Meanwhile…
BETA SERVER:
HAPPY
ENDLESS
STAIRCASE
LV.1
Hotaru: Where is everyone? I followed Shugo to Happy Endless Staircase… Where are they?
Mireille: Knowing her, she might have gotten in a different area… P
Shugo: Oh, well, she's gotten a lot stronger over the months… She can take care of herself in any area in this server.
Rena: Anyway, maybe Aura's in the dungeon!
Keitaro: AAAAAAAAHHHHH!
Naru: OMG…
Motoko: What is that thing?
Sarah: That isn't a normal monster!
Combat mode on:
Opponent: sK#!Th
LV.0# HP:99)$
Shinobu: Uhh…Uhh…
"Shinobu? Shinobu!" "She seems to have passed out from all the excitement. "
Su: She's a sitting duck! Keitaro, rescue her!
Keitaro: Oh! Ok…
Option: Rescue
Target: Hinachef
Keitaro: Alright!
Rena: Attack!
Skill: Revolver
Target: sK#!Th
Hit. Current HP:99!)
Rena: What the… It's invincible!
Shugo: It's got infinite life!
Mireille: RUN!
Skill: Magnum Slash
Target: sK#!Th
Hit: Current HP: 74)
Shugo: Balmung!
Balmung: Are guys alright?
Rena: Yeah, but it's unbeatable! It's got infinite HP!
Balmung: No, just keep attacking! And whatever you do, don't get killed!
Keitaro: Who are you?
Balmung: Not now, later ok?
Skill: Magnum Slash
Target: sK#!Th
Hit: Current HP: 6$!6
PROTECT BREAK
Balmung: Shugo! Use Data Drain NOW!
Shugo: Ok!
Skill: Daa Dran
Target: sK#!Th
DATA RE-MODIFICATION
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….
….
COMPLETE
New enemy: Epitapth Skeith
LV.3 HP:500
Skill: Repulse Cage
Target: Epitapth Skeith.
Enemy Defeated
10000 exp gained
10000 GP gained
AbuseTaker, Pervertslayer, Swordmaster2, Hinachef, Havoc247 & Banannalover436: Gain 4 levels!
Shugo, Rena & Mireille: Gain a level!
Kamui: Well, Isn't this a lovely little reunion…
Shugo: Kamui!
Rena: Kamui… Kamui… Oh, yeah. You're that lady who wanted to delete us! Why are you here?
Balmung: Yes, why are you here?
Kamui: I'm here investigating data bugs at this area. You?
Balmung: I got an email from Aura. It seems that they did to.
Naru: Wait, who are you guys?
Balmung: I'm Balmung, of the azure sky! Decendant of Fiana!
Kamui: … And FORMER CC corp. member. I'm Kamui, leader of the cobalt knights.
Balmung: …coughflunkycough…
Kamui: What was that?
Balmung: Oh, nothing… who are you guys?
After a long introduction…
Balmung: Ahh… I see. Beginners. You guys were lucky after we defeated that monster.
Motoko: Why?
Balmung: Do any of you remember the incident four years ago? When people were place in comas from this game?
Keitaro: Hey, Shinobu is gone!
Naru: What! Weren't you carrying her?
Keitaro: And she's not awake yet in the real world either!
Balmung: Oh no… Check her HP! Is she dead?
Keitaro: Uh oh, from the looks of it, she was poisoned and died!
Balmung: NO!
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Poor Shinobu! What will happen now that she's unconscious? What will Keitaro and the others do now? All will be continued next chapter! Ok, Bye! I have to re-attach my fingers right now from all the typing. Bye!
