Okay, so you are now reading chapter three. I am so glad you guys liked it!
Promocat, your review made me so happy! You are my first review. I am so happy you like my story, and I hope you will continue to read this.
Remember, folks. I am still open for suggestions! I have writer's block so bad right now...
Ok, I've ranted and annoyed you all for long enough. Here is chapter three!
Ciel ran towards the Undertaker's place, completely forgetting about his embarassing cat outfit. When he got there, earning many stares along the way, he burst through the door with his arms flailing about in a crazed manner.
"Undertaker! Why am I a demon? Why is Sebastian a human? What was that powder? I am the Earl of the Phantomhive mansion! Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah...Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah...Blah Blah...Blah..."
"Why," said the Undertaker, "I have not a clue of what you are talking about..."
"WHAT!? How DARE you! I am the Earl of the Phantomhive mansion-"
"Oh, that's right. You see, I am the Undertaker."
Ciel was stunned.
"No! Really? I never noticed before!" He said sarcastically.
"No, not the same Undertaker."
This only left Ciel more confused.
"Well then, what is my cure to turn everything back to normal?" asked Ciel, determined to find his answer.
"Why, I don't know. What is it?"
Ciel walked out right at that moment, leaving the crazed man shaking in laughter behind him. Ciel decided to walk back to his-Er, Sebastian's- mansion. If everything really had changed, he would be in a lot of trouble when he got back.
Ciel entered the mansion, crestfallen that he didn't get his cure, only to see Sebastian waiting at the door with his arms crossed over his chest and a pout on his face. This reminded Ciel of Lizzie when she saw a slug without a glob of pink paint dumped on it.
"Ciel, where were you?" he asked, a hint of malice in his voice. Ciel glared up at him with his one good eye.
Wait a minute. His eye! If he really was a demon, the contract would be on his hand rather than his eye! Ciel wished he had payed attention to that when he changed into his uniform.
Ciel quickly untied his eyepatch and stared back up at Sebastian.
"Are you going to answer my question, Ciel?" asked Sebastian, who was now tapping his foot. He didn't seem to have changed in mood at all, not one bit.
"I went to see the Undertaker."
"Now why would you do something like that?"
"I wanted to find the cure for all of these strange things happening to me!" Ciel whined, stamping his foot like a small child. Amusement flashed in Sebastian's eyes, but only for a moment.
"I never told you you could leave. You must be punished for this behavior."
Ciel backed up a small step. Sebastian, he knew, could do a lot of damage when angered. He was a demon to be feared.
Oh, that's right. Ciel was the demon now. The thought still wasn't at all comforting.
Sebastian took a step foward.
"As punishment, you will have to clean this whole mansion. I'm sure Maylene will make a huge mess of the place, so you will probably have to clean it again. After you are done with that, trim all the hedges in the garden. Next, you will prepare Pluto's food. Come into my study when you are done." Sebastian looked dead serious.
Ciel started to argue.
"But-"
"That is an order!" shouted Sebastian. He then turned to leave Ciel with a distressed look, his kitty ears tilted to the sides as he watched Sebastian leave.
So, was this chapter any better?
Today, the commentary will be Kinitsu, a red-headed shinigami that looks a lot like a girl.
"Um, excuse me!? I will have you know that I am a full, completely manly male! I could easily kill you as you write! Oh, you know what!? I am going to kill this story! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHA!"
(Ciel quickly untied his eyepatch and stared back up at Sebastian.
"Are you going to answer my question, Ciel?" asked Sebastian, who was now staring at the small boy with eyes filled with want as he took a step foward.
Ciel became frightened and backed up, only to find the wall pressed against his back.
Sebastian took a step foward and proceeded to BLEEP his BLEEP BLEEP BLEEP BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!)
"Hah! how do you like that!?"
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By the way, even though Kinitsu is extremely similar to Grell in almost every way, I actuall created him about two years ago, and I only foun out who Grell was last summer, so if you want to flame, just not about that. Thank you!
Sayounara tomodachi!
