HAY THUS IS JUST TO SAY YOU SHOULD READ SOME OF MY OTHER STORIES ONE IS YES POORLY WRITTEN BUT HAT IT WAS MY FIRST STORY THE OTHER IS NEW AND BACK AT THE BEGINNING OF ROME THAT WILL BE KIND OF A SIDE STORY BUT YAH IF YOU COULD TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK I WOULD APRIECIATE IT THEY ARE CALLED FATHER OF ROME AND CHRONICLES OF STONE ONE HAS AN OC AS THE MAIN CHARACTER THOUGH
