Hey guys, I'm back!
So, before I get started, review replies:
Diamond (4): Yes, please give the appearance :). Also, have a cookie and a brownie! (::) []
Guest/My friend IRL: Thanks for the OC! Have cookies! (::) (::)
Rebel: Thanks for the AI! Have a cookie and a brownie! (::) []
Now to important things.
-Stats-
Testers: 7
AIs: 3
Need:
At least 3-5 more testers.
2-4 more AIs.
-Stats-
FIRST- PEOPLE WITH HUMAN OCs MUST READ THIS
All righty, then.
I need to know if you are willing to let your character die.
Yes, people will die. I can kill off a couple of my OCs, but I want at least one to live, and I'm not sure how many deaths there will be.
Now, if you don't want your OC to die, that's fine. Just tell me.
No reply= OC can be killed.
If you have an AI and are reading this, your AI can die too. IF you want them to. They are computer data, so it's hard for them to die, but I can do it.
SECOND- This is for AI characters.
I need appearances. Diamond helpfully pointed out that I didn't have an appearance slot in the form, so please review your AI's looks. :D
Also, if you're planning to make an AI, not all of them have to be disloyal to Dr. Zuk. Just sayin'. :3
THIRD- All people.
If you could tell people you know about this, that would be great. I still need more characters.
If you are reading this but haven't reviewed yet, please do. The sooner I get OCs, the sooner the actual story can start.
About that...
FOURTH- Everyone.
So, if you saw the first chapter before I fixed it, you know what I'm talking about. If you didn't, basically it was lines of code that made no sense. That happened because I tried to copy-paste from the Notes app on my IPad. I had to retype the whole thing on the computer.
The first chapter of the story? On the Notes app on my IPad. And it's pretty long right now. (Each human has a short paragraph.) I really don't want to retype it.
So if anyone has any advice at all on my problem, that would be great to know.
Now, to the story! (I didn't type this part out beforehand, so it'll be short and probably not as good. T-T Sorry..)
Dr. Zuk practically sprinted back to the lab. The shell was currently in the third stage of development, when it began to take on recognizable human features. (And clothing, thankfully.) In this stage, it was the most vulnerable to any bad coding or glitches that could get inside it. If any did... Well, that would be bad. The shell had to be monitored closely to ensure its safety.
The scientist sighed with relief as he checked his computer screen. Nothing except the original green code, which still puzzled him. Why was it green and not blue? Had it been contaminated somehow? He pushed the thoughts out of his mind. The shell was developing normally and that was all that mattered.
Said shell was floating in the tube, still empty of personality or knowledge. It appeared to be a girl, short hair drifting when it breathed. It wore a long cloak that went all the way down to its ankles and silver armbands. The rest of its clothing was hidden.
Dr. Zuk busied himself with his computer, tapping out more lines of code into a special incomplete folder. The personality was very important. He wanted the shell to be able to make its own decisions and be as human-like as possible, while still remaining loyal to him. He would learn later the balance is very hard to achieve- but that's a story for another day.
The clock dinged, startling the coder. He hadn't realized it was so late already. The player count was at 9, the minimum needed to start the game.
The villager sighed and stood up, muttering something impolite under his breath. It was time to play.
Thanks for reading!
-Night :3