CHAPTER THREE: A MOTHERS LAMENT.

I love this story, I don't think I can stop writing it, damn this train just won't stop,

Firstly thanks, and apologies, to saitama1155

Thanks for the review (sent you a pm for being the first to send me one) and sorry for not including your name in the last story, and incase you haven't read it yet, (which is understandable, I'll reiterate,) when I said as brook, I'm not as strong as zoro I meant he can't lift as much,

or if you meant when in the last chapter I wrote 'his skill with a blade won't do much against monsters like undyne or papyrus I meant like how they're capable of attacks from all sides, brooks sheer speed would pretty much provide an edge against such foes as well.

And other than a question about 'straw hat power rankings' that's all I wrote but mulling it over more I thought, maybe he meant about how the fight with flowey went than don't worry that was for three reasons, one: flowey cheated luring brook into a fight in other words making brook 'challenge' him ment flowey got to go first,

two: brook didn't want to fight him seriously on the off chance he knew where his friends are,

Three: not only did brook fall from Toby fox knows how far, but didn't think a talking flower could do as much as he could, (I mean would you see a talking flower as threatening before undertale?,)

Also I haven't gotten any ridicule for the Chara/Frisk not smut strip yet

(which makes me think it ether due to not many people reading this or no ones made it to that part yet)

in fact I'm mostly writing this next part to myself and seeing if you guys agree,

one should I change it too they just took off there jumpers?, or leave it how it is?, (I'm not gonna change yet as the story is rated teen and they didn't do anything but hugging,)

and two, (as I know someone down the line might mention it) when chara took frisks jumper off she was mostly trying to embarrass a girl she liked but figured that it might ease the tension as well,

she's not a rapist, just a horny teenager,

and three when frisk asked her if she wanted a kiss, it was because the frisk in this story is very observant, like how she noticed toriel acting weird with Brook, and figured out Chara likes her from how she talked to her, and when she begged Chara not to tell toriel it's because almost all abused victims are told that ether A:'No one cares about you, And no one would ever want to save you' or B:'it's your fault' and in Frisk's case C:all of the above, not to mention that frisk just got here, and was probably ashamed of her scars and bruises, and didn't know how toriel would take it, hence why Chara stripped (showing her she was abused as well) and got her to get the picture, which is where we left of

Also no one is trying to gut me for making frisk talk so I'll take it as your fine with that,

Sorry for brook not making any bone related humour, Too be honest I kinda wanna save it for when Brook finally meets sans mostly to annoy papyrus, also there's only so much bone jokes I can do so yeah,

And I meant to mention this before but, I'm going to have to say it here, the fighting in this story aren't going to be turn based like in the game, but rather more like this, Brook ran at, let say asgore, and jumped, meanwhile Chara (I'll get into that in this chapter,) swings a knife at him in attempt to distance him from her, okay?, oh and fighting will be explained in this chapter too,

Also I forgot to put the ages of the characters in so I'll do it now,

Brook:91 ( he's been reunited with the straw hats for a year)

Frisk: 19 the day before she fell (which will be important for later)

Chara: 21 biological 29 chronologically, (yes it's been eight years)

Toriel:106 chronologically (she stopped physically ageing around 37)

Asgrore:102 chronologically (stopped physically ageing around 33)

sans:46

Papyrus:24

Flowey:32

With all that out of the way

Let's begin,

FRISK'S POV

I couldn't believe it, she pointed to a picture with toriel, a goat monster that was quite a bit larger than Brook, (I think brook would be a foot taller than toriel,) a small goat boy he looked around five, but the one that truly caught my attention was her, her green and yellow striped jumper, the faint red eyes, it was her it couldn't be any one else, she was smiling, yet despite all of the questions this should have made me ask, all I could think was "you have a pretty smile," "aww thanks,"

wait what I blushed and said "what, you can hear my thoughts?,"

"ohh yes, your not as innocent as you would have us believe, ehh cutie," came her response,

I blushed did she really know what I was thinking, it could just be her messing with me

I had to be sure "okay then what am I thinking now," I asked and thought of…

Her in a green sundress eating ice cream on the beach,

"Me in a bikini sitting in a bath of chocolate," she answered, great now that's going to get stuck in my head but, I smiled and said "nope," she chuckled and mock moped "darn, I really thought that's what you'd have been thinking about," "but how did you know I thought you had a pretty smile then?," I asked, wondering just how she knew "easy, you said it out loud," I blushed, and she just laughed,

We just sat there but I hadn't forgotten about the picture,

"Listen,"she started, "I know you think it'll be hard to talk to mom, and I'm not saying it won't, but I went through a similar experience, and I felt a lot better after I talked to her about it, okay?," I could feel her care for me, and she was right goat mom wouldn't hate me, she couldn't hate me, I was still scared but now I wasn't alone, I had a friend, "alright I'll talk to her about it tomorrow," I said "but only if you tell me your name," she smiled and said "my names Chara, didn't I say it earlier?," "I'm frisk, and nope," I said glad I'd found someone who knew how it felt being mistreated,

I looked at her, she was so pretty, her brown hair, her slightly red eyes, her pretty smile,

Her yellow and green jump-…

I didn't need a mirror to know my face was as red as a tomato, I couldn't believe I had forgotten, we're both naked,

I quickly found my clothes and put them on insisting she do the same,

She blushed and quickly did as a I asked,

The two of us just sat there blushing, "well," she said "I'm off to be-…," she tripped over the shoe box, and would have been face first on the hard wooden floor had I not caught her, I looked at her face inches away from my own it was so romantic, "my heroine," she breathed, hotly bringing her face closer "let me say thanks," almost there, I thought

Her lips slowly made their way to mine and then,

the ground started shaking, we could have still kissed, I still wanted to kiss her but the second the ground shook she looked a lot more serious and stood up, " damn it," she said looking quite worried, "uhhh," she sighed "come on my little horn dog, I wanna go see mom," she said,

"I'm not a horn dog," I pouted, "your right," she grinned, "you're not a horn dog, you're my horn dog,"

I followed Chara as she went down the stairs toriel told me to never go down,

TORIEL'S POV

Why, why'd asgrore do this, I thought eight years would make him think, but apparently not, at first I had hoped he'd understand what he was doing, and why I wanted no part in it,

He didn't.

So I came here, I took Chara's body with me i didn't want to think what might have happened if I left her body with him,

At first, I was sad, but then I started to think, and I reassured myself, 'asgrore, my big cuddly fluffy bunnykins, wouldn't really hurt a child'

When the first child fell, after chara and he died, courageous as he was convinced me to take him to asgore, I had hoped asgore would see him and let him go home, when he did I would finally be able to go home and grieve with my husband,

Let's just say after that day, I divorced him,

And after that I swore I would never go their again, and that I would protect any human that fell into the underground,

And child after child six in total, came into my care, and child after child six in total, left me alone, and child after child died

I wanted to blame asgore, and that dr…. Whatever his name was, and gerson, and the voice behind the door, and everyone

EVERYONE, I HATED, EVERY, SINGLE, MONSTER, THAT JUST LET THESE CHILDREN DIE!

But most of all I hated myself I should have tried harder, much harder so they wouldn't leave, I failed, as a monster, as a wife, as a friend, but worst of all, I failed as a mother, I will never forgive myself for that,

And then finally I found a child who didn't want to leave,

I was so happy finally someone to talk to, the voice was nice, but I wanted to talk face to face, someone to go snail hunting with, and best of all and maybe worst of all

she looked just like Chara, and if the guilt from seeing a little girl that looked just like mine wasn't enough, she was abused,

just like chara,

she didn't tell me, a mother just knows these kind of things, i knew if I was patient she eventually tell me, I hoped at least,

It felt as if Chara, hadn't died, as if she had been living here with me for all this time,(1)

And that hurt me almost as much as knowing I'll never see ether of my two beautiful children ever again,

And then worst of all this monster came to take her from me, I knew I was being selfish, I really should let frisk decide, but I knew I wouldn't be able to watch Her leave, every child that came here always left me alone,

But I couldn't take frisk just leaving,

the second she called me mother, I knew I just couldn't stand here and let her leave me and die.

The damned monster(2) that wanted to kill my precious little girl spoke, "miss, my name is brook," like I cared what his name is, i was being harsh, but in my mind those who willingly hurt children deserved much worse

" I know it's hard to believe but I'm as human as frisk," I looked straight into his eyeholes, some part of me really wanted to believe him,

"Then how are you walking around as a skeleton?," I asked, I didn't believe him, He looked calm, "you wouldn't believe me if I told you,"

He had me there but what would he say if I should press him on it, "try me,"

I said back to him,

"Well you see," he started "I ate something called a devil fruit, more specifically the revive-revive fruit, it allows one to be able to come back from death, as for why I'm a skeleton, it's because when I died my body was on a ship lost in fog, by the time my soul found my body, nothing but bones, my sword and my tattered clothes were left,"

"You expect me to believe that?," I asked, his story was incredible, in both ways, I'll admit it was an interesting tale, but it's just not likely, I mean 'devil fruit sounds dangerous why would he have eaten one, also it was too convenient,

"I knew you wouldn't," he said, "but how do we resolve this?," he asked,

I hadn't thought about that, I didn't want to fight him, he didn't seem so bad, I really wanted to believe him, I just couldn't, there really is no othe way, I didn't want to do this, but unlike asgore I'll look Brook straight into his eyes or lack-there-of

"Brook," i started " just know I really want to believe you, but I can't let you leave, just in case you're lying, yet I can't let you stay either,"

He looked straight at me and we met each other's gaze,

"Just know," I said sorrowfully "for what it's worth, I'm sorry," the world went black And Brook and I turned white. Except for a pink heart shape over his chest,

Vs Brook

Brook grabbed his cane just underneath where his other hand was,

And separated one from the other,

I was shocked to see him holding a sword, so he had a weapon all this time,

"Did you have that all this time?, why not draw it on the flower that almost killed you?," I asked

"I didn't think I'd need to draw soul solid, on a talking flower, and by the time I knew I would he had disarmed me," he answered calmly

I used my fireball spell and brought a torrent of explosive fire to burn him to ash, he simply stood there as the fire struck where he was standing, "did I get him?," I spoke out loud, the response was not one I was expecting,

"Swallow bond en avant!," came a shout from above, just as I looked up Brook hit me square in the chest with his sword fortunately it was it's sheath

And rather than ending my life the impact knocked me backwards, he flipped behind me and struck my shoulder this time without the sheath,

I could see his sword's tip coved in my blood, I was shocked, but "it will take more than this to stop me Brook," I struck back with my hand, i might not know any kind of martial arts, but I knew enough to that if he didn't want his skull smashed he'd move,

Brook leaned back dodging my fist, pulled his sword out of my shoulder, and when I recoiled in pain he used my back as a trampoline shooting him self in the air like a rocket,

I used my right hand to heal myself, I was used to healing myself so the pain and what litte fatigue I felt was gone instantly, I knew now why he didn't think he'd need his sword again that flower, his movements where so fast Gerson in his prime would have a hard time keeping up, and I wasn't any near gerson's power, hopefully I could at least knock him out,

"Excuse me," I looked up Brook hit me in the face with his sheath, and slashed my left leg with his blade,

I dropped to one knee and quickly tried to heal it befo…, his blade touched my neck,

"You lose," he said, but made no attempt to kill me, I put both arms up in mock surrender, he bought it the second his guard, was down and he turned away, I healed myself, slowly stood up, and knocked his head off literally, his body fell down, I had stopped, "I'm sorry Brook, I didn't want to ki-,

Pain in my stomach, I looked down to see brooks body stabbing me, his body stood and pulled his sword out, and behind him his head was floating until it landed and reattached itself back onto his neck, damn he's too good, at this rate I'll be dead, or worse

With that child killer again, and frisk will be dead, "please Miss, just surrender I don't want to harm you anymore, of course he doesn't after all asgore wants 'his wife' back,

"Brook, I'm done playing around," I said

"So am I," he said,

I used some magic spells I hadn't had to use since the war, first a blast of air to knock him off balance, it worked, next I ripped a large chunk of earth out of the ground and tried to grab his leg, unfortunately he recovered by that time, and slammed his sheath into stomach but I grabbed it and used it to throw him onto the ground and tried to smash him with the rock but was surprised, when he cut right thew it next he flipped away and said "three verse humming," And he vanished "arrow notch, slash"

Vs Brook

End

I fell back, alive, but unable to move, Brook approached, and simply stared at me until

"stop it both of you," the two of us turned to see frisk, there and behind her, the one who shouted was, my beautiful baby girl, Chara, I tried to move but I couldn't, she ran to me "mom are you, alright?," I couldn't say anything as i was wrapped up in her arms, a warmth past over me and I could move once again the first thing I did was return the hug my child was giving me we remained like that for a while, i couldn't believe it, and I was so happy to have my child back,

It would be worth all the loneliness, I've suffered for eight years of we could just stay like this for a while.

CHAPTER TWO: A MOTHERS LAMENT

END

Finally this ones done, this so far was my favourite to write at first when I got to toriel's POV she was going to meet frisk and show sometimes the two enjoyed,

But story wise they didn't really spend much time together,

(1) a story where Chara never dies And fled to the ruins with toriel, I have only one question, hands up who want's me to do it

(2) she wasn't thinking about Brook when she thought 'The monster'

Im probably going to be roasted alive, for what toriel thinks about asgore, to be honest though, I really don't care, I mean he probably didn't kill all of them, well not directly any way,

He did on the other hand basically order them to be killed and I can't forgive that, not to say I hate ashore, i actually do like him, he's a verry nice guy and as far as kings go he's one of the best, but as far as personally much like toriel, I'm waiting to redeem himself,

About, toriel who wants her to go with Brook Frisk, And Chara?, you know who does,

me, and not just her I'm thinking sans, and maybe papyrus, no sans won't really be fighting, unless maybe if I … whoops now I'm rambling,

Also sorry bout not explaining chara next time I promise, speaking of next time this might be the last time it's updated day after day, not that I'm doing anything else,

Until next time, Cheers

OUR HERO AWAY

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