Ok im back and am now hoping to at least get feed back on my beta redsonic123 who is also a auther of his own fanfiction. I my self have read some of his work and it is nice in a way. Any way lets get on with the disclamor. Harry, Maddy the stage is yours.
Thanks Hunter-Harry
Great now we have to come up with ways to let people know that he does not own the original storys-Maddy ;rolls her eyes;
Ohh chear up Madds itll be quick, if he knows what is good for him-Harry giving me the stink eye with his yellow eyes.
;goulp; ya itll be quick most of the time- me
most of the time-Maddy ;raised eyebrow;
and dont call me MADDS HARRY JAMES POTTER ;wisper; im not mad
;wince; sorry Maddy-Harry looking like a kicked puppy
Any way BloodHunter5566 does not and WILL NOT own us... only any OC's he adds and while were on the subject for ocs are you going to add any Hunter? -Maddy
;grins evilly; you'll see. any way thank you both for doing this for me now you love birds go and do what it is you do inbetween cuts;pulls out a wand and makes them vanish befor they could hurt him.;
"Human speek"
#Wolf speek#
§Mind/bond speek§
$snake talk$
dule speek talking at the same time
;ACTION;
breife explaintion after time skip*
by the way i wont you caps as in CAPS from here on out (unless its names) just a word of warning... or maybe i will. who knows
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-- time skip-- by 11 days. ti minues 036 hours till transformation.
Harrys pov
§so three days till my first trans formation§ i thought to myself.
"nervous Harry." Maddy asks while sitting down next to me.
"a little bit geuss." i respond.
"so am i" Maddy says.
;laghing; "i geuss where both scardy cats."
"no you are."Maddy says laghing.
"KIDS DINNER." yelled Emma.
"COMMING" we both yelled back.
-- time skip-- TWO DAYS TI MINUES 24 HRS TILL FULL MOON
Harrys pov
§i cant sleep. im too full of engery to do so. so i stay up and read till i fall asleep but even reading History of Magic dosent work. then there is a soft knock on my door.
"yes" i anser. it was Maddy.
;wisper; "Harry i thought you were a sleep." Maddy says.
" cant" i say. "why are you here at midnight?" i ask
;mumbles; maddy said
"sorry what" §even with advaced hearing i couldent here that.§
"i said i muble to mubble." Maddy says incompleatly.
"come agian." i say
;sigh; "i said i want to sleep with you tonight." she said embaresed.
i blink once. twice. three times with out saying anything.
then i say "umm well i cant exatly stop you can i."
;squeals; "thank you Harry." she said while running at me and diving at me in a bear hug.
Ok im back and am now hoping to at least get feed back on my beta redsonic123 who is also a auther of his own fanfiction. I my self have read some of his work and it is nice in a way. Any way lets get on with the disclamor. Harry, Maddy the stage is yours.
Thanks Hunter-Harry
Great now we have to come up with ways to let people know that he does not own the original storys-Maddy ;rolls her eyes;
Ohh chear up madds itll be quick, if he knows what is good for him-Harry giving me the stink eye with his yellow eyes.
;goulp; ya itll be quick most of the time- me
most of the time-Maddy ;raised eyebrow;
and dont call me MADDS HARRY JAMES POTTER ;wisper; im not mad
;wince; sorry Maddy-Harry looking like a kicked puppy
Any way BloodHunter5566 does not and WILL NOT own us... only any OC's he adds and while were on the subject for ocs are you going to add any Hunter? -Maddy
;grins evilly; you'll see. any way thank you both dor doimg this for me now you love birds go and do what it is you do inbetween cuts;pulls out a wand and makes them vanish befor they could hurt him.;
"Human speek"
Wolf speek
§Mind/bond speek§
$snake talk$
dule speek talking at the same time
;ACTION;
breife explaintion after time skip*
by the way i wont you caps as in CAPS from here on out (unless its names) just a word of warning... or maybe i will. who knows
--line break--
-- time skip-- by 10 days. ti minues two days till transformation.
Harrys pov
§so two days till my first transformation§ i thought to myself.
"nervous Harry." Maddy asks while sitting down next to me.
"a little bit geuss." i respond.
"so am i" Maddy says.
;laghing; "i geuss where both scardy cats."
"no you are."Maddy says laghing.
"KIDS DINNER." yelled Emma. "COMMING" we both yelled back.
-- time skip-- ONE DAY TI MINUES P24 HRS TILL FULL MOON
i cant sleep so i read some books to past the time but soon heard a knock on my door.
"yes" i say as i open the door.
"Harry i thought that you were a sleep." Maddy says.
"cant to much engery in me." i say
"what do you need Maddy?"
"i was wondering ;mumble; you?"
"come again."
i was wondering of i could umm sleep with you to night." she says with a bit of a blush.
i blink once twice a thrid time. "well i cant reall stop you can i."
"yes yes yes thank you so much harry." Maddy said
"alright lets get to bed then" i respond.
-- time skip--11 hours one hour left
NO POV
Harry, Maddy, Dan, and Emma are in the smiths den under the house and are waiting for the moon.
"it'll be alright Harry." said Maddy and Emma.
"i know, its just..." Harry said.
"we know" Maddy,Dan,andEmma said.
"its starting." said Dan
all their eyes slowly bled into golden yellow and their viens turned black.
in an instant where there was once four people their are four timber wolves.
Dan is red and gray wolf.
Emma is dark brown wolf.
Maddy is rust red with a pich black streak going down her back.
Harry is pich black wolf with a rust red streak going down his back. he also has his lighting bolt scar on the left side(1) of his face.
they all howled to the moon and where playing with each other.
#this is cool# said Harry.
#i know right# said Maddy from right next to him.
Harry then howled to the moon and it seemed as if the very shadows responded to him...
END OF CHAPTER THREE
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ok that was fun i hope you like that little cliffhanger i think. any way i put that little MaddyxHarry in there to hint at the main paring.
to anser any questions that can be ansered. yes Harry is going to hogwarts. and yes, due to his magic Harry does have control of an element. specificly the Shadow element and like the powers of a WolBlood it will transfer into his human form as well. Harry is not a timber wolf but a shadow wolf, but has some hidden stuft hidden with it. i will add ocs as isee fit but if you can give ma an oc that i could use then give me the full works like:
name:
gender:
hight:
speices:
birth right:
magi/nomagi:
speical powers:
poles are still down to one each
Hermione. I
Ron. I
Ginny. I
Luna. I
Fleur. I
Hopefully it will change soon.