EDDIE'S POV
Louise: My name is Louise Nora Tate not that it's any of your buisness.
That's why her voice sounded so familiar on the radio, she's Loren's family. She looks a lot like Loren too. The same beautiful big hazel eyes and the shiny brown hair. She's really beautiful but who is she? She's not Loren's daughter, is she? Cause if she is, I could be a possible father.
Eddie (hestitant): Is she your daughter?
Loren: No, of course not. Louise is my sister...
Well, that's a relief. Not that I don't want children, it's just that Loren and I aren't together anymore and this kid would hate me for ruining her mother's life.
Eddie (relieved): Oh...well, here are your tickets Louise
Louise (taking them): I'm only taking them so you'll leave us alone
Eddie: Loren, can I please talk to you?
Loren (snapping): No!
And with that she slammed the door into my face. I just want to explain to her but I guess she'll never let me. Why did she never tell me about her sister?
LOREN'S POV
I've got to stop the tears from falling. Seeing Eddie brought back too many memories but I have to stay strong for Louise.
Louise: Mom, are you okay?
Loren (holding back her tears): Yes, I'm fine sweetie
Louise (confused): Why didn't you tell Eddie that I'm your daughter? (hurted) Are you ashamed of me?
Loren (hugging her): No, of course not sweetie. It's just that he'll figure out that he's your father and I don't want him to take you from me.
Louise (pulling back): He's not my father!
Loren: I know sweetie but (sobbing) I just don't want to lose you
Louise (hugging Loren): You won't mom. I'll never go with him, I love you
Loren (pulling back): I love you too sweetie but if he goes to court you might have no choice. So promise me that you won't tell anybody that he's your father.
Louise: Well... Lily kinda knows. Are you mad at me?
Loren: Of course not sweetie. I can't expect to you to keep it from your best friend. Just make sure she won't tell anybody.
Louise: What about grandma?
Loren: I never told her that Eddie's your father.
Louise: Does Melissa know?
Loren: Yes but I told her not to tell anybody. So, are you going to the concert with Lily?
Louise: No, I don't think so
Loren: Why not?
Louise: Cause I hate EDDIE DURAN
Loren: But that doesn't mean you don't like his music?
Louise: His music is kinda good but I don't want him to know that
Loren: Do you want me and Melissa to go with you and Lily or do you want to take some of your other friends?
Louise: You don't have to go mom, I know how much Eddie hurted you
Loren: It's okay, I still love his music but I understand if you think that Melissa and I are too old.
Louise: No, you guys are really cool and I'd love it if you would come
Loren: Okay so we are going to Eddie's concert tonight
Louise: Yeah but I really have to go to school now
Loren (hugging): Have fun sweetie
Louise: I'll try but I'm sure that Adriana's daughter Liv will try to ruin my day...as always
Loren: I'm sorry about that Lo
Louise: It's not your fault. Bye, love you
Loren: Love you too
I'll call Melissa after work to tell her about going to Eddie's concert. I really don't want to go but I want to support Louise.
EDDIE'S POV
I just came back home from delivering the tickets at Loren's house. I kinda want her to come to my concert although I don't know why and I'm sure she won't come. Just when I walked into my appartment I got an alert from Lily Park's gossip site. She follows the lifes of every celebrity including Tyler and me. I open the link and see a headline saying "TYLER RORKE AND LOREN TATE HITTING IT OF" I know I shouldn't read the article but I'm really curious what she means with hitting it of. Tyler Rorke and Loren Tate, ex-girlfriend of rockstar Eddie Duran, were spotted in Rumour yesterday. They looked like they were having a lot of fun on their date. Does this mean that Loren Tate is finally over Eddie after 16 years? The article said more but it was just stuff about how and why Loren and I broke up. I don't know how it hurts so much to know that Loren went on a date with Tyler. She knows about all the things he did to me so how could she trust him?
Woman: Babe?!
Eddie: I'm upstairs
Woman (kissing his neck): So, what are your plans for tonight?
Eddie (confused): What do you mean, Chloe?
Chloe: I mean, when are you gonna ask me to marry you again?
Eddie: I don't know Chloe
Chloe (pouting): Why not? You love me don't you?
Eddie (lying): Of course I love you but I'm not ready to marry you again
Chloe (pouting): But we've been together for sixteen years!
Eddie (sighs): I know Chloe
Chloe: Is this about that little loser Loren Tate?
Eddie (snapping): Leave her out of it!
Chloe (snapping): Fine! If you'll give me money to buy a dress for tonight.
I just gave her the money so she would finally leave. She hasn't changed a bit after I broke up with her so I don't know why I'm back together with her. My thoughts drift of to Loren again. Why would she go on a date with Tyler?
LOREN'S POV
I just got home from my work and Louise is shopping with Lily so I decided that it's the perfect time to call Melissa about tonight. She'll probably force me into buying a new dress.
Loren: Hey Mel
Melissa: Hey Lo, what's up
Loren: Well, something kinda happened this morning
Melissa (freaking out): OMG, are you in the hospital? Are you okay? What happened?
Loren (calm): Mel?
Melissa (still freaking out): Did you call your mom yet? Is everything alright with Louise? She isn't hurt, is she?
Loren (yelling): MELISSA!
Melissa (confused): Yes?
Loren: I'm not in the hospital and neither is Louise
Melissa (relieved): Thank goodness, so what happened this morning?
Loren: Well, don't freak out again okay?
Melissa (impatient): Loren Elisabeth Tate, tell me right now or I'll come over there and shake the truth out of you.
Loren (hestitant): Eddie...came to visit Louise today
Melissa (shocked): Does he know that she's his daughter?!
Loren: No, I told him that she's my sister.
Melissa: That's good, he can't find out...ever. (confused) Sow why did he visit her?
Loren: She won tickets for his concert by singing a song on the radio.
Melissa: Really?! I always knew she had it in her, the price sucks though.
Loren: Well, you and me are going to the concert with Louise and Lily tonight.
Melissa (excited): That's great!
Loren (confused): What do you mean? I thought you hated Eddie?
Melissa (evil): Ooh, believe me, I do. So that's why tonight's the perfect time to take revenge.
Loren: Mel, please don't do anything tonight
Melissa: I'll try but only if we're going to buy you a new dress for tonight.
Loren (sighs): Okay
Melissa (squealing): Great! I'll come over right now
LOUISE'S POV
Lily and I are walking through the school to our lockers. The day's over and we want to go shopping for the concert. We didn't see Liv at all today and that never happens so I wonder what she's up to. Just when Lily and I slammed our locker doors closed Liv and her group of populars came walking down the hall. They walked up to us and crowed around us. Standing next to her were Brooke, Lauren and Emily the popular cheerleaders of the school. Behind were standing Damian and Austin. I never really had a problem with them, they're both extremely hot. I kinda have a secret crush on Austin but nobody except my mom knows. I know I can trust her, she's like my best friend and the best mom ever Austin has black hair and dark blue eyes. Damian has darkbrown hair and really beautiful brown eyes. They both got a lot of muscles cause they are both in the football team.
Liv: Well, well, if it aren't the losers of the school
Louise: Go find a life Liv
Liv (fake laughing): Really funny Louise. Guess what, my mother got me tickets for Eddie Duran's concert tonight. Didn't he used to date your mother? Of course not, he's way too good for your mom.
Brooke: Yeah, Eddie would never date your mom
Louise: I don't care what you guys think. I wish he wouldn't have dated my mom cause he's the biggest ass in the country. Now, if you'll excuse me, I've got better things to do than listen to you taking all of you angry about you messed up life out on us.
I pushed my way through them and Lily and I walked away while Liv screamed things about how we can't talk to her like that.
Austin (staring at Louise's butt): Ooh, she's hot when she's angry
Liv (snapping): Shut up, Austin!
LOREN'S POV
Melissa's making me wear an incredibly hot dress, too hot for me. I'll just look like a silly woman trying to look less ugly.
Loren: Mel, I'm not going to wear this
Melissa: Fine, than I'll guess I'll start planning my revenge on Eddie Duran.
Loren (sighs): Okay, I'll wear it.
I'm finally done, Melissa made me wear a pillow top hot pink mini dress with hot pink pumps. She curled my hair a little and pinned it up with a sparkly band. Melissa's wearing a hot yellow cocktail dress.
Loren: Melissa, why do I have to wear this way too short dress?
Melissa (smirking): To show Eddie what he lost
Loren: I'm gonna look how far the girls are
I walked into the living room and Louise and Lily were already standing there. Lily's wearing a green cocktail dress and Louise a beautiful blue cocktail dress and sparkly jewelry.
Loren: You're looking amazing Lo
Louise: Thanks mom, you look great too
Loren: Thanks sweetie, so let's go
LOREN'S POV
We arrived at the concert and it turned out that it were front row tickets so we're now standing in front of the stage. The crowd is filled with screaming girls and women who were probably already fan when Eddie and I were dating. Eddie gets on stage and looks me straight in to the eyes. He starts singing but he won't stop looking into my eyes. It's like he wrote this song for me
I know that I've hurt you
And I was hoping you would give me another chance
But I guess I was wrong
Cause I never saw you again
I think about you every day
I can't get you out of my mind
All these years passed
But nothing ever changed
I still want you by my side
I still want you here
I need you like oxygen
But I guess you don't believe that
Anymore, anymo-ore, o-ore
I still want you by my side
I still want you here
...
He finished the song and walked of stage. I try my best to hold back the tears and when I look around me I see Melissa, Lily and Louise staring at me in shock.
Melissa (concernec: Lo, are you alright?
Loren (holding back my tears): Yeah, why wouldn't I be?
Louise: Well, Eddie kinda told you he still loves you
Loren: I don't care. He screwed up and I don't need him anymore.
Melissa (concerned): Are you sure?
Loren: Yes Melissa, I'm sure.
Eddie played the rest of his songlist and after that everyone started to leave. We started to leave too until two large security guards walked up to us.
Are they in trouble? What's going to happen between Louise and Austin? Will Loren ever forgive Eddie? Will Eddie ask Chloe to marry him? What's going to happen between Loren and Tyler?