ATTENTION: I would like to say something before I go on to the chapter. A guest called my OC, Kali, a "Mary Sue." At first, I was thinking "What the heck is this?" Then I decided to research Mary Sue and here is what I found:

A Mary Sue is an original character in fan fiction, usually but not always female, who for one reason or another is deemed undesirable by fan critics. A character may be judged Mary Sue if she is competent in too many areas, is physically attractive, and/or is viewed as admirable by other sympathetic characters. Mary Sues are generally presumed to be idealized self-inserts rather than true characters, although they may actually be intended as proxies for the reader. In fan fiction, it is considered extremely gauche, or at least very immature, for an author to create characters based on him- or herself. The author is suggested to unduly favoring a character by changing other characters or the environment in inappropriate ways. A Mary Sue is:

1) A character who is based, at least partly, on the author

2) A character whom has no significant flaws (except possibly ones the other characters find cute)

3) A character to whom everyone within the story reacts as if they were beautiful and wonderful except characters who are clearly evil and/or motivated by jealousy

4) A character with whom, during the course of the story, every available character of the opposite (and occasionally the same) sex will fall in love given any contact whatsoever

5) A character who undergoes no significant growth, change or development throughout the story

They are also accused by such:

Unusual hair or eye color, general attractiveness

Exceptional abilities, even in a "verse" such as Star Trek where exceptional people are the norm

An exotic pet

Being a confidante of one or more main characters

A detailed description of the character

I just want to say this: DON'T ASSUME OR ELSE YOU'LL MAKE AN ASS OF YOURSELF. I haven't even posted the second chapter and already people are accusing me of creating Mary Sues. This is my SECOND FANFIC. This is my first time writing anything and it pisses me off that I am being put down by someone who can't even show themselves.

Kali is nothing like me. I do not write characters based on me. My characters are more interesting than I am and their personalities are different from mine. I am not Japanese; I don't have any of her features; the only trait I share with her is the ability to hit a few notes. Kali is physically attractive and has special abilities because of her genes. Kali does not get along with everyone, as you should have already saw. Not everyone falls in love with her. Kali is NOT perfect. She has her own flaws, which will show through the story. Some of them have been featured already, but obviously some people are too blind to see it. They are only focused on her strengths. I do NOT bend the world of the fiction to Kali's will. I don't show unfair favor to my OC. Having a complicated past is not a bad thing.

The problem only occurs when original characters are unrecognizably changed and I make sure that EVERY character keeps their personalities. I think the definition for Mary Sue used is "any strong female heroine with an interesting life." That is sexist. What is wrong with wanting to create an awesome character? What does it take for a character not to be deemed a "Sue"? A boring, blah character with no social life? If that's what it takes, then I will willingly ignore your standards and say "fuck you." Thank you for your time and thanks to those who enjoy my stories.