Hello again! No I didn't abandon this story, I had to stay with reletives a awhile and they no internet there. They barely had signal for my phone. No one pitched any ideas for Raynare's backstory yet, and likely won't, so i will make shit up as usual. It's been bothering me that people who do FoZ fics follow cannon almost to a tee. So while mine will have cannon elements, I feel like making more interesting stuff happen. The staff of destruction is too overrated, and I plan on shortening that up... alot. For anyone who may complain that Raynare is way too OP or will end up that way i have two words for ya... FALLEN ANGEL. As in a once divine being who retains abilities and in the world i pulled her from she has room for improvement. I will introduce new enemies because let's face it... she is a little OP and while entertaining, it would get boring quickly. No this wont be a straight up yuri fic, as i've stated, Raynare is BISEXUAL. It just so happens that most of the important characters are female. So uh yeah. Not really much else to say.
DISCLAIMER: As always i dont own these... i wish i did and may have had a dream that i did but i dont and likely never will. such is the shame of the life of a commoner such as myself.
ON WITH THE STORY!
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After leaving the headmaster's office, Raynare quickly got rid of Guiche who was all too happy to leave, but not before being told not to eat till his new master said he could in the morning. Seista left to make sure a bed was brought up for Raynare. (She'd rather fall again before sleeping with the pink haired menace who kicks all night.) Making their way into the room they were forced to share, Louise shut the door behind them.
"Alright pinky let's get a few things straight while we are alone." Raynare began.
"What things," came the annoyed response form Louise.
"GLAD ya asked. First off... I am NOT a slave. You want a slave get one. Or use Guiche. I will act as your bodyguard and demand to be treated with repect. Otherwise GUICHE can protect you from enemies while I eat and watch." Here Louise paled slightly at the thought of THAT bafoon being a protector, so she nodded rather quickly. "Next up. I wanna get paid. I have a servant who I could make work for free but I won't. A girl has to splurge ya know. We can settle that later though. I gave you my name, so I expect you to use it. None of that familiar shit or your new name will be pinky. I can see ya don't like that if the twitching eyebrows are anything to go by. Anyway that's about it for now. I'm tired and Seista should be here soon with at least a mattress and I'm tired."
As if her words had called her, the door opened to reveal a slightly out of breath Seista and a scowling Guiche who was levitating said mattress. After placing the mattress on the floor he bolted.
"Did you run there?" Raynare inquired.
"Oh yes master, I wanted to please you," came a breathy response. She had an extremely lecherous grin that reminded her again of Issei.
Kuoh Academdy
Said brunette was doing what he does worst. Peeking at the kendo club girls changing. He let out a sneeze, then a curse. Said kendo club then began chacing him around beating him with bamboo sticks screaming "PERVERT!"
Back with Raynare
"Just call me Raynare."
"O-ok." came the rather deflated response.
"Anyway I'm tired so unless you have important things to say I'm going to sleep," said Raynare with a yawn.
"Actually tomorrow is the day of the Void so there aren't any classes. I was thinking we could go to town." said Louise.
"Sure. Seista dear, you can sleep with me if you like." said Raynare with a smirk.
Said maid quickly began to undress and practically jumped in bed. Louise couldn't help be a little put off when her familiar wrapped her arms around the maid and pulled her closer. Seista had a perverted grin that quickly fell when her new master began lightly snoring.
"This isn't going to be easy," said Louise before quickly following suit.
The next morning was rather un eventful other than a red-faced maid waking up face first in her master's breasts. The trio went downstairs to get breakfast. Guiche was standing outside the dining hall as ordered, which suprised everyone except Raynare. No one dared annoy the fallen angel when she sat at the table with a grin.
After telling Seista she could help the staff, and telling her that she could continue later where they left off that morning, the maid quickly dashed away with a blush matched only by Kirche's hair.
"Let's get going, Louise. There are things I wish to look for."
"Let's go get some horses then."
"No. I HATE horses." with that said she brought out her wings and grabbed Louise, who before she knew it was no longer on the ground. After ten minutes of flying they made it to the capitol of Tristain.
"T-that was f-fast," said a shaking Louise.
"What, you thoght my wings were for SHOW?"
"N-no... Anyway let's go." she said walking off. After hiding her wings Raynare followed.
Looking around the place wasn't much. A couple shops here and there. A few inns. An utter letdown to Raynare, who was rather annoyed at this point. She had to watch Louise get supplies for a class she had to take, and then listen to her talk about different books with the bookseller.
That changed when she heard a shout, "You rotten pile of scrap, STOP running off my customers!" She quickly pulled off Louise from the window of a pastry shop and marched right to the noise.
Walking in the blacksmithy the man was yelling from, she came face to face with a greasy, weasle faced man who was red in the face from screaming.
"What happened? What I miss?" said Raynare with a sadistic grin.
"Nothing happened. Blasted blade. Ruining me business." said the owner.
"Blade? You have a talking sword?"
"Bah. Yeah. All he does is insult me customers until they leave."
"SOOOOO... just curious here. Can I have it?"
The man's face was incredulous. "He's in that barrel in the corner there. Just don't complain 'cause i aint't takin' it back!"
Rummaging through the barrel, she found one that had a strong magical pulse to it and pulled it out. "Why would i get rid of such a magnificant blade! He will be perfect as a way to insult people!"
"HAHA finally someone who appreciates a good blade! Names Derflinger, But you can call me Derf." said the sword.
"Perfect, thanks for the awesome insulting sword." said Raynare with glee. The owner, glad to be rid of it, said nothing. Once outside Louise wanted to go back. As soon as they walked out of the gate, however, a blue dragon landed in front of them. On top of the dragon sat a short, blue-haired girl with glasses carrying a large staff and Kirche.
"What are you doing here?" Louise demanded. Raynare was grating on her nerves talking to that sword about which ways to kill people caused the most pain.
"Loud. Bothered." said the bluenette pointing her staff at Kirche.
"I asked little Tabitha here to bring me here after I couldn't find you. I wanted to see what you needed to do in town with that delicious looking familiar of yours." came the red-head's shameless response.
"Louise, go back with them. I wanna go kill something and Derf here tells me there are monters in the forest that drop gold and cool loot stuff. I said that was impossible and I wanna prove him wrong. I need to let off steam anyway, since you didn't let me kill that blonde prick. Later." and with that said Raynare flew off into the forest. Louise eventually left with the others after several arguments with Kirche which were stopped when Tabitha put them both to sleep.
Raynare landed in the forest and started to walk around. She eventually came across a goblin. She threw a single spear that peirced its heart before watching it disolve. Two small pouches dropped down. Curious, she picked them up. The smaller of the two had the left ear of the goblin she had killed and the larger had five gold in it.
"Yo Derf, you weren't kidding! This is awesome! How much are these ears worth anyway?"
"Well of course I was right! I'm five thousand years old. Those are worth about five gold each."
"Oh really?" said Raynare with a smirk.
"Partner, your scaring me. And I like where this is going."
"Say, Derf. I see your rusty. I think a good soak will do you some good." she said, drawing the sword. The runes on her left hand, forgotten till now, started to glow. Immediately her senses sharpened and knowledge of using the sword filled her mind. "That certainly is a neat trick."
"I can't believe it partner. Your a Gandalfr? I watched you throw a spear of light you just create out of thin air, fly around on wings, and now the legendary power to wield any weapon is yours? Good grief. Next you'll tell me that pink haired shorty summoned you from another world."
"Yep. Guess you were made for these so called Gandalfrs?"
"Yep."
"Derf. You are officially going to stay with me forever. Let's have fun killing these pathetic excuses for a goblin."
"Sounds fun."
The rest of the day all the villagers heard sadistic laughter echoing through the forest and a gleeful shout occasionally. The next day would show a forest completely void of goblins, orcs, and pixies. Raynare, after slaughtering many, many creatures finally flew back to the academy.
She looked fierce when she landed. Sword still drawn, dripping blood, and blood splattered around her stomache. She decided, after cleaning the blade she held and sheathing it, to check on her new maid. She couldn't find her anywhere though. She stopped by the kitched and asked the head chef where she was.
"You mean you don't know? She was taken by Count Mott to be his servant."
"WHAT? THAT'S MY MAID! WHERE DOES THAT BASTARD LIVE? I SWEAR I WILL CHOP OFF HIS BALLS AND SHOVE THEM DOWN HIS THROAT!"
A very frightened student pointed her in the right direction and she flew off still screaming about the pain she would show this Mott guy. Guiche, who overheard her rant ran to find Louise. After running up the stairs she knocke on her door till she opened it, looking rather annoyed.
"What do you want Guiche!"
"We have a problem! Your familiar found out that Count Mott took her maid and flew off to go get her back!"
After staring blankly for a few seconds she copied her familiar, "DAMNIT! Tabitha!" she ran to her door. After explaining the situation, Tabitha nodded and called Sylphid, her dragon and the four, Because Kirche insisted on going, hopped on and flew off hoping to avoid a bloodbath.
Raynare, however, was seeing red,and it had nothing to do with the countless goblins she had killed earlier. Landing at a rather unassuming manor she walked up to the two guards who were shaking in their boots.
"Does Count Mott live here," she asked in a low voice. The two guards, having seen her fly through the air on wings as dark as the void itself nodded, nearly pissing themselves. "Good. That bastard stole from me, and I intend on getting what's mine back." She walked in unimpeded and walked into the main room where a portly man was trying to grope a maid. On closer inspection, the maid was Seista, and promptly ran to her master's side thanking the founder she had come. Raynare was boiling with rage. HOW DARE someone walk away with what's her's.
"Who are you to barge in to my home and take advantage of my new maid?" the man asked arrogantly.
"I'M THE LAST THING YOU'LL EVER SEE YOU BASTARD. THIS IS MY FUCKING MAID AND IF YOU VALUE YOUR MISERABLE, PATHETIC WASTE OF A LIFE YOU WILL DO EXACTLY AS I SAY!" she roared thunderously, power amplifying her voice. The man before her trembled and fell to his knees.
"Kill her!" he shouted. Immediately twelve guards surrounded the fallen angel, who launched twelve spears into them, none lethal, yet.
"NOW YOU TRY TO KILL ME AS WELL? BEG HUMAN, BEG FOR YOUR LIFE COWARD."
Mott was terrified and did just that, promising anything in return.
"Anything eh?" she asked with a grin. "Very well. I demand You sign this manor over to me as well as all of the monetary wealth you own. If you dont like that I can just kill you now and take it all anyway. Can you sign a title away?"
"Take it then, just don't kill me!" the man begged. "Even the title, but please let me go!"
"Good write up the papers, sign it, then leave. You can keep your miserable life. Grab what you need then get out of my manor."
It took all of ten minutes to get everything done. He ran out of the door with two briefcases floating besides him with Raynare watching him go. She fired a light spear at his receding form, hitting him in his left arm, which started him howling in pain. Her sadistic laughter carrying to him would forever haunt him. The guards she allowed to stay, as well as the staff, minus those who tried to kill her. Those left before Mott in nothing but their undergarments, their weapons and armor confiscated.
As she watched him run away, a blast of wind came up behind her. Turning around she watched as a blue dragon landed.
"Please tell me you didn't kill him!" said Louise panicing.
"No, but I should have. I just scared him shitless and ran him out. He gave me the deed and papers signifying his title to me."
Everyone was shocked at this. Not in a million years would they have expected that. Louise looked relieved that she didn't kill anyone, Tabitha looked as impassive as ever, and Kirche looked almost, well, hungry. Guiche didn't really look too good, and Raynare suspected it was because she was still splattered with blood.
"T-that's preposterous! Why would a noble of Mott's rank give you his manor AND his noble title?" Louise asked.
"HE was more worried about what I would do if he didn't. A pity, really. I have one technique that would have shattered his mind, and another that would have sealed his magic away, only to be unlocked by angelic magic." Raynare said with a small pout.
Everyone else paled a bit at this, even the stoic Tabitha's eyes widened in slight suprise. Kirche looked like she wanted to pounce on Raynare right there and Louise looked conflicted. Her familiar was alot more powerful than she thought, and with her ability to seal magic, mages would, and should, fear her. She could reduce even her mother, the strongest mage she knew, to the level of a commoner. She then caught up to something her familiar had just said.
"Angelic magic? What kind of magic is that?"
"Well... a stronger magic than mortal magic, but not as strong as a god's. Angelic magic is poision to all beings of dakness and evil, namely devils and demons. Well, not just those but they are our main enemy back in my world. I even have a really nice technique to store items and other things in a small pocket dimension, and another for instant travel, but I prefer to fly."
Everyone looked at her in awe. No one was going to anger her anytime soon. Raynare had told Louise that she had plenty of other abilities, but this was something she couldn't imagine. Angels truely were in a league of their own.
"Anyway, we should go back. I have a lot of gold to store and blood to wash off." Raynare said. "Come on Seista, I can fly you back. Oh, by the way, dragon, wanna race back?"
Sylphid nodded eagerly. "On three then! One." The blue dragon crouched down and the others scrambled on it's back. "Two!" Seista was lifted up and Raynare's wings spread out. "Three!" with that, both shot up into the air, gaining altitude and speed. Neither one looked able to outpace the other, those on top of Sylphid were clingling on for dear life, and Siesta had her face burried in Raynare's chest.
Many minutes later, the academy was looming ahead. Smirking slightly Raynare flapped her wings faster, quickly diving to the gound. Using her wings to slow her down a little, she landed with a thud, only a second or so before the dragon. Sylphid hung her head in defeat, acknowledging the loss. The girls, and Guiche, all looked a little disoriented. Siesta, apart from her new hair style, looked reletively fine, her face still burried in the angel's cleavage. When she was finally pulled out, her face was flushed and had her signature grin.
"Looks like I win AND have the smoother ride." the angel mocked.
Sylphid snorted and let out a huff of annoyance. Her passengers quickly got off and walked in a daze.
"Don't use that tone with me, hatchling!"
"Understand her?" Tabitha asked, looking up from her book. Everyone was shocked, Tabitha almost NEVER started a conversation.
"One of the abilities I have is called Language. It lets me understand any language, written or spoken."
That was suprising, as proven by the wide eyes she was gazing back into. Louise had to pick her jaw off the ground. How much was there about her familiar she didn't know? She resolved to ask later. Kirche was biting her lower lip with an expression practically screaming 'take me now!' Guiche had it worst off. He promptly fainted.
"Sylphid." Tabitha said, pointing at the dragon.
"Alright. I am not taking him back up the stairs. Come on Louise, Siesta." Raynare said, walking in the direction of the dorms she shared with Louise.
No one said anything the whole way there. When they finally arrived in the room they all shared Raynare turned to Siesta.
"Ok. From now on, Siesta, unless I give you a task,or you ask to leave to go away from me, I want you to stay by me. If Louise wants her room back, I technically own my own manor and we can stay there. I don't want anyone to take what is mine, and right now that's you." Here the maid's thoughts jumped to a senario like this in her books, her master, overprotective, wanted her always by her side.
"Heh," she giggled pervertedly, a small drop of blood running from her nose.
"Ok, Louise. I assume you have lots of questions. As I have some too, we will each take turns answering them ok?" Louise nodded. "Good I'll start with a question I should have asked a few days ago. Strange how being almost killed, then rescued made it slip my mind. What kind of country are we in?"
"It's called Tristania, one of the five countries. They are Germania, Tristainia, Gallia, Albion, and Romalia. My turn. What is your world like?"
"Well I don't really remember, nor do I care. My place is in this world now, and I have no regrets. I already told you, I was dead in that other world. I do NOT wish to speack of it right now. What is the base of magic in this world?"
"It's seperated into the five elements. Those being fire, water, earth, wind, and void. Void hasn't been around since Brimir's time though. Everyone has at least one elemental affinity. How many elements one can add to a spell is the rank of the spell and them. Those ranks are dot, line, triangle, and square class. Dot being one and square being four. So, can I see some of your magic?"
"It tends to be a bit destructive, so none of those. I can show you the one holding all the gold and loot from what I killed in the forest earlier." Louise's eyes got really big and started to sparkle. Raynare spread her hands in front of her and muttered a word Louise couldn't understand. A magic circle about two feet in diameter popped up in front of her, intricate symbols and runes etching themselves into the air, startling Louise and snapping Siesta out of her trance.
"This is the door to my personal pocket dimention." Saying this, she reached into the circle, her hand seeming to disappear. Pulling her hand back, she held a rather large sack in her fingers. The sound of many coins clinking together drew everyone's attention. "This is some of the gold coins I got from the monsters. Derf was right, they DO drop gold and items. He also said the stronger the monster, the more the gold." She opened the pouch to let Louise and Siesta see the gold.
Louise, being a noble, wasn't really shocked. Poor Siesta looked like she would faint. "How much ecu is in that pouch, and how many more do you have?" Louise asked incredulously.
"Eh, ecu is what the currency is called. Ok then. This pouch has about five hundred gold in it. Easier to carry like this, and each one has the same amount, making it easy to count. I currently have ten or so pouches like this. I would have more, but the forest didn't have anything left to kill and I added only some the money left from Mott's manor. Seeing as everyone needs to get paid."
""E-eh?"" they shrieked in unison. She had cleared out the whole forest? There were people who avoided it all costs and no mage under line class dared go in.
"Yeah, so Siesta, how much were you getting working here?" Raynare asked.
"T-ten ecu a m-month, why?"
"Well, consider this a raise. I will give you one hundred ecu a month. Here," she said tossing the pouch to her, "five moths in advance." Siesta looked at her for a moment, glanced at the puoch she held, then promptly fainted. She fell backwards onto the bed at least. "Hey, Louise," she began again, startling Louise out of here reverie, "You like making potions or something like that?"
"Y-yeah, I suppose. It's basic knowledge. Montmorancy is the potion mixer in our grade, so ask her. She was complaining about orc blood and pixie dust."
"Wonderful! I killed plenty of those. About one hundred orcs and twenty little bastards, I mean pixies. Where is her room?"
"D-down the hall. Last door to the left." replied a shocked Louise.
"Great! See ya later." Raynare said, already walking out the door.
"What the hell did I summon here?" Louise asked herself softly. One thing was certain. She got what she wanted when she asked for a powerful servant.
Raynare practically skipped to Montmorency's room and knocked loudly. "Yeah, what do you need?" she asked, opening the door.
"I heard you were in need of orc blood and pixie dust! Im your gal, er angel."
Her eyes lit up. "Really? I need about twenty vials of the blood and five pixie dudsts."
"T-that's it? I have more ya know. I don't need it."
"That's all I NEED, but I could use a few more to stock up. But how much do you want for the ingredients?"
"I don't know how much they are worth. So how about five each for the blood and ten each for the dust?"
"T-that's cheap! If that's what you want I'll take fifty vials of blood and all the dust you have!"
After doing buisiness with Montmorency, she then left a bit richer than before. She was only fifty ecus shy of the amount she had before. Stepping out into the hall she almost stepped on the giant lizard there. It was three feet long, exluding the tail, which was on fire. The red lizard made a jerking motion with its head, indicating it wanted her to follow. Shrugging, she did just that. Suprisingly it was only a couple of doors away. Nudging the door open the salamander continued in, Raynare right behind her.
"I've been waiting for you," said Kirche huskily.
"You can keep waiting then. Your not ready for this, not really. I love your body as much as the next guy, but I'd rather a willing partner. As many guys that follow you around, to me, you practically scream virgin. Come back when your REALLY ready." With that the angel walked back out into the hall, and into Louise's room
Kirche couldn't believe what just happened. That woman had not only rejected her and didn't look at her neglige covered body, but had stated the truth. She was a virgin, and she was nervous at the idea of losing it. None of the boys she had around her had even questioned her. She wanted that angel even more now.
When Raynare stepped back into the room, a sudden idea came to her. "Hey derf," she said to the sword still on her back, "I probably won't get to use you much. Light spears are much faster than slicing someone."
"Yeah, I figured. After all, I'm meant to be used on the ground anyway. Partners with wings tend not to stay onn the ground."
"Exactly. So I was thinking. I know since your obviously a magic sword, would someone else be able to use your abilities? What are they anyway?"
"Well, another would be able to use my ability to absorb spells and deflect them, but couldn't release it in a burst. Only the Gandalfr can do that. I forgot a couple of the others, and I would be able to warn my user of danger that I sensed."
"That's cool." she said. By this time, Louise and Siesta were listening with interest. Louise was shocked that an annoying sword they had gotten for free was so powerful on it's own. "I've got the perfect idea!"
"What's that?"
"Siesta can train to use you! I already removed all your rust and put a spell not to dull. It's perfect!"
"Not bad. She is your maid and needs to learn to protect herself. I approve."
"Great! Siesta, what do you think? I'd help out of course."
"YES!" she yelled, hugging her master. "Thank you master!"
"Chill. I told you that you didn't have to call me master."
"Oh, but I want to, master. You are my master." she said.
"OK! That's enough. Derf is all yours. You will begin to learn tomorrow. Louise I want leave. I wish to take my cute maid to see her family, wherever they are. But that can wait. Anything interesting happening anytime soon, or can I go hunting?"
The way she said hunting with so much relish, Louise knew she meant go killing in the woods. "Actually, there is the familiar exhibition coming up in a couple days. Its to show off what our familiars can do... Please participate?" she begged, using the infamous puppy eyes.
"Fine! But you owe me for that one." No one should be that adorable. NO ONE. "Here, you two." she said handing them each a slip of paper with another magic circle on it, "those, when you press the center allows me to talk to you telepathically and find you, no matter the disatance. After today I don't wanna take any chances." They were both touched and in awe. More strange magic and Louise learned something new from her familiar.
Just then the door opened and a cloaked figure walked in. "Who are you?" Louise yelled.
"Is that any way to treat a friend, Louise Francoise?" the figure spoke, in a soft female voice. She lowered her hood and revealed a purple haired girl with bright green eyes. She was pretty cute.
"P-p-princess Henrieta?"
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A.N. Cliffhanger! Even if everyone already knows what happens...
I'm sorry its taken me so long to update, but life has been pretty hectic lately. As always leave a review. Post suggestions to improve the story. The important question is what do YOU want to happen? Just asking. Anyway. Ultimatum out.