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Love is colder than death
Chapter 3

Long way down

I had clearly doubted monstrous ways of the Volturi, why was I stupid enough to think for one moment that their leader would be happy to see me? He was clearly excited to finally get to kill me without my families protection and I was extremely idiotic to think differently. The pain was getting worse as more cuts started to heal around my body, adding onto the unbearable pain I was in from my broken bones. I should be grateful for the ability to heal quickly, saving me from a slow and painful death but right now, with my dazed and confused thoughts, isn't being sucked dry alive better? Would the pain be worse? It would be quicker which was better than dying slowly.

I couldn't stand it anymore, waiting for death. Kill me now! My thoughts yelled amongst all of the pain. I had another theory now; Was the leader enjoying my pain? Was he joyful watching me suffer? Did he want to wait and torture me more with my own pain? That was it! I felt a small rush of pain up my arm...in a few seconds it came back, rushing down my arm like fire. I shrieked in pain, tears now gushing out and my voice crackling up at the end of my scream. I couldn't keep quiet any longer, I wanted to die!

"Kill me now! Please!" I screeched, gasping for breath. "I don't care how you do it! Please!" I had no strength left and dropped my head down against the cold marble floor. I shut my eyes tightly, viewing all of my families faces in one last goodbye.

"Renesmee Cullen..." A voice cooed in amazement and surprise. Didn't he understand my pain? Could he not hear my screams? Why would he be surprised that I was screaming in pain? He spoke again, more slowly, "I'm afraid without any thought or doubt, I can't do that with your tremendous talent and influence. Did anyone ever tell you that your very much like your father?"

My eyes snapped open, now hurting with the light. What on earth was he on about? Kill me, God-damnit! Why was he keeping me for my power and not for his own pleasure, to watch me die in pain? And how was I like my father in a way he had to point out? Did my father handle pain in this way? Did he shriek out in pain like I did? Confusion battled pain inside my body as I shrieked out again at the pain in my leg.

"Aro..." A voice started, calm yet he sounded dull and lifeless, "I don't think the girl wants to end her life by choice...She wants to be free from the pain Paolo put on her and anticipates you to kill her." The voice was almost heavy, the type of voice that if you listened to for a while, you would fall asleep to due to extreme boredom.

It was as if the more lively voice had suddenly snapped out of a day-dreaming state, his voice was still surprised but more down on this planet, "Paolo, Bring Alec!" He commanded, his voice still gentle like a feather even when commanding people. It was as if he wasn't happy with Paolo, wasn't I the enemy?

I tried to get the energy and strength to lift my head up to look at him. I battled against the pain...and lost. I dropped my head back onto the floor shutting my eyes again. I was confused and in agony. I felt helpless, not knowing what was happening...not knowing how or when I would die! Or if I even would!

I listened as Paolo obeyed him and went out of the room. Another jolt of pain rushed through my arm, this time even more painful. I screamed out in pain louder, the tears now starting again.

"Don't worry, my dear. Our guard Alec will remove all pain and we will give you medical attention!" The less dull leader spoke, he talked in a strange but gleeful way even in this situation. He seemed apologetic and embarrassed at my 'welcome', now I was very confused, wondering if I was actually going to die.

I struggled to speak again, trying hard. It came out as a screech that I hoped vampires could still understand. "No...no medical attention...I heal qui-" I couldn't finish the word off as another set of pain ripped through my chest. I screamed again wanting this 'Alec' to come quicker and remove my pain, whatever way he would do that.

"Fascinating!" The excited leader jumped, "I told you my brothers that she would be special!" So, they weren't going to kill me and thought I was special? Thanks!

"How do you know?" Another leader spoke, this time a different voice. His voice was a hiss, not as joyful as the happy one and not as dull as the sad one (yes, I refer to Vampire royalty as the 'happy one' and the 'sad one'). I knew their names of course but I didn't know which one was which (Plus, I couldn't even move my head to look at them!).

There was a silence that he broke, continuing with a even fiercer hiss. "Do you even know why she is here, Aro? Where is your common sense and fear? Kill her now!" Ah, so Aro was the 'happy one' and the true leader. If he was on my side, I would still be alive. Although whichever leader wanted me dead scared me with his voice but I did not fear that he would kill me.

"I have no fear and neither should you, Renesmee Cullen is the one fearing us!" Aro was embarrassed as he spoke. I heard his footsteps come closer, I didn't fear. His voice seemed completely safe and calm. But what if this was one, big game? I gulped.

Although it feared me at the same time, I wanted to show him why I was here and that I wasn't against him (even if I was, why would I even attempt to do that?). I whimpered as I tried to move out my hand, my eyes still closed to him. It trembled and burned in pain, shaking viciously and uncontrollably.

Aro caught it in a second, his cold icy hands a relief against my aching hand. His hand was as far away from any cuts as possible. Firstly I showed him Grandpa Carlisle explaining to me how my 'half-vampire' blood had no appeal to Vampires, unless newborn or recently turned Vegetarian.

I listened as Aro said 'Ahh!' fascinated by the lack of temptation for my blood. I showed him my journey to Volterra and my decision. I was showing him my 'ride' with Paolo when the pain hit my rib-cage making me scream out and remove my hand.

"Don't worry, dear child. Alec will be here shortly!" I hate this 'Alec' for taking so long! "What a fascinating story you have told me! It would be my great honor to allow you to stay with my coven and I in Volterra!"

The pain in my rib cage stopped me from having a second to celebrate and be joyful over the news that I wasn't going to die. I screamed again even louder, not being able to control it.

I listened as the door opened and a small crowd of footsteps walked towards where I lay screaming with Aro next to me.

"Master, I apologize for the time I took. My sister and I were..." his voice was calm and apologetic. He sounded much younger than the three leaders.

Aro silenced him and began talking again, "There is no need for an explanation, please can you instead start numbing Renesmee Cullen from the pain she is in?" He empathised my name, making it very clear who I was. As if I was famous! If I wasn't in so much pain, I would have laughed lightly at being a 'celebrity' in the vampire world. Ha!

"Yes master." The numbing boy said loudly and clearly. He moved so I was watching his black trousers and the bottom of his jacket. I tried to ignore the pain even more now, this pain-numbing boy would take it all away.

I waited. Every millisecond seemed like seconds. Every second seemed like minutes. Every second was worth it. Relief! The pain completely washed away, replaced with an extremely uncomfortable numbness. I couldn't feel any part of my body what-so-ever. It was better than pain, right?

"Thank you..." I almost moaned the words in relief. I sounded like someone after they get a tooth pulled out at the dentist. The words coming out sloppy; 'shank eew'.

It wasn't the numbing-boy who spoke saying 'your welcome' or 'what the hell are you trying to say?' A female hissed this time, her voice wasn't angry. It was furious as if it was naturally like that. "What is she doing here?" She spat sounding like the devil.

"Renesmee Cullen is here to explore a new way of life! Isn't this wonderful, Jane? Such a unique being staying with us, so different from our normal way of life!" Aro was thrilled, oblivious to Jane's fury.

Jane.

Jane of the Volturi. If I could feel them, my muscles would be tearing up in fear. Jane. Would the numbing block her pain? What if it didn't? Jane! The tremendous amount of fear I couldn't feel was extreme. What about her brother? My father had explained very clearly that even if it may not appear so, her brother was even deadlier with his power.

Was her brother in the room? Was he watching me, ready to attack? I was over fearing for my life in the hands of the Volturi but now it had returned when I realised the reality. The Volturi were to be feared even if Aro was so inviting and appeared soft. They weren't soft.

Can someone please explain to me why I even came here in the first place? I knew perfectly well about Jane and her brother...wait! My eyes opened widely as my thoughts came together.

"Master, I apologize for the time I took. My sister and I were..." The numbing boy was Jane's brother? Surely not! How could he be deadlier if he had removed all pain from my body?

Jane spoke again whilst my thoughts ran around, confused. "But master, she could be a threat! How do we know the real reason she's here? Her family..." She paused, spitting the word 'family' out in the most unloving way possible, "could be cleverly plotting to destroy us all!"

Oh and your scared?

"My dear, please do fret! I doubt you have forgotten my ability! Renesmee is purely here to explore the world!" And to get away from an over-protective family and a pushy pedophile that barks!

Jane didn't speak for awhile. It was extremely awkward lying on the floor, not being able to feel anything except from my fear that Jane would lash out on me any second.

Jane's voice was more controlled this time, anger-wise. It was slow and polite but clearly a fake trying to respect her master, Aro. "I'm sure we can send her off in a plane tomorrow to another country or continent, do you plan to do this Master?"

"No, I do not unless Renesmee wishes such thing herself. She's here to explore the immortal world, to embrace her half vampire side! Surely you can't miss her potential?" Aro's voice went low, I tried hard to listen. I guessed it was about myself. I was getting no-where...It was quiet even if Aro was whispering to Jane.

I couldn't hear myself breathe!

Stating the obvious, something wasn't right. My hearing returned as something from behind me, that I could not feel, pulled me up from the ground. I blinked a couple of times, looking around me. The lit room was remarkable. Covered in marble, full of ancient carvings on the walls. It was empty without the vampires in it. I flickered my eyes to the right where three thrones were, only two occupied. The leader on the left's voice matched his expression; bored. He had long jet black hair that didn't cover his almost suicidal expression. The leader on the right scowled at me, I snapped my gaze away from him terrified. His hair was a very rare silvery-blond, like the bored leaders, his hair did not cover his terrifying glare. Unfortunately.

Infront of me, Aro stood with his gaze on my face. He was grinning inhumanly wide. Across from him, Jane stood. Her face was like a antique doll, her cloak covered up her hair, only a few strands of browny-blonde* hair appearing. Her red eyes burned and her full lips were puckered up in fury.

I seemed to have missed a big chunk of important conversation (on purpose). Jane nodded at Aro, "As you please, master. You do know best." She sounded extremely uncomfortable. She made certain that her gaze would not catch mine as she looked over to whoever was holding me up from behind. Jane looked at the person furious yet hopeless, pleading for advice. Such a strange expresion coming from someone so powerful. Her gaze snapped away from the person holding me up, her expression now changed to controlled fury. Aro turned to look at her and smiled in a comforting manner, reaching his hand out and placing it on her shoulder. And in a second, she sped out of the room at vampire speed.

I was immensely curious about the large chunk of conversation I had missed on purpose, obviously about me. It terrified me, were they planning some death ceremony? No, Jane was far too furious. If that was so, she would have been dancing around celebrating.

I hadn't gotten my mind around to how 'they' stopped me from hearing the rest of the conversation. They had taken away my hearing, that I knew. But who? It had to be some Vampire power that I had no idea of. I felt extremely self-conscious and nervous at the missing information. I liked to know everything, I had to be aware of the situation to function properly.

On the bright side, either the Volturi are extremely good actors, or they won't kill you. Maybe. What have I gotten myself into?

Aro's tone of voice did not indicate I was in any danger at all. He spoke again, joyfully with a warming edge. "Alec, take Miss Cullen to her newly assigned chambers. You know what to do." He

does? Oh my god. He really is really going to kill me, isn't he? And he knows what to do exactly! Aro spoke to who was helping me stand from behind me...Alec. I really did hope that my father had been over-exaggerating his ability, to keep me even more alert. For protection. I panicked as Alec held me up straighter. I could not feel his grip, I only knew he was there as I was standing by force.

Aro smiled warmly at me again. Did I believe his warmness? No. Jacob was warm and you believed him when...NO! No Renesmee! I erased that topic of thought immediately.

Turning his back, Aro walked back over to the other two leaders. I doubted that the bored and fiery expressions had changed. Alec started to pull me away, out of the room. I had a better chance now to look around, I wasn't on a vampire's back thinking I was facing death.

He was pulling me through what seemed to be a little reception area. It was dim-lighted with a dark colour tone. A few other vampires stood, looking curiously at Alec and I, mainly myself. Surprisingly, amongst the vampires, they were a decent number of humans present. They stood staring too. They looked far too calm to be considered a 'meal' and to watch someone be dragged through a castle, numb.

I was taken to a hallway now, it was long and narrow, lit up only by flames of fire on the wall. Even if this was the only thing that could destroy a vampire, they did not (seem) to fear it. They weren't stupid enough to jump in it, that I knew. Did they keep it for effect? As if to say; Hey you! Break a rule and we'll throw this at you!

Alec was moving at a greater pace now. He didn't stop to grab a fire-torch and set me on fire, that was a good sign. I didn't the fact that he was helping me walk. I had ran away for many reasons, some I did not even know myself, but I knew that it was to help me get away from protection. From my comfort zone! To help myself stand...on my own! Which I was not doing just now, even if it was not what I really did mean.

I tried to build up the courage to talk to him. I didn't like to speak much, especially to a powerful, sadistic vampire who once wanted to kill me. Then why did you even come here in the first place?

I forced my mouth open. "I can walk on my own. Seriously, its fine." I wriggled about with no hope what-so-ever.

Expecting him to snap back at me, I was surprised that he spoke politely, almost professionally. "But surely walking with numb legs would be uncomfortable? I wouldn't know myself, I am the one who does the numbing. And I am sure Aro would hate for you to be even...more...uncomfortable on your first morning in Volterra."

I wanted to object but a voice spoke with annoyance from behind us. "I'm glad Paolo has finally listened for once, I said dibs first. Give her to me." I shuddered a little, confused. It was such a unique form of terror...not knowing wither or not someone was going to end your life. It wasn't the first time I had felt this.

I listened as the footsteps came closer to us, following as we turned left at the end of the never-ending hallway. "I hate to break it to you, Demetri but I'm afraid we won't be feasting on the girl." Yet?

I listened as somebody laughed loudly, the laugh not matching the tone of Demetri's, whoever he was. "I'm sure you can find someone else...the Cullens would not be happy at somebody draining a member of their coven!" The voice laughed. Hahahaha, they sure wouldn't! So...don't!

Demetri clearly faked a laugh, extremely annoyed. "Yes, I'm sure they wouldn't be happy." His voice turned very polite as he sped up and moved infront of Alec to take a good look at me. He had short, brown hair and the obvious, pale skin (with a slight olive complexion) and red eyes. Demetri examined me carefully then he moved his red eyes and looked at me, his gaze frightening.

Snapping his red eyes away, he looked to the bigger vampire (who the laughed earlier belonged to), who had now joined Demetri, looking at me. He reminded me of a bigger version of Uncle Emmett. He stared at me curious, a grin on his face.

"She isn't like her mother...I can lock onto her mind easily..." Demetri muttered as we went through a large wooden door, stopping. Finally!

"Thought so." The bigger one said, "I'm Felix. I knew your mother and father before you were even breathing." He grinned widely, making it sound as if my mother and father were close friends of his. "Did they send you here? Kick you out or something?"

It was as if Alec knew what I was thinking, he moved my hand over to Felix who took it curiously. I showed him what I had showed Aro.

His eyes lit up, amused. Felix laughed again, he reminded me even more of Uncle Emmett when he laughed. "Nice little plan you had there, Renesmee! Nice little power too." Demetri took my hand next with the same curiosity that Felix had, I showed him the exact same scenario.

Demetri let go of my hand and hissed under his breath, "Can Paolo do anything right?" Felix laughed for the third time, still cheery. I couldn't help but laugh, happiness taking over the fear that I would be dead any minute now.

"Demetri and I better get going, you half breeds sleep, right? I think its late. Try not to dream about me to much..." Felix winked and I laughed again as he walked away, Demetri following.

I felt more comfortable now, maybe it would disappear now that it was only Alec and I. I knew my fathers words, wither he was over-exaggerating or not; "Jane has a twin. Be very, very careful around him, Renesmee. With Jane, you will automatically be careful. Her twin may not provoke caution but Renesmee, I mean this, take caution with every Volturi guard"

Does taking caution include running away to them, father?

Alec started to walk again, now up a flight of stairs. He stopped and moved one of his hands, I watched as he moved his hand, gripping onto a key, he inserted it into the door and unlocked it, pushing it open. The room was not lit, I stared into the blackness as Alec pulled me into the room. I listened as he switched on a light, lightening up the room.

Holy freaking vampire!

My old house suddenly felt like some cardboard box compared to this. The lights had revealed a tremendous sized room, three brown doors were scattered around on the light gold/brown wall that had lighter patterns at the top. On the wall, a few paintings hanged. At the back of the room was a glossy brown bed. The golden bedsheets were tucked in perfectly and a short oliver coloured blanket lay over the bed, the colours clashing perfectly together. The pillows were white and simple. Next to them were 'decoration' pillows that were a darker, more shiny gold. The headboard was a glossy brown, it had carvings on it that matched the two bedside tables next to the bed that had lampshades on each table. Infront of the bed was a long in width and height, chocolatey brown carpet with a small table on top of it. To its left was a dresser with towels on top if it and flowers in a white vase. A large mirror hung on the wall, beautifully carved and a darker brown. It matched the bigger wardrobe on the other side of the bedroom, the colours and carvings the exact same. To make the room seem less empty, a couple of brown leather sofas and chairs were scattered across the room, fitting perfectly.

I looked down to the light wooden floor. "Wow..." I mumbled.

Alec chuckled from behind me which came as a big surprise. "I thought Paolo had scared you so much you could not speak." His voice was more relaxed now than what it had been when he was with Aro.

It had been a long game of if I will or won't die. Right now, I hoped and truly thought that maybe I wouldn't.

"So did I..." I mumbled, looking up. Due to the numbing, I knew I sounded very stupid.

Alec removed his grip on me, so that I now stood very uncomfortably numb. He had moved himself infront of me, he was looking around the room. When finished, he turned to me. "The doors lead to a bathroom, living room and a study." He said politely.

I knew what my father meant when he had said that Alec didn't look as if he naturally had to be feared compared to his twin. He looked a lot like her yet his expression was more calm and his lips were a little fuller. He had Jane's gaze though which was frightening. He looked around fifteen or sixteen but appeared a little more maturer. I had to admit, I didn't fully look seventeen myself. Babyface! So our faces were equal in age in my opinion. He looked a few inches taller than me, I stood at 5'4 making him very small for a man. Alec was very good looking, even for a vampire. I knew that every vampire was meant to be 'beautiful' but seriously, if you looked at a lot of them closely, some were as just as ugly as some humans on the street!

I nodded at him awkwardly. "Thanks..." It came out as; hanks. I groaned and Alec chuckled again. I was still pretty surprised. I had expected him to be just as angry as his twin, just as sadistic. I didn't know anything about Felix but I had to admit, hearing him laugh was very unexpected because of how I had expected the Volturi to act.

"I apologize for what my ability has done to your speech...but being pain free is better, no?" I couldn't wrap my head around how this power was meant to be powerful.

I nodded, "So, you can numb people?"

Alec smirked at me, I shuddered. He looked a lot like his sister now. I started to blink, questioning my eye-sight (and sanity) as I watched a mist form around Alec, coming closer to me...I was truly confused now. It kept coming closer and closer as Alec's smirk grew.

When I blinked, I opened up my eyes to nothing, just darkness. I couldn't hear myself breathe or any sound. I couldn't feel anything. I was in total darkness. Had he killed me? Was this what death was like? It was truly, one of the most confusing and paralysing moments of my life. I didn't know where I was, what had happened..I was just in complete and utter darkness. I couldn't feel, hear or see anything. I only had my thoughts. This was death. But I could still hear my thoughts.

Stop messing around, Renesmee! .DEAD! He killed you!

I jumped up as if my body could have been shaken. Infront of me, Alec was trying to take my shirt off. At this point, I could not care that I had my sight back or even wonder what had happened. Jumping up again, I smacked his head fiercely.

I should be feeling pain...but I can't feel anything! Ha! Hahaha! Well, neither could he really.

He looked up and I couldn't help but grin like a fool at the fact the hit had caused me no pain what-so-ever. "Who do you think you are? A freaking imprinter?" I snarled. It didn't come across well. More along the lines of; Hoosh dooo yeeew shink yeeew aaahr?

Alec looked embarrassed, "It occurred to me, several times, that it was uncomfortable for you to move in such numbness. I am correct. Like I mentioned before, Aro wants every guest to be comfortable."

"I can undress myself, thank you very much." When I came to Volterra, I was hoping to get away from the Jacob type, not meet the vampire equivalent of them. Alec did look very embarrassed though. He was just trying to help, it was his 'job' after all to impress his master. He shrugged and moved away.

I still had no idea what had happened earlier, I knew for a fact that Alec had something to do with it. His smirk...and the mist! I was now on the gold bed so he must have carried me there along with my bag of (little) clothes and books.

Reaching my numb hand out into the bag, I pulled out the pyjamas I bought. I checked to see if Alec had his back turned, which he did, and pulled my clothes off and dressed myself in the pyjamas. My eyes were on Alec the entire time, making sure he did not look.

"You can look now." I said whilst buttoning the final button of my pink silk pyjamas that had luckily been on sale. He turned around, his expression still quite embarrassed. I decided to drop it and ask about another topic that I was desperate to speak about.

"Did you do that earlier?" I threw the bag onto the floor and started to move the covers, getting excited to finally get some sleep.

Alec smirked a little, the embarrassment washing away. "I can cut off your senses." He said proudly. Now I truly knew what my father meant. This could be used in a nice way and a terrifyingly bad way. If he wanted to destroy me, I wouldn't have felt anything although that was very uncomfortable to even think about. Maybe it was more bad than good. Alec could use this to fight someone off to. They would be clueless about where to move or where Alec was. They couldn't even feel him attacking!

"Nice. I can show you pictures." I winked at him and grinned at my pathetic sounding power compared to his. I had another, minor power. I could break through shields. I think it was only my mothers.

"As I saw." Alec said, crossing his arms. I listened as he growled under his breath.

"Something the matter?" I started to lift the bed-covers and moved under them. I didn't know how I would be able to ignore the numb feeling to sleep. However, It was much better than spending the morning in pain. It had to be at-least 4AM now.

"I can't feed now. I have to watch over you this morning." What the? I came to Volterra for independence and zero protection. I bet he was trying to rape me before! Now he's watching over me!

I shook my head, "Its alright. You can leave." My voice sounded to eager to get him to go, I should have tried to control it.

"I never knew you wanted to spend the night in pain, sorry." He turned his back to me now, starting to walk away. Come back! Come back crazy rapist numbing boy! So he had to be near me for his power to work? So that was the mist! The more of his power he used, the more mist. That was why I hadn't noticed it before.

"No!" I shouted in a panic, "I mean...I'm sorry you can't feed...but Aro said that he wants to make me comfortable, right?" He turned around and I smiled at him with a cocky edge.

"If I get hungry, I can always drain you, right?" Alec matched my cocky smile and tone of voice perfectly. When I first came across him, he seemed very quiet. Now that he was more 'comfortable' around me, he became more and more like his sister.

I sighed and put my head down onto the pillow, trying harder than ever to not fall sleep. "Have fun watching me, Alec. Do me a favour and turn of the lights?" I shut my eyes, eager to fall asleep. Alec did not say a word more, he turned the lights of. I could feel his gaze watching me. That and the numbing made it hard to sleep, it was extremely uncomfortable. I was thankful for the good bed and the fact that I was very tired.

Yesterday (and part of today) was one of the most exciting days of my life. And one of the worst. A day that had started of so normal had turned so abnormal. Twenty-four hours ago, I was sleeping in Alaska while my family prepared for my last (true) birthday. Now that I wasn't growing anymore, I truly thought that now my life would be a boring and repetitive heaven. I had everything. Protection, family...and I would never have my heart broken.

Truthfully? I don't think I quite knew why I was here myself. I hoped that it would help me learn myself better then figure out why I had done such an absurd thing. I knew very well that it wasn't just because I wanted to explore and do exciting things. There was more to it, I didn't even know myself.

As I fell asleep, peacefully, I knew that tomorrow would be very different. Reality would hit me, the minute I woke up. Wouldn't I be in great emotional pain from being away from my imprinter? I would be worrying over my family who were in Alaska just now, loosing their sanity along with my imprinter. I knew he would try and find me. But my scent stopped at the airport.

It was almost as if I was drunk right now. Then tomorrow, I would awaken and face all of the stupid things I had done.

Or maybe I would stay forever drunk. I did not know.

*As for hair detail or whatever, I WILL BE STICKING TO THE MOVIE VERSION! SAME with Demetri's hair. Its like black, shoulder length in the BOOKS but I'm changing it to the movies because that is really how I, and many others now think they look like.

I am sure this is the biggest chapter I have wrote...EVER!
To long? I hope not! If so, I am sorry! I hope you didn't skip it. Hehehe.

Anyway.

Thanks to my reviewer: Poisoned Princess

Music inspiration:

Da Da Da – Lil Wayne

Long Way Down – Timbaland FT Draughty.

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