Hi guys! here are some answers to the reviews I have gotten and reactions to them or whatever. Let's go!
The 6th Spectral King - Thank you for saying it was interesting. And nothing else. Still, thank you very much :D
Panther Hardraad - I don't know what SYOC stands for, but after looking it up, I arrived at two possible translations: Suck Your Own C***, and Send Your Own Character. I think it is the second one... for reasons. Thank you for following, it means a lot! :D
NightFall-Sensei - Thank you for saying that I was a clever writer, but what did I do? The OC form just fit better that way, so I did it that way. It wasn't anything surprising to me, but thank you nevertheless. Ja na? I always thought it was Ja ne. "The More You Know."
Ohata Uchiha - Oh god no. Now my friend from middle school is reading this. I feel like stopping all of a sudden... lol jk. And thanks for explaining out backstory... kind of and saying chapter two was awesome. I too wonder who will be top ten. Obviously me. At number 8.
Snowwold12132 - Every story I write as an interesting end. Its just I never get to it cause I always drop the story at some point. Thought I swear that one day, I will finish every story I've written!
Panther Hardraad - This will be a daily sporadic fanfic, as in, it will come out daily one minute, then the next, I skip fifteen days before the next chapter. "The More You Know."
JJun - Thanks! I always like it when people compliment my stories! I mean, a lot of them are good, well, interesting ideas, but it can be molded into a good story. But thanks for saying it was cool.
NighFall-Sensei - Each character will have a chance in the limelight, sometimes an entire chapter will be dedicated to them, which might not seem much right now, but when things finally start, it will be a lot. Maybe. I will most likely not remember ever single character. I always look over the characters I have before each chapter, then, when I'm writing said chapter, I have the characters page pulled up so I can just look at it to go over it, thinking about, who should I send in, or how to portray each character. Or what pokemon they have, what they look like, and what their name is. I'm very forgetful. My grammar Is pef3ct. Ie dont now whet you takl abot.
And now, thank you all for reading! I currently have 181 views, 11 followers, and 5 favorites! So far, this is more popular than any stories I've witten when they were at two, three chapters! Thank you all, for being interested in this unoriginal story! There are many other pokemon school fanfictions out there, and school fanfictions about other anime, or even games, probably. But, I thank you for being interested in mine! So, let us get started, by looking back at my character.
I leaned against the wall of the boat, thinking about the past. The events that ultimately led me to this school, was the death of my father. I stopped leaning against the wall and picked Shock up, letting him jump onto my shoulder as I walked away from my spot, heading to wherever, looking slightly up at the sky, staring off into space. I always looked upon the even as my fault, I mean, if I didn't do what I did, then this wouldn't have happened, though I probably would've gone to this school either way, just on a more happy note. I walked outside of the boat and walked towards the big, open space designed for pokemon battles and saw a kid waiting for me. A few hours prior to this, I pissed him off when I bumped into him, making him drop his ice cream. It was a stupid reason to demand a battle from someone, but I didn't care. Shock would win, regardless.
Looking back to the past, I could still clearly see my father, from before he died and when he died. It was a Nidoking on a rampage that ended his life. Though he was a great trainer, a champion in some regions, and even a one time world champion, he and his best pokemon were taken out by a sudden fury in a powerful pokemon.
I faced the kid and Shock jumped off my shoulder, landing on the boat perfectly, with his legs outstretched, ready to leap in any direction. The kid pulled out his pokeball and sent out his pokemon. In a red beam and light, a small Nidoran male appeared. As my eyes went dark, I looked back on my past, to the events that led to my father's demise.
I was a small brat that day, five years ago, at the age of 10. I was just out having fun. At this point in time I didn't have Shock yet, though he was an egg at the time. I had found a small den, that housed some Nidorans, male and female. But I found no Nidoking or Nidoqueen. After looking at the small, adorable pokemon for several minutes, I ran back home to tell my father. He was excited by the news, for he had wanted to take a picture, or draw, several Nidoran together, but was unable to do because he couldn't find any. I showed him the spot and he took a few pictures and then started his drawing. Midway through, he suddenly stopped and looked off into the distance. Maka, his Luxray, pricked his ears up and let out a growl, warning us and whatever pokemon was coming this way. His growl, had the opposite affect. The Nidoking appeared, throwing trees to the side, racing up to us to stop us from doing the Nidorans any harm. Dad, however, responded quickly. He got out of the way, and showed the Nidoking he meant to harm, petting Maka on the head, which made him stop growling. The Nidoking was still very much angry, but he didn't attack. He looked from me to my father, to Maka several times, before he started towards his den, watching us all the while.
Before I continue onwards, let me draw up a picture of the scene. Thirty meters from us, was the Nidoking. Me and my Dad, as well as maka, were about three meters from the sleeping Nidorans. There were five males and three females.
So, after the Nidoking stopped running towards us, I thought it was all okay. So, I turned towards the Nidorans and reached out to pet one of them, which I was about to do before he appeared. The Nidoking responded in rage, thinking that I was going to hurt them. He then ran towards us at frightening speeds. He jumped towards my Dad first, as he was the closest one, and farthest from the Nidorans, aiming to body slam him. However, he jumped out of the way and Maka launched a thunder bolt at the Nidoking. Nidoking easily shook the attack off and howled, shaking the mountain side.
He then started to attack Maka, and even managed to get some good hits off him, thought Maka was vastly faster and superior to him. But fueled by rage at having missed Maka so many times, and at seeing how his attacks had no affect on him, he slammed his tail into Maka's head, making him losing conciousness for almost a second, but was enough for him to be sent flying from the ground. The impact of the tail was so great, it sent Maka flying several meters. But that wasn't the end result of the desperate attack. Since this was a mountain side, there were many cliffs around us. The Nidoking's den, just so happened to be close to one of those cliffs and he knew it well. His attack was meant to send Maka flying off the cliff, and it did so. Maka fell and landed on the ground, landing on his side and hitting his head on the rocky terrain, making it bounce up once. From the sheer drop of the fall, to the painful impact of his head, as well as his head bouncing upon impact of the ground, Maka was killed. Shock's dad, Maka, was killed the same day Shock hatched from his egg, never to see his dad.
After Maka was taken care of, the Nidoking turned to us. Having brought no other pokemon, dad could only stare at the Nidoking, giving me instructions that I barely remember. However, I could do enough as the Nidoking charged at us, until dad pushed me away, seeing that I wasn't moving. Dad was hit by the Nidoking's front horn, while I was hit by one of his claws. The scar rests upon my chin to this very day. Not so for Dad, who was struck in his chest, dying a few minutes later, because his lung was ripped apart and died of suffocation on his own blood. If he didn't die of that, he would have died from blood lost.
After seeing my dad die, I found the strength to run away, as if by running, I could move back time to when he was still alive.
"Shock, use charge!" Electricity surged out of Shock and ran around him, sending small sparks off his skin as it improved his electrical abilities.
"Nidoran, use poison sting!" The Nidoran's trainer called out. The Nidoran ran towards Shock, but with a simple command, Shock jumped upwards, dodging the poison attack.
"Now, use spark!" I yelled. Shock fell back down to the boat, and upon landing, immediately jumped towards the Nidoran, tackling him with his electric attack. The Nidoran was sent flying, but managed to stay on his feet, by skidding across the boat.
"Tackle him!" The trainer yelled out. Nidoran ran towards Shock, jumping right and left to confuse Shock.
"Watch out Shock!" I yelled, but was too late. When Shock jumped to his left to dodge the attack, the Nidoran jumped after him, headbutting Shock in the side of the face. Shock fell to the ground, but got up immediately.
"Spark, once more!" I yelled to Shock. Shock jumped at the Nidoran, but the Nidoran jumped away. "After him!" I yelled out and Shock complied and ran after the Nidoran, sparkling with electricity threateningly.
"Uh, Nidoran, use..." The trainer thought to himself, unable to think up a suitable plan. "I know! Use tackle!" Nidoran then stoppd running away and jumped towards Shock, but before he could build enough speed, Shock slammed into him, hurling him away and hitting a crate on the boat, destroying it in the process. His trainer cringed at the impact and immediately ran towards his Nidoran. I called Shock back to me, knowing that the battle was done. When Shock was back onto my shoulder, I fished out an oran berry from my backpack and fed it to him, scratching his chin as he ate the small blue berry.
I then walked back to my room, for a short nap.
Let me know what you thought. This wasn't the "actual" first chapter, but was a more of an introduction to my character. Out of all the people who sent in pokemon, four shared pokemon, which would be two pokemon. A Riolu, and a... another Shinx. So anyway, I will be doing what I did to the Riolu from the last chapter, which was giving him a scarf, so this Shinx will have something as well. Don't know what yet, but he will have something! It doesn't matter if you share a pokemon with someone else, but be prepared to read the chapter with your character in it and see your awesome Scyther or whatever, wearing boxing gloves. Or something. Anyway, please tell me what you think about my story so far, and be PREPARED for tomorrow, or next Monday, will be the actual FIRST CHAPTER, as in, when they finally get to school and it finally starts! Anyway, I hope you guys have a wonderful day, and please do not wonder into Nidoran dens, for a Nidoking will come along and murder your father and his beloved pokemon infront of your very eyes, possibly scaring you physically, mentally, and emotionally for the rest of your life. If you want to know my character's name, I'll give you a hint. It is related to my name, Kuromaster. You just have to find it out. By the way, it is Japanese. I may or may not have the word wrong, because I have to use google translate for all my japanese, latin, translates.
Goodbye and may you join Ever Grande Pokemon Highschool to learn its most grizzled secret.