The Vampire Prince
Original story and plot by: Sparrowfan15 Continued and changed a bit by: B
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Harry Potter characters. Those belong to J.K. Rowling, Warner Bros., Scholastic, and all those people. The main plot and original story belongs to Sparrowfan15. These first few chapters are written by her, I just changed a few things and made them a bit longer.
Chapter 2: NaomiSeptember flew past quickly without anything-eventful happening. Well Snape had a put a spell on Sirius so that he could not take off a dress that looked a lot like Dorothy's in the "Wizard of Oz". Peter had asked Emily out, but she kindly declined. And James did accidentally turn a poor Hufflepuff girl into beetle when he was aiming for some Slytherins, but besides that nothing worth mentioning.
It was the day before Petunia's wedding and the last day of classes before the weekend. Lily had decided to take James to the wedding along with her even though Petunia hated him almost as much as she hated Lily. Lily had picked out the dress she will wear the Hogsmeade visit before.
As Lily, JC, Spence, and Emily were coming out of Charms, the only class they had together, a girl with blood red hair stepped in front of them.
"Hello," said the girl kindly with clearly an American accent. "I'm Naomi Mange. I transferred here from America. You are Evans, Carlson, Cooly, and Pine, right?" asked the girl, her cerulean blue eyes gazing at the girls in turn.
"Yes." Spence answered smiling. "I'm Spencer, call me Spence, and this is Lily, Emily, and Jade."
"JC," corrected JC. "Its nice to meet you."
"Oh, please. It's an honor to meet you four. I heard you're the smartest girls in your year!" exclaimed Naomi.
"They are," said Emily nodding towards the blushing girls, "but I'm still struggling in Potions and History."
"That's very nice of you though." Thanked Lily.
"I hear you're also quite lucky! I have heard you're all going out with the infamous Marauders? Yes?" questioned Naomi.
"Once again, they are." Said Emily.
"Didn't Peter ask you out last month?" JC asked.
"Yeah, but I just don't like him like that." Replied Emily.
"I don't like him at all, really." Commented Spence, a glare from Lily caused her to explain. "I just have a funny feeling about him. Like…one day he'll betray us."
"I know Peter is a little strange, but don't be silly, Spence! Peter would never betray us." Contradicted Lily.
"I'm not being silly! You have to admit he isn't the bravest or smartest guy you've ever seen and he is easily influenced. Besides, if you care to remember my family has had many Seers, plus I'm the only one in that class who is safely passing in Divination!" exclaimed Spence.
"Well, your family has had many Seers, but that doesn't mean you're one of them. And you have to agree that the Divination professor is a little bit crazy." Alleged JC.
"For your information," Spence said a little annoyed, "I have shown signs of being a…."
"Girls!" exclaimed Emily sharply. They turned to see Emily jutting her head in Naomi's direction. It was clear that Naomi was watching them very much interest.
"Oh, Naomi! I'm so sorry!" apologized Lily. "I'm afraid we forgot you were there…."
"Oh, its alright," said Naomi with a smile still on her flawless face. "Everyone has little quarrels with their friends. It's completely normal."
The girls looked at Naomi with surprise evident on their faces. "Wow. Well, thanks for being so understanding." Replied JC.
"No problem. Oh, Look at the time. You girls better hurry or you'll be late for your next class…." Warned Naomi as she turned and walked away.
Emily glanced at her watch and realized Naomi was right. They only had five minutes!
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Lily and James left early Saturday mourning. It was still dark out and a mist lay over the grounds. Lily reached for James hand and closed her eyes as they stepped out onto the grounds. James gazed down at Lily and smiled. She looked beautiful in his eyes. Before he knew it, him and Lily stood in front of the Hogwarts Express.
"Are you ready? Petunia is going to freak when I show up at her 'Most Wonderful Day'. She's going to die when she finds out I brought 'That awful Boy' with me. Are sure you want to come?" asked Lily her emerald eyes focused on James.
"I'm sure. If you go, I go. I can't let you face that awful sister of yours by yourself!" said James with a grin.
Lily shook her head and climbed onto the scarlet steam engine, James climbing on after her.
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Spence and JC burst into the library looking around frantically, Emily calmly walking in after them. JC spotted Naomi reading a large book in the corner of the library and ran over to her.
"There you are! We have been looking all over for you! What are you doing in the library on a Saturday! Oh, never mind, you are coming with us! You have to meet everybody!" exclaimed JC.
Spence grabbed Naomi's arm as JC grabbed the other. They pulled her out of the Library and dragged her to the Gryffindor common room.
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JC, Spence, and Emily introduced Naomi to their boyfriends and Peter. Through out the day Peter kept asking Emily to go out with him, to the extent that Emily felt uncomfortable. The group talked all day and even did a little studying. In the evening they all went to pick up Lily and James and find out how mad Petunia got with Lily for attending her wedding with no less a WIZARD boyfriend. Lily definitely pushed it with Petunia today. As they went to bed, Spence, JC, Emily, Lily, James, and even Sirius and Remus were happy they knew Naomi….
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Naomi opened her eyes late in the night and made sure everyone was asleep. Naomi silently opened her trunk and pulled out a black orb. Naomi then spoke softly to the orb, "Tengo noticias, mi príncipe. No me prohiba su atención." The mist in the orb began to swirl and a man's face became visible. "My Lord," said Naomi as she bowed her head.
The man nodded to her before getting straight to the point, "Naomia, have you found anyone?"
"Actually, My Lord, I have found three. They are the best in their year. They seem to fit your description."
"Excellent," the man smiled evilly. "We must bring them here, so I may see them and choose the best one."
"If I deliver them to you, My Prince, then will you turn me back into a vampire? I despise being human!"
"Very well." Said the man lazily.
"I know one of their friends, who, with a little persuasion, would be all too happy to help." Added Naomi.
"Good…well, I must leave now. We are beginning the hunt and my imbecile siblings and their stupid brides cannot do anything without Mother and me to guide them. Farewell Naomia."
"Farewell, My Prince Daydrine," said Naomi as she bowed her head again.
"And Naomia?" he said darkly, "Make certain…you do NOT fail!"
With that the orb went blank and Prince Daydrine's face disappeared….
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Eimme: I'm sorry it took so long; I had to write 10 essays for school. I officially never want to hear the word essay again! I can't tell you who is watching them! But you will find out soon, I promise. Emily doesn't like Peter like that, and she had to be the last inside because of her family's tradition. You will find out where the Vampire Prince is later. Thank you for adding me to your favorites list! Also thank you for adding me to your author alert watch list!
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A/N: I'm really sorry for the long update. I had 10 essays to write for school and I just didn't have time. Then when I did actually have time to sit down and type I didn't know what to type. I typed what the original author wrote and added a few descriptions here and there. But then I got to the part when Lily and James left for Petunia's wedding. I didn't know if I should write about what happened at the wedding or not since Sparrowfan15 hadn't wrote about it. I planned on writing about the wedding, but since you were all very eager for an update I decided against it so I could update sooner. So I just wrote what she wrote even though it is a short chapter. I wrote the little part about Lily and James getting on the train and Spence, JC, and Emily looking for Naomi. But people give me some credit! The chapter I was going off of Sparrowfan15's was only one page long! The words Naomi says to the orb, is Spanish for "I have news, My Prince. Allow me your attention." I only took Spanish for a year last year, so I found this site that translates English into a lot of languages. What I know of Spanish that is right, but I'm not an expert. If it's wrong please correct me. The next chapter is ALL me! Since I like long chapters and I'm not exactly sure what's going to happen I might not post very soon again sorry!