Third chapter of Doll; the official first chapter of this story has replaced the story idea I posted, not that many changes to it but I have changed a couple of the smaller things and added a little bit more detail, if you feel like it check it out.
This here is a preview people... meaning: Full Version coming very soon!
Warning!: This story will contain vulgar language, some blood, really cliché parts and teenagers being teenagers as well as some humor tossed in here and there.
"Naruto" is property of Masashi Kishimoto, and as such I do not own the Manga and/or the Anime.
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Doll
PREVIEW
"Let's begin this, shall we..." echoed the lavender-eyed girl's voice throughout the deserted street as she stood before the crouching raven-haired teen, now that she was closer to him Sasuke could actually SEE what the crazy cow looked like; long silky ebony hair cascaded down to the small of the girl's back, sharp lavender eyes with two delicate eyebrows drawn together glared harshly at him, she had a pale aristocratic complexion and wore a white hoodie with long black sleeves that ended in thick white turn-ups , her hands were covered in white gloves and hers legs in black slacks, lastly black strapped sandals showed off her toes with light purple nail-polish...
Drawing her left foot back the mystery girl's muscles tensed as she prepared to attack the raven-haired interloper, her long ebony hair gently swayed in the wind that had picked up around them a second ago; neither Sasuke or Naruto missed the two black Rabbit ears attached to the white hood that swayed with her hair in the soft winds, "And what would your names be?" asked the girl neutrally, her sandalled foot scuffing the dirt as it slid a little further back while she raised her right arm and held her hand open... palm facing the youngest Uchiha.
"Naruto and Uchiha Sasuke, what's yours?" answered the small orange fox Doll on the raven's shoulder; his ocean-blue button eyes glaring at the tense lavender-eyed girl standing in front of them, his ears pressed flat against his plushy head and white tipped tail rigid, 'If she's bothering with formalities... it means she's confident that it's going to be her win." thought the fox watching the girl warily.
"Hinata." replied the lavender-eyed girl firmly while not moving an inch; her body still tense and ready to fight, as soon as the gentle wind that had breezed through the quiet street died down the girl sprung into action; the same light that had made up the weird laser from before quickly coated her gloved hands as she suddenly appeared in front of the crouching Sasuke and his Doll with such a speed the Uchiha could've sworn the cow blurred, with a short battle cry Hinata thrust her hand at the wide-eyed raven before her...
BOOOOM!
The ground beneath her opponent cracked and cratered under the force of her attack as it connected releasing an explosion of bright light while spewing dust, debris and clods of earth into the air covering the area around the lavender-eyed girl; 'I put enough force into that attack to level a small building... he's already dead.' thought Hinata with a small smirk, the road surrounding the ball of light and dust had dozens of large cracks spider-webbing away from it; a display of the raw force exuded by the hoodie wearing girl's attack, soon the light faded away and the dust began to settle... then it happened; Hinata felt something push back against her gloved hand startling her, "What?" hissed the lavender-eyed teen before pulling her arm out of the dust cloud...
"And..?" muttered a voice dryly from within the cloud of dust making the surprised girl's eyes widen even more than they already had, a sudden gust of strong wind cleared the dust hindering her vision only to reveal a smirking Sasuke still crouching in the EXACT damn spot where he had stood before, "Bastard..." began Hinata: glaring furiously at the young Uchiha but snapped her mouth shut as her eyes damn near bulged out of their sockets when she properly took in her raven-haired opponent's appearance...
Sasuke was still crouching in the crater her attack had made; his clothes a little dirty from the debris that had been kicked up... and completely unharmed!, but what made the girl's eyes bulge was the fact that the air around the Uchiha was distorted and rising off of the onyx-eyed teens body in wisps much like heat off of a tar road on a hot day; the fox that was previously on his shoulder missing, 'HE was the Doll?' mentally panicked Hinata who quickly back-peddled to a safe distance away from her opponent.
"You really shouldn't underestimate people woman..." began a smirking Sasuke as he stood up for the first time since the beginning of the attack, his eyes a luminescent crimson with slitted pupils instead of the previous onyx, "It could end badly for you." finished the raven who then seemed explode in raw power; flames darker than any Hinata had ever seen coating his body, the heat scorching the very air around them and her skin a little with an ongoing harsh hiss-like sizzle...
"So this is your power." muttered the aforementioned woman ; her voice wavering a bit as she stared at the raven coated in fire, "No." replied Sasuke losing his smirk for a more serious expression, "Then wha-" began Hinata only to be stopped by the Uchiha smashing a flame covered fist into her face like a sledge hammer as he suddenly blurred from where he stood to right where she had, "It's just the beginning!" shouted the raven as she crashed into a closed store; his eyes wild and a sinister grin marring his usually annoyed visage...
"NOW GIVE ME A FIGHT!"
Tell me what you think so far...
~Asylum132.
Reposted by MikaUchiha
Thanks for everyone that has stayed with this story. I'm going to do my best to finish this and make a few adjustments. Let me know what you want. Thanks. 3