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&& thoughts
^ my comma key is broken
"…" said Hinata. &&was is he giving me this&& she thought^ (by the way naruto cant hear her thoughts).
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"I love you said Naruto." Then he kissed her^ and ran around. OMG he thought ^&&it is so nice to be^ in love I feel like my heart is pounding; which it is so quickly I cannot breath&& "Oh HInata; you take my breath away!" shouted Naruto; he was acting kind of like lee who was sitting in a chair (AN they were in the classroom). Now lee waved; he really like Naruto.
"Oh Naruto I love you too!" screamed Hinata; at the topping of her lungs. Hinata was blushing. She was very happy; and nice^ and she was smiling^ and also she got an ego booster.
"Oh Nauruto let's get^ DATING!" said Hinata. She threw away her shy and beacon very outgoing. %She joined lots of clubs as she wore her kawaii school uniform; Then she came back to naruto who was standing in the halfway which was blue.%
"OK I have my answer for you Naruto" Said Hinata. "Let's go out to the movies!" SHE SAID; very kawai. 'm sorry this chapter is so short; but I have some very important things I have to say.
1- REVIEW Please
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I learned how to use the semicolon; just so you know; I will be using
it maybe instead of the ^ which is a coma. w is so kawai!
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please review
4- aishitero reviews!
5- thankx w your all
awesome.