Hey! My first ever reviewer has given me the determination to go through with the very long process of editing and uploading the next two chapters, so here they are! :D

Thank you so very much for my first ever review, TheOneAndOnlz! :D


Mikan-chan Sakura has decided to take everyone shopping! :D
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Oh-So-Lovely-Sumire Shouda, Hotaru Imai, Anna Sugar'n'Spice and 6 others like this.

Hotaru Imai How much money do we each get?
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Mikan-chan Sakura Um… 1000 yen? Sorry, I don't have that much money right now… ^_^;
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Oh-So-Lovely-Sumire Shouda That's fine with me. As long as I get SOMETHING, I don't care how much it is.
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Anna Sugar'n'Spice But Mikan-chan, if you don't have that much money, then why choose to do this now?
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Mikan-chan Sakura Because… Just 'cause I feel like it, I guess! ^_^
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KokoRULEZ Does this include boys?
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Mikan-chan Sakura I guess, if you want to come! :)
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KokoRULEZ YESHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! :D
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Kitsu-kun :D Cool! I'm SOOOO coming! :D
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MochuMochu I'm coming too… But only for the money, okay? It's not like I'm wimpy enough to enjoy going
shopping with a bunch of girls…
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Nonoko Puff'o'Smoke You're just saying that! Really, you're just a big softy inside!
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Anna Sugar'n'Spice Yeah, totally right!
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MochuMochu Hey!
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Ruka Nogi Leave him alone. :)
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Mikan-chan Sakura Yeah, he's not worth the fuss. :P
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Hotaru Imai You constantly accuse me of being mean… Look who turned the tables.
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Natsume Hyuuga Hypocrite.
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Mikan-chan Sakura What?
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Natsume Hyuuga You're so stupid you don't even know what 'hypocrite' means.
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Mikan-chan Sakura Don't call me stupid, stupid! :(
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Natsume Hyuuga Idiot.
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Mikan-chan Sakura Mean!
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Natsume Hyuuga Ugly.
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Mikan-chan Sakura Fox!
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Natsume Hyuuga Cow.
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Hotaru Imai Let's move on before the words get ruder.
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Oh-So-Lovely-Sumire Shouda Good idea!
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Ruka Nogi Natsume, are you going?
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Natsume Hyuuga … Why did that get so many likes?
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Ruka Nogi
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Natsume Hyuuga … Well, I guess I'm going if you are.
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Ruka Nogi Well… I might… Since I'm free…
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Natsume Hyuuga Since Imai's going, you mean.
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Ruka Nogi No!
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Mikan-chan Sakura Seriously? :O
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Oh-So-Lovely-Sumire Shouda Oh no! My Ruka-kun! He's been stolen! T_T Curse you, Imai-san! D:
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Hotaru Imai That doesn't sound so scary when you talk of me so respectfully.
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Oh-So-Lovely-Sumire Shouda URGH!
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Hotaru Imai That's so pathetic, it sounds like something Mikan would say.
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Mikan-chan Sakura Oi! Don't compare me to Permy! She's horrible and mean and ugly!
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Natsume Hyuuga For once, I agree with you, Polka.
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Hotaru Imai Me as well.
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KokoRULEZ Aww, don't be so mean to her, guys! :D
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Oh-So-Lovely-Sumire Shouda Koko! Don't say that with a ':D' at the end! It makes it look like you're enjoying it!
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KokoRULEZ
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KokoRULEZ :D
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Oh-So-Lovely-Sumire Shouda FINE! You know what? I'm LEAVING!
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Oh-So-Lovely-Sumire Shouda has signed out.

Kitsu-kun 19 people like the fact that she's leaving? When she reads this, she's gonna be… Ouch. Let's just say I wouldn't want to be standing next to her. :D
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KokoRULEZ People, get ready for BLAST OFF! :O
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Mikan-chan Sakura Come on, don't be mean.
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Natsume Hyuuga Again with the hypocrisy, I see.
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Mikan-chan Sakura Shut up! What does that even mean, anyway?
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Natsume Hyuuga Figure it out yourself, idiot.
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Mikan-chan Sakura Waaah! Hotaru? Hotaru? Tell me, Hotaru!
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Hotaru Imai Like the sadistic ball of burning fire says, figure it out by yourself. I'm not wasting my precious time helping you look a word up in the dictionary.
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Natsume Hyuuga Oi.
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Hotaru Imai No offence, obviously.
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Natsume Hyuuga Yeah right.
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KokoRULEZ Woah, woah! Break it up, you two! You're killing me here! :D
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Hotaru Imai If we're killing you, then why the smiley face?
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KokoRULEZ … :D
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MochuMochu You're an idiot, man. Just shut up and let the cold freaks have their argument.
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Hotaru Imai Cold freaks?
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Natsume Hyuuga Way to go, Mochiage. You just earned yourself a free ticket to hell, courtesy of moi.
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Mikan-chan Sakura Stop hassling him! Meanies!
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Hotaru Imai You can hardly call this hassling, Mikan. I've done much worse than this before.
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Mikan-chan Sakura Gulp… Please don't talk about that. It's not my fondest memory. :(
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Natsume Hyuuga Crybaby.
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Mikan-chan Sakura Am not!
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Natsume Hyuuga Are.
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Mikan-chan Sakura Am not!
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Natsume Hyuuga Are.
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Mikan-chan Sakura Am NOT!
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Natsume Hyuuga Are.
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Mikan-chan Sakura I AM NOT! D:
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Natsume Hyuuga Are.
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Mikan-chan Sakura NO I'M NOT! DX
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Hotaru Imai Honestly, Hyuuga. You're just as childish as she is.
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Natsume Hyuuga
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Natsume Hyuuga … She started it.
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Sorry it's not as good as the other two. But it's here, and that's what matters, right?

... Right?

Oh, who cares. XD The next chapter should be up sometime this evening. ;)