please review, an opinion is all that I am asking.
I'll try to make all canon characters act like they normally would.
because Jidori in now a four year old, he'll be talking "baby talk", I think that would be the appropriate name for it. in his thought he'll be articulate.
"talking" thought/emphasis arrancar
Jidori was now conscious, resting on something very comfortable. But he also had a huge headache. The boy moaned and felt the top of his head to find a large bump there. "Wad I hit?"
Jidori stopped his thought process. 'Wad I hit?' What am I? Four? And why is my voice higher? My head is killing me! I need to stop by Squad Four for something. The boy sat up, rubbing his eyes.
His vision was blurry, but he could still see where he was going. He noticed he was still in his soul reaper's uniform, but nothing out of the ordinary. Until he started looking around. This is not my room. When Jidori looked behind him, he found that he was resting on another blonde boy's chest, who was still sleeping.
The boy looked for a clock and saw it was nine in the morning. He crawled over the stranger and searched for his zanpakutou. Jidori found it in the corner. When he got to it, something clicked. Either Raikrai had gotten bigger, or somehow I've gotten smaller…What the hell happened?!
The third seat of Squad Ten looked for a mirror, which one was on a dresser close by. Jidori walked up to it and jumped, his hands grabbing the edge of it. I hope this thing doesn't tip over. The boy was able to crawl onto dresser and took one good look at himself.
Jidori's right eye started to twitch, his mouth wide open in disbelief. His arrancar soon materialized. "Now Jidori, calm down. That guy you were fighting, I've already finished him off. That boy over there volunteered to take care of ya until you turn back to normal. Come now, I'm sure somebody has breakfast ready." The arrancar put his hands on the host's shoulders.
"I…I…I…"
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Kazuma, Ayano, and Detective Tachibana had just gotten done explaining to Genma and Jugo everything Ren had told them at the park when they heard, "I'VE BEEN CHIBIFYED!" This could be heard throughout the entire home.
"Damn, that kid has a set of lungs, don't he?" Ayano complained.
Kazuma stood up. "I'll see if Ren's up. That kid probably woke him up along with checking his hearing." The man walked off.
"I'll join you," Ayano caught up with him.
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The arrancar looked to his left to find their savior, who he knows now as Ren Kannagi, lying on the floor, eyes wide open. "Right. Um, sorry about that." The arrancar gave him a sheepish smile.
The door flew open. "Hey Ren, you up? We heard the scream all the way at the meeting room." A man with dark brown hair and amber eyes entered the room, followed by a high school girl with amber eyes and flaming red hair in an odd green school uniform. Both of them stopped and stared at the arrancar, who also stared at them.
"What? Never seen an arrancar with glowing red, slitted eyes and a stupid looking lightning bolt shaped hair pin before?"
"You're the arrancar that saved Ren? I expected you to be…well, bigger," the girl said sheepishly.
"Not every out of this world powerful beings have to be bloody giants. Hell, in the Menos Grande department, the smaller the more powerful. Now I'm sure my host is hungry, how about some breakfast? Please?"
"Sure. Ren, get dressed and bring them to the meeting room."
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Jidori sat next to Ren and his arrancar, barely touching the food laid out before him. The arrancar already explained everything they needed to know about soul reapers, arrancars, and Soul Society, as well as what took place before their arrival.
"Wow, you sure jinxed yourself there, Jidori was it?" Ayano was first to speak.
"Shut up! Dis is not cool! And pwease don't tweat me like a child! I hate be'in dis age again!" Jidori was on the verge of tears when the arrancar brought him in close in a brotherly fashion.
"Um, what's his problem?" Ren asked this time.
"Blame his older sis on this one. She basically turned him into a bobble-head doll with her…cough…overly large chest assets. Add in the fact his older brother turned cold towards him at that age, he really doesn't have many good memorys."
"Wouldn't there be some sort of rescue mission for him?" Ren asked again.
"Naturally. Jidori can open up portals to any dimension he wishes as long as he knows the coordinates. No dimension is out of his reach. Unfortunately, that includes his home, the King's realm. That is the main problem. His royal birth is only a secondary thing."
"Who would come and would we have to fight them?" Jugo Kannagi, the current head of the Kannagi clan, asked this time.
"Most likely no, depending on if you're unwilling to give him up or not. If you do not want to risk total destruction, you wouldn't bother fighting. Especially since I have twenty percent of my power available compared to my usual one percent. As far as who would come and get him, I have two guesses for leaders, each with the same three subordinates. My host's captain, Toushiro Hitsugaya with his lieutenant, Rangiku Matsumoto. The other being his older brother, the captain of Squad Three and heir to ruling Soul Society, Kagai Tomoshibi with his lieutenant Izuru Kira. The three same subordinates would be Jidori's friend, Iyou, and two people on his hate list, Tsubaki and Rei."
"When can we expect them to arrive?" Kazuma spoke before Ayano.
"Most likely tonight. If Jidori's knowledge is correct, you're a mercenary. The captain's may pay you to help. If you know what's good for ya, you will not help." The arrancar narrowed his eyes at Kazuma.
"Don't worry. Though I don't take threats very well." Kazuma sent a small wave of wind to cut the arrancar on his right cheek.
Everyone could hear the wind scratching at the arrancar, but no cut appeared. Everyone seemed a little surprised by this. Arrancar smiled. "What's the matter? Your wind will never get through my iron skin. But my ceros will get through your wind defense." Ten red balls surrounded Kazuma.
"Enough! Both of you! Settle down, dis is not helping me!" Jidori yelled, still on the verge of tears. Arrancar made his charging ceros disappear. "Good. Man, I'm so helpless!" The now four year old Jidori started to cry, and no one tried to comfort him.
Ren shifted closer to the boy after five minutes gone by and put his hand on his junior's head, making him look into Ren's green eyes. "Don't worry. I promised your arrancar I'll take care of you, and that includes protecting no matter what." Ren smiled.
Jidori nodded and hugged the elder boy as his arrancar disappeared.
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At the park…
Kisuke Urahara already had five gigais out. It was night, so no one was out. The Senkai Gate soon opened to show the rescue party. "Glad you can make it. Here's directions for a house from here."
Kagai took the piece of paper the eccentric genius held out. "Nice doing business with you."
"My only regret is not being able to research the area. Good luck."
kinda boring, I know, but the story needed this to move on with the plot
I most likely won't post another chapter until I get a review, I feel like I'm talking to myself here.
