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Chapter 2

Once we got home t went to the kitchen. I took out a packet of ramen noodle soup from the cupboard. I poured the packet of ramen in a pot, filled with hot water and placed it on the stove. I picked up a spoon from the sink and stood over the pot. I propped my elbow up and put my head on my hand. I sighed and stirred the ramen mindlessly. "I'm excited about our mission." Shiina said after a few minutes of silence. "Yeah. I am to." I replied. Our door was suddenly and I dropped the spoon and spun towards the door. I turned my right arm in to the blade of a scythe. My blade was jet black with red on the tip and it had a jagged red line in the middle, curving upwards. The person shouted "BOW DOWN TO ME PESENTS! YOUR GOD HAS ARRIVED!" I raced out of the kitchen and positioned my blade in front of me. I charged the person and kicked him in the stomach, making him fly into the wall. I ran over to him and pressed my blade to his neck and pressed down, drawing some blood. "Hey get off me will yah." He said. I ignored him and snarled as I heard a soft feminine voice say from beside me, "Blackstar. Please calm down. Please stop yelling." I glanced at the girl who stood there she gasped and I turned my attention back to the boy. I narrowed my eyes and Shiina pulled me off him. I turned my arm back and the boy stood up. I stood next to Shiina ready to attack if needed. Five more people walked in and the boy yelled "I am Blackstar! Tsubaki's meister! Since I'm the bigger man here, I won't kill you for attacking your god." I raised my eyebrow and rolled my eyes. I looked over to them and narrowed my eyes.

She was fairly petite; she looked between fourteen to fifteen years of. She wore a trench coat with a cloak-like, a white blouse with a yellow sweater vest, a red plaid skirt, and black boots with white buckles, and white gloves. Her hair is ash blonde and it was in very childish pigtails, she had large olive green eyes. I noticed her under developed chest.

I glanced at the other boy who stood by the girl.

The boy had white hair swept to one side, and red eyes. He was grinning slightly, showing off his pointed teeth. He wore a yellow and black jacket with buttons going down the front. Around his head was a sweatband that has a sticker with the words "SOUL EATER" on it and a round logo featuring a red-lipped mouth bearing pointed fangs surrounded with the letters 'E-A-T.' He wore a pair of maroon pants, and yellow and black sneakers with a pattern on the soles resembling shark-like teeth.

I looked over to other three people that stood there.

One of the girls had dark blonde hair that reaches her mid-back, dark blue eyes, and tanned skin. She has a smaller breast size than the other girl who stood on the other side of the boy, though she was much taller. Both of the girls wore cowgirl outfits: A tight sleeveless red turtleneck belly shirt with a white tie, cowboy hat and black high-heel boots. However, she had on long jeans and also wears two silver bracelets on each wrist. Also there was subtle difference in their hats. Her hat has rims that slant forward.

She was frowning and glaring at me.

The other girl was giggling like an idiot.

She had chin-length, bright blonde hair with bangs, light blue eyes and she had bigger breasts than both of the other girls but was slightly smaller than the raven haired girl. She also wore a tight, red, sleeveless, turtleneck belly shirt with a white tie, cowboy hat and black, high-heel boots. However she wore puffy shorts. Her hat has rims that are in a perfect curve.

The boy standing in-between them looked like he was about to freak out.

He had black hair with three white lines that cut across the left side of his hair, stopping in a completely straight line along the front and back of his head. His eyes were two different shades of yellow, ringing around his pupil. The outside ring is a bright yellow while the inner ring is a dark yellow, similar to the color of wore a standard black business suit with white rectangles, the rectangles are placed in a manner that is oddly, but completely symmetrical. There are at least six small rectangles along the seam where the sleeves attach to the jacket, and four small rectangles run along the front of his jacket. His undershirt was a formal white dress shirt, and a metallic skull rests under his collar.

The boy started yelling something about symmetry and yelled "this house is unsymmetrical! Fix it now! This house must be symmetrical!" I ignored him as the two girls standing next to him said "Its ok kid. Just picture something symmetrical." I rolled my eyes and he stared up at Shiina and I. "you two are perfectly symmetrical!" I sighed as he kept staring at us. I felt awkward. I looked over to the girl who was said to be Tsubaki.

She was a tall and looked about sixteen or seventeen years old. She wore a pale yellow, sleeveless outfit with a skirt end that has a slit down the side with a bright yellow star emblazoned on the right side of the chest. She also had on a dark brown scarf and a tight dark brown stocking on her right leg starting just above the knee and white boots, she wore a sash. She had long black hair tied up in a ponytail and large indigo eyes. She wears grey and black bandages on her arms from the shoulder down, and wears a sweatband with a star symbol on it on each of her wrists.

I looked at the boy I had attacked earlier and he was standing by the white haired Black Star is a boy and they were talking about something.

He looked thirteen to fifteen years of age. He had bright blue spiky hair, with the spikes sticking in out in the manner of a star-shape. He was rather short, not that much taller than the girl with the pigtails, but had a well-muscled build and his eyes were green. He wore a sleeveless black shirt with a funnel-like collar, with white trousers that are black from the knee down and just a little short of being full length jeans. On the front of his collar, two short strips of grey material adorned with rivets stretch down from the top of the collar to the breast of his shirt. He has similar strips wrapped around his neck in the form of a scarf, and around his waist in the form of a belt. Rivets were also seen on his pockets and on the ends of his trousers. On his hand, he wears gray fingerless gloves with heavy wrist weights and has a band going across the back of each hand, adorned with a star. His footwear were basic black boots with white tips, with a star shape visible on the toe of each boot. On his right shoulder was a star-shaped tattoo, which was just a shade lighter than his normal skin tone.

I growled and scanned them to see if they could be a potential threat.

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