Hey guys, so before we start to the story I want give special thanks toddcj1990, SeiryuNoAme, Fumetsu Kaji, Guest, windfox90, misteriosayuri, god of all69AnimeFreak69, and fanfic drawer for the reviews.
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SeiryuNoAme
Naruto won't get either the Rinnegan or Kushina's Chakra Chains. But she will have other new abilities and jutsu, which will be revealed in later chapters.
Guest #1
You might have been right about the tense. So that why I decided to start searching for betas, that's if anyone who reads this volunteers to be my beta. Plus to tell you the truth my worst subject is GRAMMAR! But that doesn't stop me from my love of writing stories!
69AnimeFreak69
Kurama is not technically dead, since Naruto traveled back in the past so Kurama is still alive. Plus Kurama won't remember Naruto because, she came from the future and Kurama knows nothing about the future.
fanfic drawer
You said that you disagree with the new coloring of Naruto, but to me it makes sense. Because Kurama transferred his power to her, meaning some of his DNA would be changing some things in her body. Since Naruto's female body is not strong enough to hold in all of that, instead her eyes and hair would change. Basically her eyes and hair is holding in the leftover power that Naruto's body couldn't hold in.
Plus I also edited the other chapters.
1. Naruto was actually nineteen not sixteen
2. I putted the wrong chapter title
The First Kunoichi
Chapter 3
Aka no Kitsune
In the lands of Hi no Kuni, there was a new city formed there called Midori no Machi. It was famous for its beauty and fauna. Many beautiful kauri trees habited in that area, a rare kind of wood outside of Hi no Kuni. Animals of many kinds roamed the lands. The houses and shops there were still new and fresh. A year passed by after the newly formed village was built, they decided to hold a festival, celebrating their first anniversary since the building of their village.
A huge amount of people filled up the streets. Loud noises of drums, music from flutes, and the chattering from the people were all you can hear. Beautiful woven kimonos were being worn during the festival. Many shades of red, yellow, orange, and blue can be seen painted on signs, on kimonos, and on the lights. Merchants were yelling out their products, mothers were holding on their children's hands as they laugh childishly at them, men were out drinking, laughing with their friends. Everyone was happily enjoying the festival behold them.
Two men were walking sideways as the taller man was holding on the shorter man's shoulder. The taller man had tan skin, long dark brown hair and the same dark brown eyes, he was wearing a long red kimono with leaves designs on its sleeves, a forest green obi tied around his stomach, and for footwear he wore a wooden geta. The shorter man had fair skin, unlike the taller one, shaggy white hair, and red eyes with three red markings on his face, two under his eyes, and one on his chin. The light blue kimono he wore, had a dark blue obi, and tops it off; he wore wooden geta like the taller men.
"Oi, Tobirama! Don't look so grumpy and enjoy the festival!" the taller man laughs out loud as he playfully slaps the white haired man's black.
The shorter man trips and as he got back to his feet, an annoyed expression appeared on his face "Nii-san. Why did you have to do that?" he sighed. His brother was too cheerful for him to handle. "Don't forget nii-san that we're in the front lines. So we have to be ready at all time to attack" Tobirama pinched the bridge of his nose as he sighed again.
"I know that, but we haven't been to a festival since… forever!" The elder brother pointed out, and quite childishly considering his age. "Plus we have been fighting too long and right now, I just want to get away from that. His usual cheerful personality slowly changed with a haunted look in his eyes.
Tobirama looked at Hashirama. He knew exactly what his brother was talking about. Many years of fighting had changed their whole clan so much; that all they think about is fighting. Ever since they started walking, they were given a kunai and since then they began their duties as a ninja. He also knew how much nii-san was looking forward to going to the festival.
"Fine, but we're not going to be here all day. Ok."
"Don't worry we're going to have fun. It's going be a long night ahead of us." He grinned at his otouto. Not noticing how wrong that sounded.
"I hope not." Tobirama gave him a wary smile at him as he crossed his arms.
As they walked away, the women behind them were whispering something about 'brother love', 'gay', and many others that were considered disturbing.
~.~
The two young men stopped at every stand looking at their beautifully made products, savoring their handmade foods, and played the games there.
Hashirama turned around to face his brother and as he was about say something, he was interpreted by a loud voice.
"Nooooooooooooo! How dare you!" a voice yelled, it sounded like a man.
Hashirama and Tobirama both quickly made a glance at each other as they rushed to where the voice had come from. A shop came to view as they quickly slammed the door open. The door opened, revealing a strange sight.
A crowd surrounded the table as they yelled rooting for the players. The two opponents sat across the large oval table. The one that sat on the left was an over-large man, wearing a white kimono, long brown hair, and had an angry look on his face.
"How dare you!" it was the same voice that brought them here in the first place.
"Well, it wasn't my fault you lost, so pay up." A long silky voice chirped at the losing man. They looked at the person on the right side. It was a woman! She had fair skin, wearing a long red extravagant looking kimono with a white obi and beautiful sakura designs on its sleeves; the kimono was hung loosely on her as it exposed her large assets and long legs, showing her geta. Her lack of skin covering wasn't the only thing that stands out, it was her long, bright red hair and scarlet-red eyes; a color that was rarely seen, but a beautiful color that truly suited her. A sly smile formed on her face as she continued to stare at large man.
The large man still continued to glare at her but, gave in and took the money he lost to her.
The red-head got up and walked to him, took the money out of his hands and put in her pocket. She walked away, passing the Senju brothers. The way she walked looked like she was floating but, to Hashirama and Tobirama's eyes she was clearly an experience shinobi. They also notice that when she passed by them, she had narrowed her eyes dangerously as if she was saying 'why are you here'.
Once she had left, everyone was oddly smiling.
"Oi, Kenta! She beaten you again!" a man came up to him as he laughed at him.
"Urusai! I really thought I would finally win today." he grumbled.
"Like you're ever going to beat her. She's Aka no Kitsune! There's no way you're ever going to win!" he said with pride in his voice.
'The Red Fox?' the two brothers could only wonder.
"Excuse me, but who's Aka no Kitsune?" Hashirama asked. The whole situation was getting very confusing yet, interesting at the same time.
"Well… she comes here all the time so, basically she's a frequent customer here. For some reason she left earlier than usual…" the man started thinking about what he had said.
"Then what about the name Aka no Kitsune she was given?" Tobirama pointed out.
"Oh, that. Well you see we don't really know her true name so, we gave her a title. And apparently that little name we gave her is now known out Hi no Kuni. Many others made stories of her like 'Hair as red as blood. Eyes that can see your darkest fears' well something like that. She's pretty much a legend here, ever since the building of Midori no Machi. He nodded at the facts.
The two brothers absorbed the information given to them. They were really surprised that how one woman can make a legend of herself especially throughout Hi no Kuni. And what really stood out was that the man said that she left earlier than usual, that probably means that she had sensed them coming. But why would she leave right after they barely came in. She was getting more and more suspicious.
There's only one way to figure it out. They have to follow her. Hashirama looked back at his brother for approval, Tobirama immediately nodded back.
They quickly went out at incredibly fast speed, only the speed of a skilled shinobi. After a couple of miles they finally caught up to her, luckily she only went this far. As they were about to approach her, she disappeared in a puff of white smoke.
'Nani! Where was she?!' they thought.
A shiver went down their spine as the wind blew on their skin. The chilly wind wasn't the only thing they notice, it felt like the temperature in the area went down, as if someone is purposely doing this. The sound of leaves rusting made them finch, as they turned around they saw the same woman they were following.
Her silt fox-like eyes were dead as the cold winter nights. The moonlight shined on her, making her bloody red hair turned pink. The way the wind blew across her, was exposing more of her milky, white skin. Her pink lips were formed into a frown. The blank look she gave them, made it more awkward then it really was.
"Why are you following me?"
Author's Notes
Just a hint for the next chapter. From chapter 2 will be continued in the fourth chapter.
Also I'm looking for a beta so, anyone who wants to be my beta, just let me know. Also please show me your beta profile so; I can know what you're special at.
Reviews would be much appreciated. (-.-)
Hi no Kuni- Land of Fire-Fire Country
Midori no Machi- The city of green
Kimono- traditional Japanese outerwear
Obi- the sash used to tie a kimono
Geta- Japanese slippers or clogs, similar in design to flip-flops/thong sandals but, with a simple wooden sole
Nii-san- formal way of saying 'older brother'
Otouto- younger brother
Shinobi- ninja
Urusai- Shut up!
Aka no Kitsune- The Red Fox
