I don't own Naruto or any of the characters Masashi Kishimoto does
"... we want to adopt Naruto. " Said the 3rd woman. " Thats not all..." Kyuubi points to the 2nd woman, " what do u want with Naruto? " She ask(a/n) bet u didn't expect that) "I want to train him and pass my sword down to him". She said in a monotone voice. "hmm... You have my permission, but any harm that comes to MY kit and I will have your heads goddess or not. " the Kyuubi said. "CAN Y'ALL NOT TALK LIKE I AIN'T HERE" Naruto yelled. "Sorry Naruto-kun, now we would like to ask you a question," Asked the 3rd woman"we would to adopt you. " Naruto began crying "really... your not going to beat me are you? " "Heavens no Naruto who would hurt a sweet child such as you? " Asked the 1st lady. "Everybody even the ninja beat me" Said Naruto. Suddenly a huge amount of KI was felt by everybody. The 2nd woman began to teleport to the village. "Stop their not worth it Shini-chan will handle it. " Said the 1st lady. "Well way do you say Naruto, will u let us adopt you? " Asked the 3rd lady. "Hell yes, I will make you all proud Dattebayo! " Naruto shouted. "We will leave for the silver haired woman world first. " Said the 3rd lady.
Thanks everybody who read this. This is my first story and I'm a little shy about it. Pls tell me what I can improve on to help my story.
The identities of the woman will be out shortly a hint though the 1st and 3rd woman are from the same world.